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drDemagogue2

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i have to agree with the art but the story is meh.... a lot of wasted potential. The dev's heart is with the second anyway.
The story and flow of the story is not good. Take the latest release as an example, one of two main antagonist was killed without much impact. It was anti climatic tbh. i not expecting a a full animated fight scene but at least some challenge or resistance...

It's funny when the MC is suppose to be the "Master" but his ass kick around by the servants. Also the game is pretty much a kinetic novel, the choice pretty much dont change the story
Agreed. No choices that I recall, which I can understand (not accounting for the occasional and appreciated "Where you want to bust your nut?"). I'm no artist or animator, but I imagine replicating the same scenarios with minor variations to accommodate player agency is a daunting task.

When I refer to the writing quality, I just mean that we mostly see intelligible sentences here, capable of consistently communicating a clear message. Sadly, this is a rarity in so many of these games. But yes, as far as conflict, resolution, and character work go, this one is nothing to write home about.
 

Hermit76

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Granted - this update was unusual short, even though it contained an impotant plot step.
But I really don't understand the negative comments about the story. It is much more interesting than the story of the most games here. Quite often the plot is either "Boy or man moves to a new town. There he tries to fuck all girls and women." or "Boy or man moves back to his family. There he tries to fuck all of them.". Alright, this game goes towards the second option , but it is definitely more complex and interesting than the usual plot here.
And the girls and women look excellent! Well, in this update the skin looked a bit too realistic to me, as if the render software got an update and was set to extra realistic, but bad skin - at least regarding the second women (I can't remember her name, the second main enemy). That was no step forward...
But I really see no point to complain about the story. It's definitely in the top 10% here.
 
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IfuckKayane&Vania

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The story is so far-fetched -- demons and weird fantasy subtext all the way -- that I miss the words! And all the voluptuous women have by far too edgy features (especially in their faces) and look multiple times operated. All the boobies are like silicon monsterballs! That is really not everybody's taste...
 

RandomGuy99

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Granted - this update was unusual short, even though it contained an impotant plot step.
But I really don't understand the negative comments about the story. It is much more interesting than the story of the most games here. Quite often the plot is either "Boy or man moves to a new town. There he tries to fuck all girls and women." or "Boy or man moves back to his family. There he tries to fuck all of them.". Alright, this game goes towards the second option , but it is definitely more complex and interesting than the usual plot here.
And the girls and women look excellent! Well, in this update the skin looked a bit too realistic to me, as if the render software got an update and was set to extra realistic, but bad skin - at least regarding the second women (I can't remember her name, the second main enemy). That was no step forward...
But I really see no point to complain about the story. It's definitely in the top 10% here.
you're comparing apple to orange. Compare with the same story genre please. There are games with the fantasy theme which are much better written. The art of the game is good but story & flow is definitely not. Definitely not top 10%, the patron number does not support that. 20+ ish maybe
It's at page 68 even in F95 rating sorting at 3.8
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newsman1979

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can someone help me here
I can not get the game to load, I keep getting this error.




I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While loading the script.
Exception: Could not load from archive tl/None/common.rpymc.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
File "/Applications/renpy-8.3.2-sdk/renpy/bootstrap.py", line 359, in bootstrap
renpy.main.main()
File "/Applications/renpy-8.3.2-sdk/renpy/main.py", line 439, in main
renpy.exports.load_module("tl/None/common")
File "/Applications/renpy-8.3.2-sdk/renpy/exports/scriptexports.py", line 98, in load_module
initcode = renpy.game.script.load_module(name)
File "/Applications/renpy-8.3.2-sdk/renpy/script.py", line 385, in load_module
self.load_appropriate_file(".rpymc", [ ".rpym" ], dir, fn, initcode)
File "/Applications/renpy-8.3.2-sdk/renpy/script.py", line 854, in load_appropriate_file
raise Exception("Could not load from archive %s." % (lastfn,))
Exception: Could not load from archive tl/None/common.rpymc.

macOS-10.16-x86_64-i386-64bit x86_64
Ren'Py 8.3.5.25013101+nightly
 
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