Ren'Py Broken Sky [v0.1] [Wistala]

blablablagivemethemoney · Jun 18, 2024

baneini said:
Its pretty awful

speak for yourself

pallisade_walls · Jun 19, 2024

Wistala said:
Currently the only gay content is with vordruth the serpents lair bartender and Artemis the waiter at the world's collide lounge!

Artemis is so good

SunBoots · Jun 19, 2024

Pretty impressive so far.
Easily among the more cohesively-written stuff here.

I'm not (personally) particularly moved by the rather black and white approach to choices/dialogue, tho.

>Trust is required for interactions of corruption
>But you build trust by being agreeable
>The choices you make define how your character views things, but there's no nuance to it
>So there's no incentive to NOT try and gain trust from everyone, it doesn't seem to affect my character's personality, which just defaults to hyper generic 'good' guy, outside of the decisions around fetish preferences.

The spoiler box below is mostly really specific to my own thoughts and frankly not worth reading, but left in should more overly pointless feedback(?) be wanted. Once more, it's just ranting.

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It's refreshing to have a baseline for a game here to be good enough that my criticism is the direction, rather than the quality.
Few and far between. Also to note, this criticism is only given because I feel the author is trying trying to add the nuance of a complex world, but it feels like it doesn't carry through to (most of) the characters, writing or actions, thus far. Stuff that can't even manage the attempt wouldn't need this consideration.

Look forward to more content.

derrica1 · Jun 20, 2024

In case it's helpful I got an error message, I started from the start and the ignore button let me continue.
Amazing game by the way, especially like the music and writing!

Edit: I got a second error message, after talking to the Naga bartender, this one didn't allow me to ignore it but I could rollback.
Edit2: Third error message at the credits, Hope it helps.

Code:

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "game/Mission 1 script.rpy", line 602, in script
    if flash1 == True or floyd_pet_desire11 == True or saved_self == True:
  File "game/Mission 1 script.rpy", line 602, in <module>
    if flash1 == True or floyd_pet_desire11 == True or saved_self == True:
NameError: name 'floyd_pet_desire11' is not defined

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "game/Mission 1 script.rpy", line 602, in script
    if flash1 == True or floyd_pet_desire11 == True or saved_self == True:
  File "D:\jdown\BrokenSky-V0 1-win\BrokenSky-V0.1-win\renpy\ast.py", line 1842, in execute
    if renpy.python.py_eval(condition):
  File "D:\jdown\BrokenSky-V0 1-win\BrokenSky-V0.1-win\renpy\python.py", line 1209, in py_eval
    return py_eval_bytecode(code, globals, locals)
  File "D:\jdown\BrokenSky-V0 1-win\BrokenSky-V0.1-win\renpy\python.py", line 1202, in py_eval_bytecode
    return eval(bytecode, globals, locals)
  File "game/Mission 1 script.rpy", line 602, in <module>
    if flash1 == True or floyd_pet_desire11 == True or saved_self == True:
NameError: name 'floyd_pet_desire11' is not defined

Windows-10-10.0.19045 AMD64
Ren'Py 8.2.1.24030407
Broken Sky V0.1
Fri Jun 21 01:34:03 2024



```
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "game/nadir_events.rpy", line 2318, in script
    jump sl_start_menu
ScriptError: could not find label 'sl_start_menu'.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "game/nadir_events.rpy", line 2318, in script
    jump sl_start_menu
  File "D:\jdown\BrokenSky-V0 1-win\BrokenSky-V0.1-win\renpy\ast.py", line 1698, in execute
    rv = renpy.game.script.lookup(target)
  File "D:\jdown\BrokenSky-V0 1-win\BrokenSky-V0.1-win\renpy\script.py", line 1103, in lookup
    raise ScriptError("could not find label '%s'." % str(original))
ScriptError: could not find label 'sl_start_menu'.
```


I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "game/Mission 1 script.rpy", line 2186, in script
    owner "jordana#1181, Valkera"
Exception: Sayer 'owner' is not defined.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "game/Mission 1 script.rpy", line 2186, in script
    owner "jordana#1181, Valkera"
  File "D:\jdown\BrokenSky-V0 1-win\BrokenSky-V0.1-win\renpy\ast.py", line 2557, in execute
    Say.execute(self)
  File "D:\jdown\BrokenSky-V0 1-win\BrokenSky-V0.1-win\renpy\ast.py", line 575, in execute
    who = eval_who(self.who, self.who_fast)
  File "D:\jdown\BrokenSky-V0 1-win\BrokenSky-V0.1-win\renpy\ast.py", line 464, in eval_who
    raise Exception("Sayer '%s' is not defined." % who)
Exception: Sayer 'owner' is not defined.

Windows-10-10.0.19045 AMD64
Ren'Py 8.2.1.24030407
Broken Sky V0.1
Fri Jun 21 02:35:45 2024

Wistala · Jun 20, 2024

derrica1 said:

In case it's helpful I got an error message, I started from the start and the ignore button let me continue.
Amazing game by the way, especially like the music and writing!

Edit: I got a second error message, after talking to the Naga bartender, this one didn't allow me to ignore it but I could rollback.
Edit2: Third error message at the credits, Hope it helps.

Code:

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "game/Mission 1 script.rpy", line 602, in script
    if flash1 == True or floyd_pet_desire11 == True or saved_self == True:
  File "game/Mission 1 script.rpy", line 602, in <module>
    if flash1 == True or floyd_pet_desire11 == True or saved_self == True:
NameError: name 'floyd_pet_desire11' is not defined

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "game/Mission 1 script.rpy", line 602, in script
    if flash1 == True or floyd_pet_desire11 == True or saved_self == True:
  File "D:\jdown\BrokenSky-V0 1-win\BrokenSky-V0.1-win\renpy\ast.py", line 1842, in execute
    if renpy.python.py_eval(condition):
  File "D:\jdown\BrokenSky-V0 1-win\BrokenSky-V0.1-win\renpy\python.py", line 1209, in py_eval
    return py_eval_bytecode(code, globals, locals)
  File "D:\jdown\BrokenSky-V0 1-win\BrokenSky-V0.1-win\renpy\python.py", line 1202, in py_eval_bytecode
    return eval(bytecode, globals, locals)
  File "game/Mission 1 script.rpy", line 602, in <module>
    if flash1 == True or floyd_pet_desire11 == True or saved_self == True:
NameError: name 'floyd_pet_desire11' is not defined

Windows-10-10.0.19045 AMD64
Ren'Py 8.2.1.24030407
Broken Sky V0.1
Fri Jun 21 01:34:03 2024



```
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "game/nadir_events.rpy", line 2318, in script
    jump sl_start_menu
ScriptError: could not find label 'sl_start_menu'.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "game/nadir_events.rpy", line 2318, in script
    jump sl_start_menu
  File "D:\jdown\BrokenSky-V0 1-win\BrokenSky-V0.1-win\renpy\ast.py", line 1698, in execute
    rv = renpy.game.script.lookup(target)
  File "D:\jdown\BrokenSky-V0 1-win\BrokenSky-V0.1-win\renpy\script.py", line 1103, in lookup
    raise ScriptError("could not find label '%s'." % str(original))
ScriptError: could not find label 'sl_start_menu'.
```


I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "game/Mission 1 script.rpy", line 2186, in script
    owner "jordana#1181, Valkera"
Exception: Sayer 'owner' is not defined.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "game/Mission 1 script.rpy", line 2186, in script
    owner "jordana#1181, Valkera"
  File "D:\jdown\BrokenSky-V0 1-win\BrokenSky-V0.1-win\renpy\ast.py", line 2557, in execute
    Say.execute(self)
  File "D:\jdown\BrokenSky-V0 1-win\BrokenSky-V0.1-win\renpy\ast.py", line 575, in execute
    who = eval_who(self.who, self.who_fast)
  File "D:\jdown\BrokenSky-V0 1-win\BrokenSky-V0.1-win\renpy\ast.py", line 464, in eval_who
    raise Exception("Sayer '%s' is not defined." % who)
Exception: Sayer 'owner' is not defined.

Windows-10-10.0.19045 AMD64
Ren'Py 8.2.1.24030407
Broken Sky V0.1
Fri Jun 21 02:35:45 2024

Thank you! But these errors and quite a few more have all been fixed in V0.11 of the game!

I see you are playing on windows, the patch from 0.1 to 0.11 is only a few kilobytes if you'd like to give it a download!

derrica1 · Jun 21, 2024

Wistala said:
Thank you! But these errors and quite a few more have all been fixed in V0.11 of the game!

I see you are playing on windows, the patch from 0.1 to 0.11 is only a few kilobytes if you'd like to give it a download!

Thanks for the response, I'll download the update

karbonara · Sunday at 8:28 PM

I've like to report a bug

Code:

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "game/Mission 1 script.rpy", line 602, in script
    if flash1 == True or floyd_pet_desire1 == True or saved_self == True:
  File "game/Mission 1 script.rpy", line 602, in <module>
    if flash1 == True or floyd_pet_desire1 == True or saved_self == True:
NameError: name 'saved_self' is not defined

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "game/Mission 1 script.rpy", line 602, in script
    if flash1 == True or floyd_pet_desire1 == True or saved_self == True:
  File "/BrokenSky-V0.11-linux/renpy/ast.py", line 1842, in execute
    if renpy.python.py_eval(condition):
  File "/BrokenSky-V0.11-linux/renpy/python.py", line 1209, in py_eval
    return py_eval_bytecode(code, globals, locals)
  File "/BrokenSky-V0.11-linux/renpy/python.py", line 1202, in py_eval_bytecode
    return eval(bytecode, globals, locals)
  File "game/Mission 1 script.rpy", line 602, in <module>
    if flash1 == True or floyd_pet_desire1 == True or saved_self == True:
NameError: name 'saved_self' is not defined

Linux-6.9.5 x86_64
Ren'Py 8.2.1.24030407
Broken Sky V0.11
Sun Jun 23 21:25:15 2024

Raoddik · Sunday at 9:20 PM

Love the new update, so much potential but at the same time I'm little worried if it's not too ambitious, still, really looking forward for more.

Wistala · Monday at 6:35 PM

karbonara said:

I've like to report a bug

Code:

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "game/Mission 1 script.rpy", line 602, in script
    if flash1 == True or floyd_pet_desire1 == True or saved_self == True:
  File "game/Mission 1 script.rpy", line 602, in <module>
    if flash1 == True or floyd_pet_desire1 == True or saved_self == True:
NameError: name 'saved_self' is not defined

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "game/Mission 1 script.rpy", line 602, in script
    if flash1 == True or floyd_pet_desire1 == True or saved_self == True:
  File "/BrokenSky-V0.11-linux/renpy/ast.py", line 1842, in execute
    if renpy.python.py_eval(condition):
  File "/BrokenSky-V0.11-linux/renpy/python.py", line 1209, in py_eval
    return py_eval_bytecode(code, globals, locals)
  File "/BrokenSky-V0.11-linux/renpy/python.py", line 1202, in py_eval_bytecode
    return eval(bytecode, globals, locals)
  File "game/Mission 1 script.rpy", line 602, in <module>
    if flash1 == True or floyd_pet_desire1 == True or saved_self == True:
NameError: name 'saved_self' is not defined

Linux-6.9.5 x86_64
Ren'Py 8.2.1.24030407
Broken Sky V0.11
Sun Jun 23 21:25:15 2024

Damn, that bug was hiding underneath a different bug. Thank you though!

karbonara · Monday at 8:03 PM

Replaying second Wistala scene causes error

Code:

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "game/gallery_screen.rpy", line 1949, in script
    Sh "Sorry [P], Wistala will be hanging up now. This next part is just for us."
NameError: Name 'playername' is not defined.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "game/gallery_screen.rpy", line 1949, in script
    Sh "Sorry [P], Wistala will be hanging up now. This next part is just for us."
  File "/BrokenSky-V0.11-linux/renpy/ast.py", line 2557, in execute
    Say.execute(self)
  File "/BrokenSky-V0.11-linux/renpy/ast.py", line 615, in execute
    renpy.exports.say(who, what, *args, **kwargs)
  File "/BrokenSky-V0.11-linux/renpy/exports.py", line 1493, in say
    who(what, *args, **kwargs)
  File "/BrokenSky-V0.11-linux/renpy/character.py", line 1379, in __call__
    what = self.prefix_suffix("what", self.what_prefix, what, self.what_suffix)
  File "/BrokenSky-V0.11-linux/renpy/character.py", line 1293, in prefix_suffix
    return (sub(prefix) + sub(body) + sub(suffix))
  File "/BrokenSky-V0.11-linux/renpy/character.py", line 1273, in sub
    return renpy.substitutions.substitute(s, scope=scope, force=force, translate=translate)[0]
  File "/BrokenSky-V0.11-linux/renpy/substitutions.py", line 368, in substitute
    s = interpolate(s, kwargs) # type: ignore
  File "/BrokenSky-V0.11-linux/renpy/substitutions.py", line 97, in interpolate
    rv += format(value, fmt)
  File "/BrokenSky-V0.11-linux/renpy/character.py", line 1243, in __format__
    return format(str(self), spec)
  File "/BrokenSky-V0.11-linux/renpy/character.py", line 1235, in __str__
    rv = renpy.substitutions.substitute(who)[0]
  File "/BrokenSky-V0.11-linux/renpy/substitutions.py", line 368, in substitute
    s = interpolate(s, kwargs) # type: ignore
  File "/BrokenSky-V0.11-linux/renpy/substitutions.py", line 86, in interpolate
    raise e
  File "/BrokenSky-V0.11-linux/renpy/substitutions.py", line 78, in interpolate
    value = renpy.python.py_eval(code, {}, scope)
  File "/BrokenSky-V0.11-linux/renpy/python.py", line 1209, in py_eval
    return py_eval_bytecode(code, globals, locals)
  File "/BrokenSky-V0.11-linux/renpy/python.py", line 1202, in py_eval_bytecode
    return eval(bytecode, globals, locals)
  File "<none>", line 1, in <module>
  File "/BrokenSky-V0.11-linux/renpy/substitutions.py", line 310, in __getitem__
    raise NameError("Name '{}' is not defined.".format(key))
NameError: Name 'playername' is not defined.

Linux-6.9.6 x86_64
Ren'Py 8.2.1.24030407
Broken Sky V0.11
Mon Jun 24 21:01:19 2024

Mifuell · 2024-06-27T22:25:48+0100

I just noticed the "trap" tag. Is there a trap in this game or is that coming later?

redshiftasdfasdf · 2024-06-28T03:58:25+0100

Mifuell said:
I just noticed the "trap" tag. Is there a trap in this game or is that coming later?

pretty sure its referring to the deer boy that you meet in the club.

Ren'Py Broken Sky [v0.1] [Wistala]

blablablagivemethemoney

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pallisade_walls

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SunBoots

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derrica1

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Wistala

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derrica1

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karbonara

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Raoddik

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Wistala

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karbonara

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Mifuell

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