Ren'Py Boss Of The Gym [v0.2] [Dazman34]

[Xxrizz]

the way everything is presented in this game no idea how this guy is gonna be boss of the gym everyone is bad towards him and is gonna be femdom oriented by the devs words i think and wtf with the advertisment of season 2 if this content is season 1 then where the in the actual f are the episodes or chapters omg ...very bad start honestly disapointing ##

 

[Nimbus Commando]

Netori so damn based but the MC seems like such a pathetic bitch .

 

[Dr.JD]

Models are great, but ntr is not my thing. Good luck

 

[uiosi]

Game is ok... Maybi introduse hidden galery before you finish game...
All in all renders are realy nice. Compress them before relising.
Instapop or somting is in rusian... cind of inconvinient...
Story is 'belivable' especialy since you are not some f macho dude taht evry girl just lays with you... So dont mind others that cirtisize the story. It's nice story, has nice flow and belivable. I dont realy get what at home thinking was about. Dose not seem to afect anything. Also some things as look at ass of boss why not, what's the point of looking at gym?
Some things are non concequence i gues. Strrange but ok. Also sems like protagonist will have colorful life. Cant wait for continuation

 

[MissBumhole]

Might as well mark this as abandoned.

 

[Dazman34]

Friends, I have posted an update for the second season on Patreon for paid subscribers!
I’ll post them for free ones a little later!

Thanks everyone for your attention!

 

[MissBumhole]

I'm not sure if English is your first language or not. I have a genuine question. But why can't you just call your updates an episode instead of of 'season'. Because a 'season' is like a set of of episodes or events.

Your 'first season' is just like a quick demo episode, and you're going straight to "Welcome to the second season of Boss of the Gym, bros! YOOOOO!"

The very first episode was so short that I don't think it's enough to call it an episode, nor a season. But it's still passable to call these updates 'episodes' since that's more believable.

I'm not trolling you or anything. I feel like you have a lack of vocabulary understanding on certain meanings of things. Just call it a second episode.

 

[MissBumhole]

Dude, I just played your "0.2 update", and you CANNOT call that an update if it's a reverse of it. You're reconstructing your game into more of a dedicated visual novel with choices. The story went BACKWARDS, and people can finish 0.2 faster than they can finish 0.1.5

You even took out the sexy scene with that blond who gave us a thighjob (intercrural sex). So on terms of content, IT WENT BACKWARDS. Your patreon posts were amping up 'season 2', and then you show previews, and no one got any of that content.

I remembered when your patreon was getting $100+ a month, and now when you released 0.2 to them, you went down to $66, because you immediately lost the trust from the people. THERE WAS NO NEW CONTENT.

You completely lost the plot. You shouldn't have released anything until you actually added more to your game. All you did was reconstruct it to a visual novel format, there was less story with 0.2, you took out an erotic scene with the blonde, and at the end of the 'update' was you just giving your excuse as to why people got fuck all.

Mods/admins, do not take out my post. This is constructive criticism. I had a bit of hope for this guy, and he clearly lost the plot. There is no direction. They're completely indecisive on what they're doing to their game. I WITNESSED them lose patrons after their 'update'. They falsely lead people into thinking there WAS going to be more content, and then pulled the rug.

You cannot charge people for that. Refund your patrons and actually have an organise roadmap on what you're doing with your indie sex game. From the stunt you just did, this seems to be from you being scared that this was going to be marked as abandoned, so you just had to put something out.

 

[Dazman34]

Hello! Thank you for your feedback, it is very important to me! I am sorry that you had a negative experience with the game. At the moment, version 0.2 that you played is only 30% of the entire episode that will be available in the end.


I didn't quite understand what you meant here. It's still in First Episode. ( ver 0.1.5)

You even took out the sexy scene with that blond who gave us a thighjob (intercrural sex).

Regarding the Patreon, the $70 peak doesn't allow me to develop the game full-time or to spend more time to release content faster. Since people subscribe and wait, I want to give them content that is already available and complete, so they can see the progress. All posts and previews on Patreon exclusively used scenes from the second episode and were part of the 30% that was available. Overall, the second episode is more complete than what was shown, but that was the part I could show to patrons.


Come join me on Discord and we can discuss the development in more detail and what's coming next. I would be more than happy! Thank you again for your feedback!

Dude, I just played your "0.2 update", and you CANNOT call that an update if it's a reverse of it. You're reconstructing your game into more of a dedicated visual novel with choices. The story went BACKWARDS, and people can finish 0.2 faster than they can finish 0.1.5

You even took out the sexy scene with that blond who gave us a thighjob (intercrural sex). So on terms of content, IT WENT BACKWARDS. Your patreon posts were amping up 'season 2', and then you show previews, and no one got any of that content.

I remembered when your patreon was getting $100+ a month, and now when you released 0.2 to them, you went down to $66, because you immediately lost the trust from the people. THERE WAS NO NEW CONTENT.

You completely lost the plot. You shouldn't have released anything until you actually added more to your game. All you did was reconstruct it to a visual novel format, there was less story with 0.2, you took out an erotic scene with the blonde, and at the end of the 'update' was you just giving your excuse as to why people got fuck all.

Mods/admins, do not take out my post. This is constructive criticism. I had a bit of hope for this guy, and he clearly lost the plot. There is no direction. They're completely indecisive on what they're doing to their game. I WITNESSED them lose patrons after their 'update'. They falsely lead people into thinking there WAS going to be more content, and then pulled the rug.

You cannot charge people for that. Refund your patrons and actually have an organise roadmap on what you're doing with your indie sex game. From the stunt you just did, this seems to be from you being scared that this was going to be marked as abandoned, so you just had to put something out.