VN Ren'Py Broken Promises [v0.38] [Light Cavalry]

[faramata]

Man, how many times has this been rewritten? I think remember at least two different beginnings to the story and now it starts with
Tianna (I think) chasing and shooting some thieves.

 

[Acsuka]

It takes a special teacher LI to make me want to go after them. No idea if that is actually the reason but just a guess until I do a replay.

And there is indeed a potential teacher in the game, who also has marital problems... Nevertheless, you can't chase her, even though she gets a lot of screen time... Even if many people don't like the character, many people would be happy for her, because it would spice up the story even more. .. But maybe there will be a hot scene with him later on...

 

[Ohvidente]

It's been a while since I've seen such a good connection, like in this last update with Afina and Kaylie.

 

[Dessolos]

And there is indeed a potential teacher in the game, who also has marital problems... Nevertheless, you can't chase her, even though she gets a lot of screen time... Even if many people don't like the character, many people would be happy for her, because it would spice up the story even more. .. But maybe there will be a hot scene with him later on...

honestly this would be the one of the few games id be okay with going after a teacher since you are undercover and not really a student

 

[ninjasamuri]

Oh cool a new game that I haven't noticed before and it has three chapters worth of content
*Childhood friend is a single mom

Just kidding I still gave it a chance after. Liking Brie, Alice, Kylie and Eve

 

[rafabastos09]

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR NOT MAKING THE MC A PUSSY

 

[ALBERTANO]

Harem please

 

[MiltonPowers]

yeah I kind of wished it was the MC's kid as well tbh just because I like the idea honestly even tho it would make her a shitty person in some people's eyes since she never told the MC about his kid in 7 years. Just something about the girl that got away and losing contact with then and reconnecting with them having a surprise like a kid is appealing guess cause for me it just makes for better character deveolopment / story


couldn't tell you exactly till I do a replay. I just know I wasnt big into her looks. Doesn't help Im not really into milfs all the much it varies from game to game but mostly im not. I can only guess part of the reason was because she is our boss. Usually I don't have a problem with that but because of the job being a cop and all and how I want to treat things seriously I think I might treat that kind of like Teachers in college games, where most of the Teacher LI out there I don't want to make thing awkward and weird. It takes a special teacher LI to make me want to go after them. No idea if that is actually the reason but just a guess until I do a replay.

To be fair i think grace would of been wildy more popular had her daughter been the MC's (maybe a one night stand between them or something) then some random dude who worked in an office and i truly believe a lot of the older backstory for her is what killed her potential as an LI (for some people).

With that said it's not like Tianna is a virgin either but at least you don't hear anything about her past lovers.

I guess I'm in the minority, I don't mind she's not MC daughter. I don't really like Grace, so I'm not doing a main Grace path. But when it gets further along, I'll be doing a Grace path, purely for Victoria (I think she's awesome). There's another popular AVN (Hillside) where you can romance the mother, and when the daughter calls MC dad for the first time, it was one of the most emotional things I have seen. I absolutely loved it. So, I'll be doing a Grace path, just so I can be a father to that little cutie.

 

[Dessolos]

I guess I'm in the minority, I don't mind she's not MC daughter. I don't really like Grace, so I'm not doing a main Grace path. But when it gets further along, I'll be doing a Grace path, purely for Victoria (I think she's awesome). There's another popular AVN where you can romance the mother, and when the daughter calls MC dad for the first time, it was one of the most emotional things I have seen. I absolutely loved it. So, I'll be doing a Grace path, just so I can be a father to that little cutie.

Well I don't mind it either but after he brought it up and I thought about it probably would of made for a bit better story / character / drama. Grace is still my favorite as of last time I played.

 

[Ohvidente]

I guess I'm in the minority, I don't mind she's not MC daughter. I don't really like Grace, so I'm not doing a main Grace path. But when it gets further along, I'll be doing a Grace path, purely for Victoria (I think she's awesome). There's another popular AVN where you can romance the mother, and when the daughter calls MC dad for the first time, it was one of the most emotional things I have seen. I absolutely loved it. So, I'll be doing a Grace path, just so I can be a father to that little cutie.

What is the name of the AVN you mentioned?

 

[Dessolos]

What is the name of the AVN you mentioned?

don't want to mention names cause of forum rules or whatever but it's in his signature it's the 2nd to last one on the first row of games ( it's in orange)

 

[MiltonPowers]

What is the name of the AVN you mentioned?

I edited my original post.

 

[c.mork]

What's the deal with Eveline's age? She went from a generation older than Brie (being the friend of her mom) and being a mother figure to her to a "little older", and now their parents were friends

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[wuhasy]

What's the deal with Eveline's age? She went from a generation older than Brie (being the friend of her mom) and being a mother figure to her to a "little older", and now their parents were friends

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at least 10 years older than Brie

 

[AchedCroissant]

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I wasn't reading much into it when she showed up but I thought she was her mom lol

 

[Nimbus Commando]

To be fair i think grace would of been wildy more popular had her daughter been the MC's (maybe a one night stand between them or something) then some random dude who worked in an office and i truly believe a lot of the older backstory for her is what killed her potential as an LI (for some people).

With that said it's not like Tianna is a virgin either but at least you don't hear anything about her past lovers.

Yeah not suprised like hey am back in your life hey mind if you help me take care of my kid from some random dude.

 

[Hotkillerz]

So I'm going to ask am I blind or it says android yet there's no link to download the game on the main page....

 

[link18]

the hate on grace is unbearable
MC is no pathetic virgin either, its part of the game and always a possibility even with condoms, mistakes happen all the time if the player want to judge her on her past mistakes that's the player choice
some people want games/stories with only virgin maidens that's not how the world works if you want to tell a somewhat realistic story
secondly the same thing happens with people that cry about NTR in every game, this game is no harem game so if we choose one of the girls even if it's not shown in the game do you expect other girls to abstain from having sex even though mc don't want them!!!!
time to touch grass there is not only one male in the world

 

[Dessolos]

the hate on grace is unbearable
MC is no pathetic virgin either its part of the game and always a possibility even with condoms, mistakes happen all the time if you want to judge her on her past mistakes that is your choice
some people want games/stories with only virgin maidens that's not how the world works if you want to tell a somewhat realistic story
secondly the same thing happens with people that cry about NTR in every game, this game is no harem game so if we choose one of the girls even if it's not shown in the game do you expect other girls to abstain from having sex because mc don't want them !!!!
time to touch grass there is not only one male in the world

What I find more ridiculous some claim she shows back in the MC's help and wants him to help take of her kid that isnt his when that isn't anywhere near the truth. The kid is just park of the package of they are going to play her path but they act like she has a ulterior motive for getting back in the MC's life , beyond being friends.

 

[sdawg1234]

To anyone who's been here since the beginning has the story really advanced since like the 2nd or 3rd release. I feel like more has been taken out than been added. Seems like more rewrites than continuation of the story.