oof, the dialogue in this is....pretty cringy. idk if its a problem with translation to english, but i'm not really seeing the typical translation issues otherwise. it really makes the MC look like a dumb unlikeable cunt without a moral compass or internal dialogue/self-awareness. all the women so far look like hot strippers, so there's that, but there's a lot of weird superimposition of the characters onto the background, rather than into the background, hard to explain but very obvious during the scene where you meet the "flasher". might be a hardware issue with the rendering dev's system.
also, why all the super weird poses for the MC? they seem....over-expressive for the situations they're in.