VN Ren'Py Broken Hearts Still Want to Love [Ch.2] [Bogatyr SV]

[vs2011xyz]

This guys looks like form the game of Nightaku (OH Daddy + Sara)

 

[darkdepths]

The title and description seems to focus on romance but the taggs show corruption.
I don't play romance games so I just want to ask what to expect? Can we be a selfish asshole or are we forced to be kind and loving?

 

[indyfordfan]

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Overview:
One phone call can radically change a life that has already become routine. This time it becomes a reason to go back and start a new and completely unexpected relationship. The main character of this game is a young man (21 years old), in whose life attractive girls and women, whom he knew well before, return. But now they are betrayed, deceived, used for useful purposes, abandoned, tired, fed up and do not arouse interest in their partners... in a word, "disappointed" like himself with love and failed relationships, but not losing hope of truly loving again. Sometimes even completely unexpectedly for yourself.​

Thread Updated: 2024-06-29
Release Date: 2024-06-28
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Version: Chapter 1
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac
Language: English
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That is a great start to a game! The women are hot, and it appears the story line will be really good. I cannot wait for more!

 

[Bogatyr SV]

Dev listed future tags, anal isn't in there. Doesn't bother me, but it seems there's no sexual content in chapter 1, so I'll probably just wait for chapter 2. Dev probably should have waited until they had a little more content to show before releasing the game.

A chapter 1 release with only 209 renders and no sexual content after 6 months of development is not a great indicator for the future. Also, with so little content, charging $21 on Patreon(super risky with incest) just to get the updates on day 1 seems rather greedy. If the updates all end up taking 6 months, and are of similar size, that's basically asking people to pay $126, and wait 6 months, for each small update. Dev is asking for the equivalent of 4 AAA studio games per year, just to play 2 small updates of a generic and small AVN.

There are so many distortions and your own assumptions in your post that there is no desire to even begin to explain anything. 209 renders is not enough and 21$ is a lot? Ok then play other games and buy them. I am not forcing you to do anything.
And by the way, $21 is not the only option. There is a choice. And when the updates get much bigger, the price could also be the same as the vast majority of VNs, compared to which $21 is still very modest. Because there are 30, and 40, and 50, and more $$$.
And 2 or even 1 update per year is almost standard for many or even most developers. Especially if they have gained some popularity.

 

[Bogatyr SV]

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Dev, are kinks/fetishes going to be avoidable (they don't happen in the story according to player choice) skippable (they happen in the story but the player doesn't see the scene) forced by plot?
Or for example if a player is not interested in X Li, will it be possible to avoid them?

Thanks, good luck.

The MC will be the one they are missing. The one who is better cannot be plan B or C. And he will be just like that. Better than other men in one way or another. At least that will be one of the basics. Although exceptions are possible and most likely will be present.

 

[Bogatyr SV]

The title and description seems to focus on romance but the taggs show corruption.
I don't play romance games so I just want to ask what to expect? Can we be a selfish asshole or are we forced to be kind and loving?

Can we be a selfish asshole? To some extent, yes. There will be exceptions. Although being kind and loving are the basics. At least in the near future, there will be no drastic changes in this regard. Corruption (if I understand the meaning correctly) will not be in the first place, but it will not be the last either.

 

[Alex5280]

Any news on the next update?

 

[d0n1br@]

Any news on the next update?

Chapter 2 was supposedly released on Patreon yesterday.

 

[d0n1br@]

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[dawsonicus2020]

could the females BE any more uglier? gonna pass on this....sorry....good luck

 

[Saint Blackmoor]

The images are fine, but the dialogue is hard to stay with because of the poor syntax. (Engrish) I couldn't continue.
I wish you success, Bogatyr SV

 

[only MILF]

Thank you. We will follow.

 

[fajiker145]

The MC will be the one they are missing. The one who is better cannot be plan B or C. And he will be just like that. Better than other men in one way or another. At least that will be one of the basics. Although exceptions are possible and most likely will be present.

Are there going to be at least one virgin? Or is every womsn going to be a used up girl that makes bad decisions and now comes crying to "save a hoe" MC so he can be their rebound.

 

[EyeWish1]

I assume this is an English translation. The English is a jumbled mess and needs a lot of work (total re-write). Also there is no need for the far too numerous time lapse screens (Moments later, two minutes later, 30 seconds later, etc). It is awkward and unnecessary. A simple walking or bike riding frame will make for a much better looking transition..

Keep at it, and good luck.

 

[Bogatyr SV]

Are there going to be at least one virgin?

Yes, there is already one virgin in the game. Will there be more? I haven't decided yet.

Or is ever women going to be a used up girl that makes bad decisions and now comes crying to "save a hoe" MC so he can be their rebound.

There will be no single option. Situations will be different.

 

[Bogatyr SV]

I assume this is an English translation. The English is a jumbled mess and needs a lot of work (total re-write).

Who's to blame that in the age of technology there is still no properly working translator.
I already made the second Сhapter simpler in terms of text. And in the process of translation, I often modify sentences to make the translation as close to the original as possible and reduce the likelihood of errors.
P.S. I'll make a note, just in case. I am translating the text into American English, not British English. Maybe that matters too.

Also there is no need for the far too numerous time lapse screens (Moments later, two minutes later, 30 seconds later, etc). It is awkward and unnecessary.

This will not change. At least for now. I don't see anything wrong with that. Especially since the delay is only a couple of seconds and does not require additional clicks.

Keep at it, and good luck.

Thanks.

 

[Requah]

Broken Engrish

 

[d0n1br@]

could the females BE any more uglier?

First of all. Everyone has their own vision of beauty and their own preferences.
Second. Are you joking or making fun? I've played many games (not dozens, but hundreds) on this site (and not only) and almost every one of them had at least a few much less attractive characters, including the main ones. In my opinion, of course.
Third. Give me at least 5 examples of games you like and name or show me some of your favorite characters from them. I'm curious (no, not really) to see who you think are the "beauties".

 

[rafa30]

Very good
Waiting next episode

 

[Bogatyr SV]

but the dialogue is hard to stay with because of the poor syntax. (Engrish)

I assume this is an English translation. The English is a jumbled mess and needs a lot of work (total re-write).

Broken Engrish

Okay, then I need specifics. At least a few examples of what is wrong and how it should be instead. So that I can understand the problem a little better. Because in the game there are definitely not mistakes in every sentence.
Are the problems with English in Chapter 1, 2, or both? In Chapter 2, has the translation improved compared to Chapter 1 or not?
If I understand correctly, not everyone has reached Chapter 2, but still...
P.S. Thank you in advance to you and everyone else who will answer and help in any way on the topic of this comment.