Ren'Py Abandoned Brazen Sonnet [v3.1] [Tribe]

[GoldBolt]

Let's see...
Did you start a new game?
Sorry that you're having trouble but I can't see how else that could happen. Could you please verify?

No I loaded an old dave, though I guess it probaly would be solved if I start from beginning again, right?

 

[Tribe]

No I loaded an old dave, though I guess it probaly would be solved if I start from beginning again, right?

Correct!

 

[Udoroth]

You cant pick an absolute legend like AIKA and not expect people to pick her over claire

just saying

 

[Csmooth]

Great work so far, looking forward to the future. Real porn games need to use JAV actresses more tbh.

 

[JB08]

Forgot about this game lol. I know I had mentioned some tags were not my thing but I do like IRL porn games and given how they all suck with how random images are, and how this one was quite good, I wanted to stick with it. Glad to see an update and that its not abandoned. Also kind of surprised to see myself mentioned in the changelog lol. Ill play a new game from scratch later on when I get time but I did briefly check out the new choice system, if I can make 1 tiny suggestion lol.. I know the intro stated what Red Purple and Blue choices meant and that there are no words associated with them (which is fine) but you might want to add a FAQ or help section or something in the game in case someone forgets. Most people here play a ton of various games on F95 and regular games off Steam or GOG, indies, etc, and with most updates coming months apart, and with all the various game mechanics and details each game has.. Coming back to this game after some time only to see 3 color pop up might be a bit confusing. I think most would remember thats how choices work but knowing what each color does specifically, who knows.

Honestly its not a big deal. Im only basing this off a few games here that take a few months to come out and ive forgotten names and plot points. Granted, they are more complicated than knowing the meaning of 3 colors when you can just blindly pick and see the dialogue and roll back to see what each color means. Versus replaying a whole game so you can reacquaint yourself with things after 6 months with some other titles lol.

You cant pick an absolute legend like AIKA and not expect people to pick her over claire

just saying

Aika is great but dont underestimate Claire/Kurea Hasumi. She is very underrated.

 

[CookieMonster]

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Had me busting out laughing. Tribe, you wrote some comedy gold again. Gotta praise you for this new update. Now I've got to finish the rest of it.

 

[fishystuff]

cencored? You F kiding me!

 

[JB08]

cencored? You F kiding me!

jav is almost exclusively censored. nothing dev can do about it

 

[Blackader]

Well, there are rare finds of JAV uncensored. I mean really, thats debate last 20 years about it. You make great p0rn, beutiful girls, and what you do next? You spend more hours censoring it, then it took filming it. Its a shame. There is one piece of of very exotic hardware that can remove their censoring, but the job and CPU power needed for it is like more then bitcoin mining. Seen some decensored ones. Its not like original, but still way better then this. Have hardware strong enough to do it, but when you see timer on a 2 hour movie going like 16 hours+ its just ...not worth it...
software needed for it is also very rare find , it uses FCR in reverse mode. Very secretive stuff. That you cant find on open market ..coz you have to use their original software...as i said we debate that for 20 yers now, and finally we have hardware strong enough to reverse it. Coz in the start they claimed its bulletproof. Well, nothing is. XD .. If its man made, we can disassemble it.
Trick is in the layers. And VERY few ppl on this planet understand how to edit video , or even live video properly. For that you need top 10 machine in the world. Ofc all liquid cooled. And dual XT video cars, something in range over 8K euros. How many ppl have that at home? Me and...very few.
But im off topic. Sorry.
So yes, you CAN do something about it, but its very pricey and time consuming. Its more simple to just rewrite whole game using uncensored JAV videos.

 

[brutusbeefcake]

You cant pick an absolute legend like AIKA and not expect people to pick her over claire

just saying

My brother in christ, AIKA took the bog pill whereas I still recognize Hasumi to this day just with age. I'll take her natural look (and unmatched legs) over goblina daz render AIKA any day.

But on the subject of bog pill, hoping Tribe can hit us up with some Yuu Shinoda down the line. Pre-bog anyway. You could bounce coins off that ass.

Speaking of ass - Kanae

Keep up the good work Tribe

 

[Tsusaku]

This is missing Real Porn tag. I founded the game somewhat interesting, looking through tags and dev comments, but then i looked through the images and have seen that it's a real porn (JAV). I do ommit games with this tag, when i want a real porn i just watch a real porn. When i want to play a game i want non real live images animations etc.
It's nothing against the game, it can be great, there are many like that, it's just not my thing. I am sure there are others who don't play games with real porn images and it would save our time, if we know right away. Thank you

 

[Tribe]

You cant pick an absolute legend like AIKA and not expect people to pick her over claire

just saying

Then she's working as intended. You can still resist, though, I believe in you!

Forgot about this game lol. I know I had mentioned some tags were not my thing but I do like IRL porn games and given how they all suck with how random images are, and how this one was quite good, I wanted to stick with it. Glad to see an update and that its not abandoned. Also kind of surprised to see myself mentioned in the changelog lol. Ill play a new game from scratch later on when I get time but I did briefly check out the new choice system, if I can make 1 tiny suggestion lol.. I know the intro stated what Red Purple and Blue choices meant and that there are no words associated with them (which is fine) but you might want to add a FAQ or help section or something in the game in case someone forgets. Most people here play a ton of various games on F95 and regular games off Steam or GOG, indies, etc, and with most updates coming months apart, and with all the various game mechanics and details each game has.. Coming back to this game after some time only to see 3 color pop up might be a bit confusing. I think most would remember thats how choices work but knowing what each color does specifically, who knows.

Honestly its not a big deal. Im only basing this off a few games here that take a few months to come out and ive forgotten names and plot points. Granted, they are more complicated than knowing the meaning of 3 colors when you can just blindly pick and see the dialogue and roll back to see what each color means. Versus replaying a whole game so you can reacquaint yourself with things after 6 months with some other titles lol.

Aika is great but dont underestimate Claire/Kurea Hasumi. She is very underrated.

Many people spoke about the result of that scene but it was your post that parted the clouds for me. NTR for the sake of NTR isn't what we're trying to accomplish here. Thanks again for your feedback.

There's so much work I have to put in as far as UI and menus that it makes my head spin thinking about it. I believe that, with feedback, I can create a unique choice interaction. I hear you about players returning and finding it confusing, but the choices themselves accrue points that are spent on the player's skill tree. It's hard to see at this time but the "no words" tactic I'm trying to employ is an attempt to remove the feeling of "I want to say the right thing" and replace it with a point accruing system. I want to naturally create a system where the players themselves choose to speak in a manner that reflects their goals within the game.

That said, I have a long way to go. The wordless point/choice thing will be tweaked beyond recognition before this game is completed if I had to guess.

Well, there are rare finds of JAV uncensored. I mean really, thats debate last 20 years about it. You make great p0rn, beutiful girls, and what you do next? You spend more hours censoring it, then it took filming it. Its a shame. There is one piece of of very exotic hardware that can remove their censoring, but the job and CPU power needed for it is like more then bitcoin mining. Seen some decensored ones. Its not like original, but still way better then this. Have hardware strong enough to do it, but when you see timer on a 2 hour movie going like 16 hours+ its just ...not worth it...
software needed for it is also very rare find , it uses FCR in reverse mode. Very secretive stuff. That you cant find on open market ..coz you have to use their original software...as i said we debate that for 20 yers now, and finally we have hardware strong enough to reverse it. Coz in the start they claimed its bulletproof. Well, nothing is. XD .. If its man made, we can disassemble it.
Trick is in the layers. And VERY few ppl on this planet understand how to edit video , or even live video properly. For that you need top 10 machine in the world. Ofc all liquid cooled. And dual XT video cars, something in range over 8K euros. How many ppl have that at home? Me and...very few.
But im off topic. Sorry.
So yes, you CAN do something about it, but its very pricey and time consuming. Its more simple to just rewrite whole game using uncensored JAV videos.

If I had the money to buy a computer to do that, to be honest, I'd be paying other people to make this game for me instead. There is some information here that I will certainly look into as I continue my search for a possible solution to reduce censorship, but anyone should be prepared to deal with censorship before downloading this game.

It takes a lot of effort to locate a video that supports an idea or a scene. Finding one that is also uncensored might be worth the time but it would take much longer. And like you said, I'd have to re-write the entire game, having one scene that is suddenly uncensored would diminish the overall quality of the game.

My brother in christ, AIKA took the bog pill whereas I still recognize Hasumi to this day just with age. I'll take her natural look (and unmatched legs) over goblina daz render AIKA any day.

But on the subject of bog pill, hoping Tribe can hit us up with some Yuu Shinoda down the line. Pre-bog anyway. You could bounce coins off that ass.

Speaking of ass - Kanae View attachment 1799007

Keep up the good work Tribe

Yuu Shinoda makes her appearance on day 2. Stay tuned, we're getting there.

This is missing Real Porn tag. I founded the game somewhat interesting, looking through tags and dev comments, but then i looked through the images and have seen that it's a real porn (JAV). I do ommit games with this tag, when i want a real porn i just watch a real porn. When i want to play a game i want non real live images animations etc.
It's nothing against the game, it can be great, there are many like that, it's just not my thing. I am sure there are others who don't play games with real porn images and it would save our time, if we know right away. Thank you

Please check the tags again or whether or not you're properly filtering your tags.

 

[pizbia]

I think Aoi would be a really good pick for a character

 

[Tsusaku]

Please check the tags again or whether or not you're properly filtering your tags.

Ohh, i am speaking about the tags in the first message, with the game info, under spoiler "GENRE". It's missing there.

 

[BoredHornyLurker]

This is an awesome game, it's rare to find a VN with an interesting story and good sex scenes. Usually, it's just good sex scenes and a horrible or cliched story

 

[rasyonel]

Nice story keep it up!

 

[sabanana]

I don't see why you are trying to explain away the ntr in the original post. Wife is still an unfaithfull whore (willingly). The moment she remembered finer details of her life, she should have tried to leave the country with the mc. Or dumped the mc. What is worse, we can't even avoid touching the filthy slag.

Is there any hope of having a decent revenge (on wife and others deserving of it) story as an option? That's the only thing that would make this worth following further.

 

[nxwrw]

qwe

 

[Tribe]

Ohh, i am speaking about the tags in the first message, with the game info, under spoiler "GENRE". It's missing there.

Nice! That was pretty cool of you to explain it to me. It's edited for the next person who comes along. Safe journeys, friend.

I don't see why you are trying to explain away the ntr in the original post. Wife is still an unfaithfull whore (willingly).

It wasn't my intent to explain away the NTR.

The moment she remembered finer details of her life, she should have tried to leave the country with the mc. Or dumped the mc.

At two points during intro the story touched on this by

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My opinion is that what she should have done is whatever is most entertaining for my audience.

What is worse, we can't even avoid touching the filthy slag.

No joke, this is brilliant, and it's going in the game. No exceptions.

Is there any hope of having a decent revenge (on wife and others deserving of it) story as an option? That's the only thing that would make this worth following further.

That depends on how you define decent revenge... The MC is cucking her in her own home and gets a free pass to fuck the first slut he sees and discuss it over tea with her... In her goddamn face. Pretty indecent in my opinion, but we all have different thresholds.

This is written and presented in such a way that it allows the player to formulate their own opinions about what is happening. If there is anything in the game that suggests otherwise, I'll see what I can do about it. This isn't a story about revenge nor will this game go out of its way to even the scales or make light of anyone's choices.

 

[JB08]

Aika scene was nice. Seems like you can just use her as a hole or take it slow, her reactions seems she wasnt expecting it and appreciates it. Is there a chance to romance wholesomely some of these girls, go harem route, or at least pick one to genuinely join our side?