Ren'Py Breeding Visa [Demo] [JellyFluff Games]

[somebodynobody]

The story is too nonsensical, the direness of somehow a population forgot things, but also mothers of these girls telling them about sex stuff, or the ai, waifu, panties, etc. A population being unwilling to have sex vs forgot how.

The big attraction to a game like this would be really good graphics, really well animated scenes with multiple interesting positions/dynamic actions, and the impregnation story of foreign women. The game lacks all of this.

The emptiness of the scenes just feels bad. A nation that has an issue, yet MC isn't going around the streets looking for women, instead it is a few places that have nothing in them, so lifeless.

A game about breeding, the demo has you have to grind stats over many days and it forcing a "stairway to heaven" is pretty silly. It feels like there should have been at least 1 easy lady and 1 harder for the demo. Like having the visa would mean you have to keep stats up if you are to do anything about the birth rate. To finish the demo MC had to spend around a month for this single woman.

A lot of the text seems weirdly standoffish like MC mentions the gym is almost always empty, lady complains about men, but there are no ladies either. This seems to happen in all the conversations where everyone is angry so often. Or third meeting the lady asks what is the most important thing about physical fitness, MC says impressing ladies, and she then complains that is typical of men, but she is in a society that is failing because of literally that not happening... this makes no sense.

Having a demo where you are forced to grind stats that aren't even in use as of now (konbini and tea) is a bad choice.

Also having just obvious bad choices seems weird unless you were going to add like rape as a point to the game.

Got to say the game would probably be better if it followed Haramase sim as a blue print.

Finally the women should be much more interesting since there will be so few. Random gym girl instead of gravure model/music idol/weather woman/actress/etc.

 

[Hyperserver]

meh... i'll give it a try, cause why not. Maybe good, maybe not, but the other games of theirs i've played have been decent, at least. hopefully the grind's not beyond redemption...

oh - you will be sooooooooo disapointed ....

 

[Demoness_Kiss]

oh - you will be sooooooooo disapointed ....

as someone who is playing this as i write this: YES

Long version: 3 girls, a gym-girl who is unpleasant, a book-girl who is even more unpleasant(to be fair to her, MC disturbed her while focused...same for the gym girl, but MC is less annoying with the gym girl) and a socially awkward nerdy cashier girl who is the most pleasant one of the bunch but only the gym-girl has any content

i played this because this theme is one of my most dismissed fetish(Rightful Ownership is much better, and it's abandoned, imagine that) ...but yeah i know how bad the dev is, he is someone who chases cash-grabs instead of developing a community of people that like what he makes.

FYI, Rin talks a lot of shit for someone who is dismissing, ridiculing and overall talking trash to MC who despite being douche-y at best, sounds at least decent to her.

Update 1: Rin goes on and on complaining about men but then she drops this line



for someone who talks shit about her own people(like how men want it easy), she is quite the hypocrite, she wants a man on her own terms(fit, with their ambitions, and hard-workers, which are fair standards BUT...), without ever expressing what she is willing to give back (i don't like this transactional talk, but that's how she talks and i'll stick to it for this situation), and without wanting to be serious(at least with MC), meaning that she wants it easy too.

Update 2, first date: she keeps proving herself to be a hypocrite and it gets worse as i keep playing



Yeah, usually in the WMAF's community, the whole breeding visa is more about finding the "good one to marry(among every single woman in the area)" and impregnating everyone who shows interest into you...but here? it's like just...a basic, grindy dating sim that offer nothing new or niche aside the premise of the game itself. In this genre, girls like Rin are avoided like they can give you herpes by simply being in their proximity. Even if we treat this as a twist in the genre, it doesn't work because Rin is repulsive, she is no different from the most entitled white woman on earth.

I won't review the game(because would be too harsh for a first release) but my playthrough ends here.

 

[drifter139]

okay. after playing through the demo, I have some things I need to say. 1) reduce the grind for Rin. we end up doing strength training way too much. I could understand if it was 3 training sessions and she talks to you again but doing like 4-6 sessions only to be talked down to? it gets boring and repetitive fast. 2) the other girls. I like the shy, introvert girl but the tea girl is kind of bitchy right off the bat even though we don't give her a reason to be. also I assume Yumiko is going to be an LI but having her go full girl boss for asking if she is a virgin kind of makes her unappealing when the idea is to breed women. 3) getting 4 girls pregnant isn't exactly going to result in a population boom. maybe amend the summary to be "meet 4 distinct women and get them pregnant to do your part in helping regrow the population."

 

[Paradox004]

Too much grind/repetition, dude. Even using URM to immediately max my stats (after doing each thing 4 times and deciding it was too much), there's kind of a lot. As far as I can tell, the majority on here don't like sandbox at all, and even the ones who do, don't like bad sandbox games with this much grind/repetition. I think we technically aren't allowed to mention other games, so I'll just say I play a certain school one unmodded/without URM, and it feels better than this. My recommendation? Just cut out all the grind/repetition. Players want to pursue Rin? Each time they go to the Gym, there's a new scene until you're supposed to go to the garden, then her house. Same with the other eventual love interests. Sure, you have to read a book once, or you won't impress Sakura, but you won't have to do it 5+ times. Same with the strength and endurance training for Rin. Just have it progress the 1st or 2nd time at most. (As in, "Maybe if I work on my strength, it'll impress Rin." then you do it once, and she comes over to be like, "Hey, I can tell you've been working out." the next time you go to the gym. If you want realism, just have some text say "A few weeks later.")

I think it's pretty bad when such a short demo feels more grindy/repetitive than some of the completed sandbox games I've played.

Other than that, good enough premise, difference in characters, etc. Maybe some actual sandbox fans can come in and give you better/more specific advice, to win them over at least... but the less grind, the more likely you are to get the rest of us interested.

 

[Paradox004]

2 Ratings. both 1/5.
Both apparently dislike or hate sandbox.

Here's a hint to you: DONT play sandbox games if you don't like them. The tag is there for a reason.

Have you tried it? It sucks. Sure, it's a demo, so maybe it'll be better in a few updates... which is part of why I'm not reviewing it... but it's among the most repetitive I can recall on here. Even with URM to max my stats, it didn't feel good. In fairness, I mostly don't like sandbox... but there are a few I've enjoyed. One in my top 5. So if they're good enough, I won't complain. Maybe this'll get there eventually... but not without feedback, imo. And honest feedback. Which means, right now, saying it's not good.

 

[Nucksal0036]

Stupid game, you keep clicking and looking at the same picture

 

[Jellyfluff]

Thanks for the feedback everyone. Seems like there's a consensus that the game is too easy. I will increase the amount of grind required.

 

[c4145317]

Thanks for the feedback everyone. Seems like there's a consensus that the game is too easy. I will increase the amount of grind required.

Don't forget the unannounced QTEs.

 

[Demoness_Kiss]

Thanks for the feedback everyone. Seems like there's a consensus that the game is too easy. I will increase the amount of grind required.

i think the worst mistake you did here is that the girls are behaving like western girls, complaining and talking shit about men they don't even know, and demanding to get a man who would literally give up all his assets to them, without even trying to earn it. In WMAF-stories, this is what drives the white men to date/interact the asian women: the fact that asian women are more traditional, they do want a man who take care of them but they know they must earn it, and they do want an actual romance, unlike white girls (who in these stories want to either baby-trap a man, or marry him and then divorce him claiming all sorts abuses to get more money from the divorce)

Rin is basically a white trash girl with an asian skin, which is not a good thing. So my question is: Where/what is the appeal of Rin? why MC would want her? why would us players even want to see her scenes?

Developers are so busy making a game, that they forget that characters are a part of the game itself...and a popular game is a game with likeable characters

 

[Jellyfluff]

Ok. Am I the only One who thinks it's weird going ewerywhere bare footed? In Japan only indoors are you barefeet or in socks

I like it better this way. And I don't recall a specific country ever being named in the game.

 

[Kaczor.Balazs]

I like it better this way. And I don't recall a specific country ever being named in the game.

Just guessing from the names. In the full game will we have all the girls? Even the glasses one in that office scene?

 

[Jellyfluff]

Just guessing from the names. In the full game will we have all the girls? Even the glasses one in that office scene?

Yes.

 

[Danliness]

I have a simple mind, I see sandbox, I click ignore.

Seriously though, why the hell are so many games going to sandbox. A VN doesn't need to be further gamefied to be a decent game.

I don't mind sandbox games if they're done right. Repetitive repeat "events" with zero change in dialogue (and even some of those are really poorly done) is not the way to do it. Hope this game gets some depth and reduction of the pointless sandbox.

 

[Yzmael]

i think the worst mistake you did here is that the girls are behaving like western girls, complaining and talking shit about men they don't even know, and demanding to get a man who would literally give up all his assets to them, without even trying to earn it. In WMAF-stories, this is what drives the white men to date/interact the asian women: the fact that asian women are more traditional, they do want a man who take care of them but they know they must earn it, and they do want an actual romance, unlike white girls (who in these stories want to either baby-trap a man, or marry him and then divorce him claiming all sorts abuses to get more money from the divorce)

Rin is basically a white trash girl with an asian skin, which is not a good thing.

I don't think there's anywhere in this game that mentions this being a WMAF focused game like Rightful Ownership, though. Not really a fair comparison.

 

[Demoness_Kiss]

I don't think there's anywhere in this game that mentions this being a WMAF focused game like Rightful Ownership, though. Not really a fair comparison.

Rightful Ownership is more about white supremacy. Also, 3-4 potential love interests, all 3-4 of them with a Japanese-like name. It may not be Japan...but it sure is a place with a strong Japanese influence.

Also you focused on the most pointless issue of my post, as the issue i brought up is how Rin and the book-girl aren't really desirable, even less the woman from the government, only the cashier-girl is somehow cute due to being polite and dealing with customers so while socially awkward it's part of her job to be nice to customers.

 

[Hyperserver]

Thanks for the feedback everyone. Seems like there's a consensus that the game is too easy. I will increase the amount of grind required.

Don't make it too hard - you will need each paying patreon so you can afford more "objective" reviews like that one 5 star guy, who got his motivation for 5 stars from "god knows from where", or who has clearly played a complete different version than anybody else over here.

 

[Scyths]

Alright I played everything there is to do in the demo, but if the gameplay doesn't change then I'm never touching this ever again. It's ridiculous having to do the exact same prompt 50 times to progress the story. You might aswell have a screen that says "one week later" and be done with it, saves us both time and misery ...

 

[Hyperserver]

Alright I played everything there is to do in the demo, but if the gameplay doesn't change then I'm never touching this ever again. It's ridiculous having to do the exact same prompt 50 times to progress the story. You might aswell have a screen that says "one week later" and be done with it, saves us both time and misery ...

hey - you can't do that!
Refering to the last review, you just experienced a top notch 5-star game.
You can't abandon such a great game
(just in case, and just to be sure ... -> thats meant as sarcasm)

 

[primoo357]

Can the male protagonist be designed to be any other race?