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yeah I find Grace the most attractive too even tho I always get shit for it from a discord buddy. Tho I still find a few others hotter but im not attracted to them like I am with Grace.All girls are stunning but Grace is always the prettiest.
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Graphicwise the game is out there with the best of them. Characters are nicely done, each one having it's own soul and sh*t to deal with like in real life.
Great job on bringing the life in the characters showing them little by little to the public, as the game pushes forward story wise. MC is absolute bomb.
Detective in the flesh and going undercover at that. The balance there needs to be carefully preserved though as he moves forward.
I hope that the author has some external help from professional point of view. Being acting detective myself I can approve of the concept in 90 % of how the MC is portrayed professionally.
Eventually too many people will get to know he is under as he meets and deals with people that know him from his past and that needs to be lowered to a minimum as much as possible. The alternative being too much innocents or close and friends and loved ones being caught in a crossfire.
If the developer needs to effectively maintain the cover of the MC, he must stay away from the police station as much as possible as well.
Meeting to report periodically results to the superiors in person is not wise, it should be done once weekly, best case once monthly, otherwise by pure chance or on purpouse someone will notice and that will blow his cover.
Normally it should be done in safe houses or MC's apartment in the worst case, to avoid suspicion or detection... or by the phone and hope it is not tapped and it is safe to talk.
Showing that the undercover job is set in high society and stuff, going as student in rich-ass university with the rest of them Silverspoons is plausible and I don't see anything bad or conceptually wrong as a sort of entry point.
Tailing high or low end customers to the fixers and further up the chain is the way to go and it makes sense. It is how is done in real life depending on your entry point when you are under.
The way it is shown here is good and acceptable to me and much safer for the MC in general. Though being undercover, he can wear some small firearm hidden in him, ankle and socks during daylight and some normal guns during night time or when snooping around remote areas with lots of bad guys.
The rest is just superbly done and I have no questions there. Keep up the good job man. The story is nicely written and I loved it, the chicks also and there is a woman for every taste from younger ones to MILFs it has it all. It will be nice to have some headsup for the next part. I personally went for the Florentino twins since there must be a way to take out two birds with one stone and I would love to see them both glued to the MC or banging the other one by "mistake" thinking it's the other sister (damn that would be nice to see)...
All women are good here and objectively there is no wrong choice. From my professional view I would never go for Tianna or the daughter Alice....
Banging the Cap is just wrong for me... or her daughter. They both have the hots for the MC and they are both great visually but, speaking in "police terms" whereever you make out your sallary, don't pull out and mix your junk in... Means no affairs, no relationships, no nothing with females from your line of work or god forbid superior in rank to you... It always ends bad and I say this from personal experince, so when I saw the cap going after the MC and the daughter added in the mix it really made me feel myself between a rock and a hard place. Had familiar experience myself back in the days so I went on instinct on these two like "Aaahh HELL NO!" Lol.... Made me relive my younger self as a detective from 10-12 years ago.... so yeah... memories.
Eitherway it is good to have a visual novel that do not goes heavy on the sex part, but also needs the story as well to make it good overall. Really loved it so far and keep the good work. Waiting for the next piece of the story... And hey, I am really aiming for 2 of 2 on those Florentino twins.... Doubt that Gabriel and Tess can find a better match for them twin beauties so why not securing both fronts with the MC as a best deal. Chicks happy, parents happy, and MC is the happiest of them all.... Not only rich and powerful connections but twin beauties on each side having him well in place. Best deal ever....
Great job on bringing the life in the characters showing them little by little to the public, as the game pushes forward story wise. MC is absolute bomb.
Detective in the flesh and going undercover at that. The balance there needs to be carefully preserved though as he moves forward.
I hope that the author has some external help from professional point of view. Being acting detective myself I can approve of the concept in 90 % of how the MC is portrayed professionally.
Eventually too many people will get to know he is under as he meets and deals with people that know him from his past and that needs to be lowered to a minimum as much as possible. The alternative being too much innocents or close and friends and loved ones being caught in a crossfire.
If the developer needs to effectively maintain the cover of the MC, he must stay away from the police station as much as possible as well.
Meeting to report periodically results to the superiors in person is not wise, it should be done once weekly, best case once monthly, otherwise by pure chance or on purpouse someone will notice and that will blow his cover.
Normally it should be done in safe houses or MC's apartment in the worst case, to avoid suspicion or detection... or by the phone and hope it is not tapped and it is safe to talk.
Showing that the undercover job is set in high society and stuff, going as student in rich-ass university with the rest of them Silverspoons is plausible and I don't see anything bad or conceptually wrong as a sort of entry point.
Tailing high or low end customers to the fixers and further up the chain is the way to go and it makes sense. It is how is done in real life depending on your entry point when you are under.
The way it is shown here is good and acceptable to me and much safer for the MC in general. Though being undercover, he can wear some small firearm hidden in him, ankle and socks during daylight and some normal guns during night time or when snooping around remote areas with lots of bad guys.
The rest is just superbly done and I have no questions there. Keep up the good job man. The story is nicely written and I loved it, the chicks also and there is a woman for every taste from younger ones to MILFs it has it all. It will be nice to have some headsup for the next part. I personally went for the Florentino twins since there must be a way to take out two birds with one stone and I would love to see them both glued to the MC or banging the other one by "mistake" thinking it's the other sister (damn that would be nice to see)
...All women are good here and objectively there is no wrong choice. From my professional view I would never go for Tianna or the daughter Alice....
Banging the Cap is just wrong for me... or her daughter. They both have the hots for the MC and they are both great visually but, speaking in "police terms" whereever you make out your sallary, don't pull out and mix your junk in... Means no affairs, no relationships, no nothing with females from your line of work or god forbid superior in rank to you... It always ends bad and I say this from personal experince, so when I saw the cap going after the MC and the daughter added in the mix it really made me feel myself between a rock and a hard place. Had familiar experience myself back in the days so I went on instinct on these two like "Aaahh HELL NO!" Lol.... Made me relive my younger self as a detective from 10-12 years ago.... so yeah... memories.
Eitherway it is good to have a visual novel that do not goes heavy on the sex part, but also needs the story as well to make it good overall. Really loved it so far and keep the good work. Waiting for the next piece of the story... And hey, I am really aiming for 2 of 2 on those Florentino twins.... Doubt that Gabriel and Tess can find a better match for them twin beauties so why not securing both fronts with the MC as a best deal. Chicks happy, parents happy, and MC is the happiest of them all.... Not only rich and powerful connections but twin beauties on each side having him well in place. Best deal ever....
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i'll just take the one on the right you guys can fight over the left one
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