As for point 2 there is a way to rectify this. I've already said this somewhere:Just finished this version... played the whole way through. Loved it. Two suggestions:
(1) Jesus event (last). I was waiting for the last concert when the Jesus event kicked in without warning. Nice idea, hope that continues, but please alter timing of events, as the final concert kicked in immediately after.
(2) After concert party; loved the idea of Owl giving drugs {and wearing Alice's top was a great idea) but then I found the rest disappointing. I think it would be a great opportunity to make more explicit scenes and inject a choice of awkward situations (like either slut or sub).
Thanks!
I'd really love if Alex later discovered there is a video made during party. As the party is done now, you don't really know what happened and with whom. It would be cool to see Alex react to video of what actually happened (e.g. things she wouldn't normally do) and to deal with a possibility of leak (she starts being known, would sex tape be good or bad?).