VN Ren'Py Bounded Together [v1.0 EA] [Bounded Team]

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Sunedosa

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Wtf, the sequence of everything is all jumbled, one second your sister is about to impale herself but the next she's prodding her tonsils with "mc's" tool. Needs a do over or 2.
 

tsunku

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uhm the script leaves out a lot of story.. looking at images he fucks his sister while his mom watches, then later his mom has fun.. oh yeah haha his penis magically grew longer.. haha btw not knocking on the game, was enjoying it using the relation mod. also did it with original to see if it showed what i noticed, it didn't... oh well at least i have an idea what's to come soon hehehe
 

Darth Vengeant

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Mommy with small tits? What the world has gone to....
it's called being realistic. A great many mothers are petite and have small breasts. This fad that all moms in these games need to be thick and large chested has always been ridiculous imo. It's nice to see this, we need more of it.

Now, if we could just get dev's to stop with the 12+ inch and or mega-dicks it would be even better.
 

Glaz64

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I'm guessing author hasn't read another adult VN in the last 5 years, because the suggestions below have all been addressed repeatedly during that period. regardless, here are some initial suggestions.

If you're going to tag it as incest, then it kinda needs incest, or an easy way for the reader to add/convert it to incest . Patch incoming?

Stop calling him MC, and allow us to change his name.

Scrap that font, it's harder to read than it needs to be. Using a random font is not a good way to stand out, the common fonts are common because they reliably present the text in a legible and readable format.

Probably due to writer not being a native English speaker, it could do with a grammar/spelling check. For example:
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"Katie went to her roommate's room, and as she slowly pulled the blanket back, she was amazed at the size of his cock."

Would be a cleaner and grammatically correct sentence.
 

Saint Blackmoor

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Bounded Together [v1.0 EA] Relationship and Playability mod


This mod allows you to define a few of the relationships, as well as name the Mc. It also fixes a few grammar and spelling issues to help improve playability. (This is intended to be a temporary fix, until the developer does another release.)

Features
Corrected relationships.
Assigned different colors to the characters for their names. Changed the way "inner thoughts" were presented.
Spelling and punctuation correction.

Compatibility
Only works with this version.

How to Install
Unzip the file, put the "script" in the "game folder" in the game directory, and overwrite.

Notes:
Can stay with Landlay, Roommate if you like ;)
I didn't correct much of the dialogue's grammar; it needs a complete rewrite, in my opinion.
Didn't rearrange the shuffled images; the developer needs to do that.

Thanks to OhWee for his valuable input. :giggle:
 
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jasad

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Bounded Together [v1.0 EA] Relationship and Playability mod


This mod allows you to define a few of the relationships, as well as name the Mc. It also fixes a few grammar and spelling issues to help improve playability. (This is intended to be a temporary fix, until the developer does another release.)

Features
Corrected relationships.
Assigned different colors to the characters for their names. Changed the way "inner thoughts" were presented.
Spelling and punctuation correction.

Compatibility
Only works with this version.

How to Install
Unzip the file, put the "script" in the "game folder" in the game directory, and overwrite.

Notes:
Can stay with Landlay, Roommate if you like ;)
I didn't correct much of the dialogue's grammar; it needs a complete rewrite, in my opinion.
Didn't rearrange the shuffled images; the developer needs to do that.

Thanks to OhWee for his valuable input. :giggle:
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Myrroddin

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I think someone has mentioned this, but just in case: I'm confused by the Gallery. It has content that isn't in the game. Did I miss something, or is that what other people have seen, too?
 

OhWee

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I think someone has mentioned this, but just in case: I'm confused by the Gallery. It has content that isn't in the game. Did I miss something, or is that what other people have seen, too?
It's extra artwork for now. There are also some renders in the images folder that haven't been added to script.rpy as of yet. Since this is early access, essentially the developer is putting things into place for later.

There's also a full story draft in the /game folder, but it's probably best to not read that until the developer makes more renders to incorporate into the story. Cuz, spoilers...
 
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WangOut

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It's great and all that Steam allows Adult games on it's platform now, but at some point they have to put into place rules that stop crap like this from be able to be listed for money.
- Minimum 2-3 hour length in playtime
Any adult VN game that is less then 2 hours long is; in my personal opinion, garbage and in the case of placing it on Steam nothing more then a scam/cash grab.
- Spell-checking
So many adult VNs made by both English and non-English speakers seem to fail basic English or how to utilise spell checker. How is revising your own work not a thing.
- Grammar checking
- ZERO Early Access
So many adult VNs get abandoned; yes other non adult games get abandoned too but adult VNs are worse, or left in "Early Access" that they are essentially abandoned.
Early Acces on Steam is great for indie devs but to honestly it is abused for quick cash grabs by scum.
 
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