VN Ren'Py Completed Boxed In [v1.0] [badbod]

[rakiperv]

It probably showed in the writing - she's my fav too! (Read my reply to the next quote for your answer.)

It shows. I can't even rationalize why, but Kel's sections were so fun. Not only the porn aspect, but the character as a whole.I loved all of her interactions, but her moments with the MC were *cheff Kiss* magnifique.

I'm very tempted to include that family in this one, too - not as the main characters, but in one of the story arcs I'm thinking about doing.

Your game was just great. It was direct, perfectly contained, enjoyable, did not overstayed.
It was concluded so satisfyingly well that I should not want more.
Yet I want. I would love to se this story branch out, and being able to make a bunch of different choices (and I would chose Kelly a bunch of times, cause she's just so fun)! But I also don't want, cause it's just great the way it is.

Will it have incest? Damn right it will!

I don't dislike incest in a porn game, actually I really like, but it's usually so lazily written that I have to turn my brain off to enjoy.
I don't know what kinda of brain washing you did that all that stuff sounded pretty reasonable (?) Kinda realistic even.

BTW, do you have experience writing characters?

 

[JumboLothario]

Way better than I expected. Sad it's so short, but happy it wrapped up in a good way.

 

[impostorisadalawa]

I'm half way through the game and all i can say is not even the great alexander can cut this family knot. Twists after twist bruh.