VN Ren'Py Broken Promises [v0.403] [Light Cavalry]

[MiltonPowers]

Harem route ?

Thank you

 

[Moon Blaster]

Broken Promises , More like Broken Saves ( again)

 

[Skylaroo]

never go grace path,she fucked up by some randomguy ,then she come back for mc? what a trash slut

Awwww she had sex with the father of her lovely daughter, became a single mother and successful lawyer, and reconnected with an old friend. Would you like a discount code to set up an appointment with a counselor so you can tell them it hurts your feeling that a porn game isn't exactly like your fantasy?

 

[MiltonPowers]

Awwww she had sex with the father of her lovely daughter, became a single mother and successful lawyer, and reconnected with an old friend. Would you like a discount code to set up an appointment with a counselor so you can tell them it hurts your feeling that a porn game isn't exactly like your fantasy?

You'll go broke offering discount codes to everyone who gets their feelings hurt over a game that doesn't even include tags they want.

 

[dunhill]

first time playing this game and its good like really good BUT a good few criticism:

1. too much small talk and side story that does not tie into or is relevant to the main story, in other words no one wants to read walls of text if it goes no where... and even if it does no one wants that much buffering/ padding.. the game world seems real enough the renders seems real enough to make the world look populated by adding that much text padding you make the MC look like he is not aware of his surroundings

2. to make the LIs more real not everyone is a virgin waiting for the MC to be the first, life happens and everyone have mental scars that they learn from.. to that point most of the LIs comes off as either total sluts that try to act mature OR they're too emotional damage to have a relationship with, both is a huge turn off as it never leads anywhere good.. my 1st playthrough i ignored most of them...

3. Tianna need more screen time (that is one sexy mama bear)... out of all the LIs Tianna character is the most develop and not bipolar like the rest, she is mature and knows what she wants, sure she made mistakes in life but the way she is trying to deal with it is more believable like an actual functional adult... if the game dev ever reads this when they do hook up plz let them give each other nicknames and have the MC call her mama bear during sex scenes and she screaming lion bear....

 

[Skylaroo]

1. too much small talk and side story that does not tie into or is relevant to the main story, in other words no one wants to read walls of text if it goes no where... and even if it does no one wants that much buffering/ padding.. the game world seems real enough the renders seems real enough to make the world look populated by adding that much text padding you make the MC look like he is not aware of his surroundings

Could you give a few examples of the padding you're talking about? I felt like the current version of the game hardly had any padding anymore.

2. to make the LIs more real not everyone is a virgin waiting for the MC to be the first, life happens and everyone have mental scars that they learn from.. to that point most of the LIs comes off as either total sluts that try to act mature OR they're too emotional damage to have a relationship with, both is a huge turn off as it never leads anywhere good.. my 1st playthrough i ignored most of them...

Hooo boy, have you met the other guy who complained about LI being a trashy slut for not being a virgin? The duality of porn game players.

if the game dev ever reads this when they do hook up plz let them give each other nicknames and have the MC call her mama bear during sex scenes and she screaming lion bear....

Rawr sexay ass eating lion bear

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[wuhasy]

Awwww she had sex with the father of her lovely daughter, became a single mother and successful lawyer, and reconnected with an old friend. Would you like a discount code to set up an appointment with a counselor so you can tell them it hurts your feeling that a porn game isn't exactly like your fantasy?

virgin is not the main problem,worse is she have a kid,which is a big burden for mc to have a relationship with her

 

[Skylaroo]

virgin is not the main problem,worse is she have a kid,which is a big burden for mc to have a relationship with her

So what exactly is about Grace that made her a trash slut to you? Just because she's a mother?

 

[MixQQ]

virgin is not the main problem,worse is she have a kid,which is a big burden for mc to have a relationship with her

what is you fucking problem with her? There is plenty of alone parents with kids in real life - females or males, doesn't matter. Not every relationship is always happy and last forever, grow up and stop crying

 

[Dessolos]

virgin is not the main problem,worse is she have a kid,which is a big burden for mc to have a relationship with her

Hard disagree that's what makes her character better. I find it's really unique and rare to find a LI with a kid that isn't a LI also. Not to mention it creates alot of cute and wholesome moments and just adds so much to her character. I don't even like Milfs with the body build that Grace has see similar looking ones in alot of AVN's. But I thought her character was really well done that I found myself really attracted to her.

Now if you just dont like her because she has a kid I kind of get it as not everyone one wants to deal with a kid. But at the same time I dont get it cause it's not real life and you are just limiting yourself to what could be a great character. But I can't immerse myself or get into the shoes of a MC so stuff like that will never be a big deal to me. So maybe if you do I can see why that be a deal breaker for you if it isn't just something you would do in real life either. But imo that shouldn't matter if you actually want to get to know someone as you never know unless if they are wifey material until you try.

But nothing about it makes her a slut , like you claimed in your first post.

 

[NebulousShooter]

Hard disagree that's what makes her character better. I find it's really unique and rare to find a LI with a kid that isn't a LI also. Not to mention it creates alot of cute and wholesome moments and just adds so much to her character. I don't even like Milfs with the body build that Grace has see similar looking ones in alot of AVN's. But I thought her character was really well done that I found myself really attracted to her.

Now if you just dont like her because she has a kid I kind of get it as not everyone one wants to deal with a kid. But at the same time I dont get it cause it's not real life and you are just limiting yourself to what could be a great character. But I can't immerse myself or get into the shoes of a MC so stuff like that will never be a big deal to me. So maybe if you do I can see why that be a deal breaker for you if it isn't just something you would do in real life either. But imo that shouldn't matter if you actually want to get to know someone as you never know unless if they are wifey material until you try.

But nothing about it makes her a slut , like you claimed in your first post.

lipe2410, did you hack his account?

 

[dunhill]

Could you give a few examples of the padding you're talking about? I felt like the current version of the game hardly had any padding anymore.

Hooo boy, have you met the other guy who complained about LI being a trashy slut for not being a virgin? The duality of porn game players.

Rawr sexay ass eating lion bear

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maybe try reading my comment before going full send... i wasn't complaining about the LIs not being virgins in fact i was complementing the game dev on that aspect of the character writing, thing is most of these LIs comes off as total sluts that act like they mature when they don't know what they want like they have a bi polar disorder and act like they need a babysitter and the other end was that the other LIs was so messed up mentally that being in a relationship with them is the same thing like dating a mentally handicap woman where they need a caretaker... its sort of sad when you think about it, most of the LIs is needy...

as for padding well we have an undercover detective that went from full CSI pro to talking about trival matters in a coffee shop then going into the law office where he knows his LI boss...

still a good game and better than 70% of the stuff on here... i will be looking for the next update, also don't kink shame its rude..

 

[NebulousShooter]

Anyone still has working links for past versions of the game(OG demo/0.1, 0.1.1 revised?) I watched this thread when the controversy started and this dev being an unicorn that kept going through it and keep rendering rather than pack his toys and blame the audience makes me want to give his game the best shot. But at the same time I am curious of how everything evolved and improved over the course of the revisions.

 

[Skylaroo]

maybe try reading my comment before going full send... i wasn't complaining about the LIs not being virgins

Might want to re-read and understand what I posted before going full send. I clearly said that guy complained about LIs not being virgin. On the other hand, you complained about wanting the LIs to not be virgins waiting for MC because they are not real enough for you. Hence, "the duality of porn game players" comment in my post to show how you two wanting total opposite things and how the dev can't satisfy both.

as for padding well we have an undercover detective that went from full CSI pro to talking about trival matters in a coffee shop then going into the law office where he knows his LI boss...

How is that padding? They are different conversation for different situation with different characters.

also don't kink shame its rude..

Apologies if you're offended, but I just think it's very selfish that you feel comfortable to ask dev to put your specific kink (not just asking for general nicknaming option, but using that particular personal nickname) as if it's something that everyone else should enjoy too.

 

[Thur1in]

First time playing this, and really enjoyed the story so far. When the "Save here screen" showed up, i was really wishing their was more story.
Love it, will be following this game, has great potential.

 

[Dessolos]

not gonna lie seeing some of the positive feedback / reviews makes me want to replay this sooner. I already considered this in or close to my top 10 before the update now im curious haha.

 

[Ass Man]

how can you make a 3d character look like this and think "oh yes, this is perfect" like, come on man, this is one of the ugliest woman ever made in daz3d

 

[Beast Within]

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how can you make a 3d character look like this and think "oh yes, this is perfect" like, come on man, this is one of the ugliest woman ever made in daz3d

I guess you havent met petunia

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[hysepReC]

Grace is my fave. I'm a sucker for a good childhood friends to lovers story and I don't see her having a kid as a negative thing. It's actually kind of heart warming to see her reactions when the MC interacts with Victoria.

I wish Tess was a LI because damn, she's gorgeous but oh well... guess I'll have to settle for one of her daughters instead.

 

[lipe2410]

lipe2410, did you hack his account?

Didn't know this one has a single mother as LI. I would be in heaven right now if this wasn't the #15789017 game with one-update-per-year cycle, so i will just forget this lost cause and walk away