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This image was one of the first I made to promote my kinetic novel. I made it years ago, having a clear idea of what moment it represented. In the next update, Christine will make this call.
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Marian is one of my first OC. Her role in the novel is still not fully revealed. It will. Soon.
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The language throughout was pretty poor and I'm not sure if it's down to that or just the erratic writing style, but a lot of the time I wasn't really sure what it was trying to go for. I did found it pretty humorous that this bit at the start had multiple errors, though I should have really taken that as a sign of things to come.
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Because that very sentence was inserted at the very end and was not revised
.With each update I try to improve the text but there is always something to fix.
Just now I finished a re-read from top to bottom and other typos (and renderings with errors) emerged.
I know perfectly well that this is an aspect that I need to improve.
Thanks anyway for reading it.