So is this gonna try to be another girls life or something? I mean, there is pretty much nothing here, except for the novel at the beginning I skimmed through which sex scene could have been improved by being interactive and the prologue could be shortened a bit unless this really is a deep focus on story and quests in which case be careful with simulation aspects as you might end up pleasing no one.
If your gonna have clothes make it so I don't have to wander back and forth between my wardrobe all the time, it's busy work and instead just make the clothes add stats or something, it's a classic crutch I've seen devs use so many times, they add tons of JPGS from fashion magazines that do nothing but are easy to implement.
As someone else mentioned, if you are a criminal, take it into account in your storytelling, you likely would have friends who are also criminals, access to stuff and skills you used during your past. Otherwise why even?
Finally since you opened a Patreon I would like to know what your release schedule is like and if you got any specific big features you intend you must have done by x period of time. Something I normally don't care about with hobby projects but ya'know, you made this a monetary thing so I'll treat it as such.