tretch95
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- Nov 5, 2022
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Completely misses the mark.
If these people were locked in an unknown location and forced to have sex against all norms, you would expect a dramatic experience of shame, fear, denial, alienation.
But the exact opposite is happening. They're instantly loving it, behaving completely irrational. As if getting drugged, abducted, imprisoned in a claustrophic basement, and forced to have sex with close relatives was some kind of reward, like a free weekend in a wellness spa.
Wasted opportunity for a potentially intriguing story.
If these people were locked in an unknown location and forced to have sex against all norms, you would expect a dramatic experience of shame, fear, denial, alienation.
But the exact opposite is happening. They're instantly loving it, behaving completely irrational. As if getting drugged, abducted, imprisoned in a claustrophic basement, and forced to have sex with close relatives was some kind of reward, like a free weekend in a wellness spa.
Wasted opportunity for a potentially intriguing story.