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I put up a link for a mac build in the OP. If it functions properly I'd love to know. Otherwise, I hope that it does and that you find something you enjoy about the game.
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I rarely comment on threads and not usually a fan of NTR games but this game struck a chord with me which I was not expecting. Something about Claire's ability to be able to shift between completely dominating and using her body as simply a tool to complete the task at hand and then being a submissive/obsessed cumbucket for this one guy is incredibly fascinating, largely due to your writing I must say.
Also as a marvel fan (which I'm assuming this is very loosely based on), the tie-in that she's a black widow gave so much context that this honestly feels like a plausible situation that I could see playing out with one of these characters.
Claire's constant belittling of the sentinel and the doc (btw pretty sure it's doc, not dock, there's no k in doctor) is hilarious, and while some on the thread don't care for the two having sex, I kind of imagined it as being a part of some deal that they made when they first started working together, and that despite the fact that she'll kill them as soon as she has a reason too, she's not the type of person to go back on her word and that somewhere in that deep dark abyss that is her feelings for these two cucks, their unrequited love/lust allows the side of herself that she can never show to her husband be seen by at least one person.
Now from what I understand about your plans for the game mechanics, you're planning on having the gameplay through the husband's perspective, but it would be interesting to see maybe a sidequest (or maybe this doesn't even need to be canon )where you play the game from her perspective and she has to do regular housewife things for a day, running errands and whatnot. The twist is that for whatever reason her husband jokingly made her promise that she make everyone as happy as possible or something along those lines so she feels obligated to comply with him somehow convincing herself that this is what her husband asked for. I don't know, I just really like how she is obsessed with needing to satisfy and predict every need he has or will have, even if she has to fuck 100 men to fulfill she at least thinks that's what he wants.
Also for the case of the file size, if you can't figure out a way to make it smaller, I would recommend trying and doing what NLT Media does for the genesis order where they upload an update only download so users just have to copy and paste over the game files. I know this might be tedious but in the beginning stages of trying to get your game more popular and noticed and seen as more than just your average NTR game, you're gonna want to make it as easy as possible for players to be able to access the content and start playing.
Anyway, great game, can't wait to see where it goes.
Also as a marvel fan (which I'm assuming this is very loosely based on), the tie-in that she's a black widow gave so much context that this honestly feels like a plausible situation that I could see playing out with one of these characters.
Claire's constant belittling of the sentinel and the doc (btw pretty sure it's doc, not dock, there's no k in doctor) is hilarious, and while some on the thread don't care for the two having sex, I kind of imagined it as being a part of some deal that they made when they first started working together, and that despite the fact that she'll kill them as soon as she has a reason too, she's not the type of person to go back on her word and that somewhere in that deep dark abyss that is her feelings for these two cucks, their unrequited love/lust allows the side of herself that she can never show to her husband be seen by at least one person.
Now from what I understand about your plans for the game mechanics, you're planning on having the gameplay through the husband's perspective, but it would be interesting to see maybe a sidequest (or maybe this doesn't even need to be canon )where you play the game from her perspective and she has to do regular housewife things for a day, running errands and whatnot. The twist is that for whatever reason her husband jokingly made her promise that she make everyone as happy as possible or something along those lines so she feels obligated to comply with him somehow convincing herself that this is what her husband asked for. I don't know, I just really like how she is obsessed with needing to satisfy and predict every need he has or will have, even if she has to fuck 100 men to fulfill she at least thinks that's what he wants.
Also for the case of the file size, if you can't figure out a way to make it smaller, I would recommend trying and doing what NLT Media does for the genesis order where they upload an update only download so users just have to copy and paste over the game files. I know this might be tedious but in the beginning stages of trying to get your game more popular and noticed and seen as more than just your average NTR game, you're gonna want to make it as easy as possible for players to be able to access the content and start playing.
Anyway, great game, can't wait to see where it goes.
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The "K" in Dock is very much intentional and is a testament to how important I felt his name meant to the overall scheme of things. Perhaps I should've given him a better name but I have no regrets except if I ever have to write "Doctor Dock" at some point... *shudder*
You summarized Dock and Sentinel's value splendidly. If it weren't for their ability to show Claire's other side, they'd probably be dead already. The game will indeed be told through the MC's perspective but it will always be with perfect knowledge. The plan (still building everything) is to also see Claire's actions as well. What she chooses to do and why she chooses to do it is so accurately described by your suggestion that I wonder if my concept is unique enough, maybe we're just kindred spirits...
As for the file size, distributing the game as you suggested had already crossed my mind when my initial release was 2.3GB and saw no other way. Managing file size and distribution is something I've been slaving over since I first posted the game.
Thank you for your kind words and wonderful insight!
This is seriously a great game. I thoroughly enjoyed it. I have played lots of NTR games but this one feels fresh, different and satisfying. NTR stories usually give me both pleasure and pain. Pleasure from sexual act and pain from betrayal act. But while playing this game I didn't feel pain at all. Reason is, so far there is no emotional betrayal in this game. For me emotional betrayal is bigger threat than physical one to a partner. One can forgive physical betrayal but not emotional one.
Also what I found interesting is, even from Claire's pov this is an NTR game. Usually it is husband who feels insecure over prospects of loosing his wife to someone else. It is husband who fights for wife's fidelity. It is husband who is cucked. Here it is reverse. Here wife is cucked (husband is not cucked here as he doesn't know or see his wife's sexual act with other men). Claire has to live in constant fear of loosing husband to other female. So this seems like a 'Will wife looses her husband to other female or not?' kind of a game. And yeah this is indeed a great game. I have to thank the dev for give us this game.
I do have few questions though..
1. How bigger next updates will be? How much time will be consumed aprox for delivering future updates?
2. How big this game will be from story pov?
3. Will there be a possibility where Claire emotionally betrays MC?
4. Will there be any other female characters other than Claire and Aika whom MC can pursue emotionally or just physically?
Thank you agian..
Also what I found interesting is, even from Claire's pov this is an NTR game. Usually it is husband who feels insecure over prospects of loosing his wife to someone else. It is husband who fights for wife's fidelity. It is husband who is cucked. Here it is reverse. Here wife is cucked (husband is not cucked here as he doesn't know or see his wife's sexual act with other men). Claire has to live in constant fear of loosing husband to other female. So this seems like a 'Will wife looses her husband to other female or not?' kind of a game. And yeah this is indeed a great game. I have to thank the dev for give us this game.
I do have few questions though..
1. How bigger next updates will be? How much time will be consumed aprox for delivering future updates?
2. How big this game will be from story pov?
3. Will there be a possibility where Claire emotionally betrays MC?
4. Will there be any other female characters other than Claire and Aika whom MC can pursue emotionally or just physically?
Thank you agian..
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Reducing the file sizes is something I've had to learn on the fly just recently. The initial release was more than twice that size. I've reduced the quality of the videos as far I could using the software I have available to me without making it look like complete garbage. I will continue to make this a priority but know that this game uses more videos and images than your average game to accomplish the same goal.
1. The next update will not be very big. Once I establish the mechanics and game-flow I want to throw it out there before hard committing and pushing out the content. The next update and the one following it will take the longest to implement because of how many unanswered questions there are. Once I've establish how content will be delivered exactly, updates following that shouldn't take very long. A precise time frame is impossible at this time but I do plan on notifying my discord the moment I have a good idea.
2. I anticipate this game to last about 70 game days at an average of 4 scenes per day. This, of course, is a guess. I don't plan on milking this one especially since I have two other games I'm looking forward to getting done sooner rather than later.
3. No promises, but at this time I have no plans whatsoever involving emotional betrayal initiated by Claire. Despite the theatrics, this game is intended to be fun. I'm not saying you can't have both but doing so would be expecting too much from the player.
4. Definitely yes. It's still too early to be precise or commit to this but the concept is that the player can fully commit to his marriage or (eventually) troll the streets and stick his wiener in stuff. Romantically, there are "plans" for at least two other characters.
Thank you for your kind words. It really means a lot to me. I'd love to tell you more but there's just too many unanswered questions at this time.
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Thank you for taking your time and answering my questions. I am not actually expecting emotional betrayal from Claire. Frankly, I don't want that to happen at all. Like I said this NTR is giving me only pleasure. I want that to continue. I don't want painful side of NTR. I hope I don't have to wait for 4-5 months for little content. Since you are not creating 2D or 3D images and animations and using real porn images and videos, I expect game development to be faster and easier (Since I have zero knowledge about game development I may be completely wrong here with my assumption). Anyway its a great game. I wish you a great success.
Also please change banner as soon as possible otherwise it might scare off possible consumers.
Also please change banner as soon as possible otherwise it might scare off possible consumers.
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Yeah man I feel terrible about that but I had to put her in at the end to make things clear. On the bright side, she's your therapyst moving forward and her schedule is pretty open. (Just be careful, though, cause she comes with a kick)
Of course! Thanks to you as well. I skipped over rendering thinking that using real images would take less time, but there's a reason you don't see games with a lot of image variety, properly photoshopping images and managing videos isn't all that much faster if you're using a lot of images. That said, if it takes me 4 months to update this game I think it's fair to say that I need to invest my time in a different trade. If it takes longer than six weeks for this next update I'll kick my own ass.
That banner. You should've seen the previous one. Things are improving, some slower than others...
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Well that is a great news for me. And well sir, choosing real porn over cg images was the best choice you made. It really breathes fresh air on this website. Also the way you used real images, their placement, their context, and the consistency of images used shows your exceptional skills. Also thanks for choosing JAV over western porn. That was another best choice.
I also have to join in and say good job. This game - well, the intro - is weirdly good. Real porn games/VNs usually feel very disconnected as a story (quite ironically) but somehow, things clicked here correctly in all the important ways. Sure, the plot is ridiculous and the whole intro sets up a quite convoluted scenario, but I really became aware of that only after the intro was over. I think it speaks volumes about the good quality of writing here.
NTR usually isn't even my cup of tea either...but it turns out Claire is my kind of crazy In the end, the only major concern I can think of at this time is with the censorship. In the worst case scenario, it will turn out that you've shot yourself in the foot twice, first when using IRL porn and second when using censored JAVs, as good as they might be. You've worked quite beautifully around it so far, using your images and clips cleverly to serve the plot - and it has to stay this way continuing forward - but I fear I might end up having issues still when, going forward from the intro, there comes a time for, say, Aika to show her goods and I'll get a bunch of pixels.
I'll be definitely looking forward to next updates.
NTR usually isn't even my cup of tea either...but it turns out Claire is my kind of crazy
In the end, the only major concern I can think of at this time is with the censorship. In the worst case scenario, it will turn out that you've shot yourself in the foot twice, first when using IRL porn and second when using censored JAVs, as good as they might be. You've worked quite beautifully around it so far, using your images and clips cleverly to serve the plot - and it has to stay this way continuing forward - but I fear I might end up having issues still when, going forward from the intro, there comes a time for, say, Aika to show her goods and I'll get a bunch of pixels. I'll be definitely looking forward to next updates.
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She poisons her victim and then fucks them to death! I came for NTR and stayed for femdom poison killing from widow! The way she toys with them while simultaneously riding them to death! My dear dev, I love you : )
I came for NTR and stayed for femdom poison killing from widow! The way she toys with them while simultaneously riding them to death! My dear dev, I love you : )
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Thank you so much! People are getting so many different vibes from the game
ETA? Short answer:
I'm not certain but I'll be letting my discord know the moment I have a good idea.
I'm building a few things from scratch right now because I wanted some feedback before choosing how I wanted the game interact with the player. I want to say just shy of six weeks but I don't have anything to compare it to... I'm telling people to check back in two updates as the next one will feature the bare minimum to reveal the mechanics I have in mind (I also will make sure Aika gets in on the action). After that, the content will flow like water.
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Very good intro overall!
I'm glad I don't watch JAV. New faces, new style and models well picked.
With her special twisted loving and caring, I think it would be nice if Claire is more dominant(in bed) with MC.
The best part is how Claire thinks it is only natural that she fuck what she wants, and her husband must not, thus making the plot more exciting by witnessing how mc is slowly corrupted into worshiping his wife and accept all her needs.
If this plot is really leading into making a cuck MC, I think it's better reducing potential romance choices for him, less pussy for MC the depth of wrong desire toward his wife, we can use Claire's jealousy for that. To be honest, it would be more boring if MC got his harem, but it's a good thing that his wife is head over heels for him and other females desire him which is a good thing"plot wise"avoiding your typical sad loser cuck MC hated and stomped by everyone.
I'm glad I don't watch JAV. New faces, new style and models well picked.
With her special twisted loving and caring, I think it would be nice if Claire is more dominant(in bed) with MC.
The best part is how Claire thinks it is only natural that she fuck what she wants, and her husband must not, thus making the plot more exciting by witnessing how mc is slowly corrupted into worshiping his wife and accept all her needs.
If this plot is really leading into making a cuck MC, I think it's better reducing potential romance choices for him, less pussy for MC the depth of wrong desire toward his wife, we can use Claire's jealousy for that. To be honest, it would be more boring if MC got his harem, but it's a good thing that his wife is head over heels for him and other females desire him which is a good thing"plot wise"avoiding your typical sad loser cuck MC hated and stomped by everyone.
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The most exciting part for me is about the MC reaction when finding out the truth about his wife (a rapist, murderer and somehow a whore). He wont take it well.
Writing code still takes the same amount of time. The media will take a shorter amount of time. Remember, he trades (still favorably) time for creating and rendering the models into time used to search the real material.
I do believe making Claire invest herself emotionally (i.e. emotional betrayal) would make the game overall better. I don't mean that Claire would think some other dude is her soulmate and what not. A few kisses here, spending more time with that man (not a lot more time, just more) there, small things but emotional things. I know not everybody will agree, but I do believe it would be better. Not massive, just something like Claire opening a little bit of her heart to another man.
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Thank you very much!
All I can say at this time is that there will be choices that lead down different paths and I'll do my best to make them equally rewarding. There are no plans in place that will portray the the MC as a loser. In this game you have to fight against temptation and avoid the harem at all costs! Not an easy thing to do.
Yeah man sometimes I wonder why I chose this path. If any would-be devs read this: Using real porn is NOT a short-cut! It has it's own charm though...
I hear you loud and clear about emotional investment and I wish I read this before I commented before. There will, indeed, be such things morso to put things in perspective and create dynamic interactions. I think a more accurate way to describe what I mean by "no emotional betrayal" is that there are no plans for writing a path that leads to Claire choosing to leave the MC or developing stronger feelings than she has for him with someone else. I don't consider this a spoiler, in fact, I wrote the intro the way I did in attempt to establish that fact without spelling it out but that just made Claire look more crazy (and I'm fine with that too
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