Ren'Py Completed Brooks in Wild West [v1.00] [Piggy Nose Games]

[Rabbi Foreskin]

So are any of the Saloon girls gonna be "romancable?" I see the dev addressed this in an earlier post a while ago but I didn't quite understand what they meant.

I'm on Ch.1 and I need to kill bandits for there bounty how many do I have to kill for the story to Continue
By the way love the game keep up the good work I know its gonna be amazing when finished man.

For me the story just kind of advanced on its own after a couple days. Try turning them in at the Sheriff's office maybe.

 

[KingKnightis]

So are any of the Saloon girls gonna be "romancable?" I see the dev addressed this in an earlier post a while ago but I didn't quite understand what they meant.


For me the story just kind of advanced on its own after a couple days. Try turning them in at the Sheriff's office maybe.

It worked just had to wait a few days thanks

 

[adriesch]

You need a translator if you're primary language isn't English and a proofreader if you want to take your game to the next level. The writing and grammar in this novel is hot trash my friend. It's actually painful to read.

 

[Mookys]

When I read the overview for this game, it reminded me a bit of Back To The Future 3.
It sounds great. Thanks for the sharing.

 

[PiggyNose]

I'm on Ch.1 and I need to kill bandits for there bounty how many do I have to kill for the story to Continue
By the way love the game keep up the good work I know its gonna be amazing when finished man.

I'm glad you liked it! About the bandits, I answered in the spoiler.

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[PiggyNose]

You need a translator if you're primary language isn't English and a proofreader if you want to take your game to the next level. The writing and grammar in this novel is hot trash my friend. It's actually painful to read.

English really isn't my primary language, I'm going to ask some friends to help me review this version before I start writing the next chapter.

When I read the overview for this game, it reminded me a bit of Back To The Future 3.
It sounds great. Thanks for the sharing.

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I'm a big fan of Back to the Future. In fact, I'm going to watch it again today to give me inspiration for new scenes.

 

[zoner1994]

So are any of the Saloon girls gonna be "romancable?" I see the dev addressed this in an earlier post a while ago but I didn't quite understand what they meant.


For me the story just kind of advanced on its own after a couple days. Try turning them in at the Sheriff's office maybe.

of course u just need to pay them

 

[Deleted member 2744443]

Writer error: Tyler Adams (bully lineage of bandits), couple of scenes after sucker punch, states "Your Grandfather" correct should be "His Grandfather" as the subject is from prior sentence about Tyler Adams grandfather. Plot advice: $30 medical/clean clothes fee, would be like $3000 (inflation) for the student, who is naked. I suppose he will work for the fee. Writer's grasp of the wild west is poor too, Hunter license, for wild animals yeah right. I wonder if the viewer and dev knows that is Calamity Jane on the Saloon wall painting, above the bar? Wake up at Doctors house after passing out from night drinking with Jeffries, unlocks "saloon" but you had it already unlocked by going to the saloon with Jeffries. Game should recover health by sleeping in the Hotel, no change in health. Have to pay to have health restored by doctor, not a good balance.

 

[UncleGrandPad]

If someone posts gallery unlocker or full save file tag me pls, this game just rips my hair out.

 

[packard1928]

I'm glad you liked it! About the bandits, I answered in the spoiler.

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When I go to look for bandits... there is no bandits found....

 

[PiggyNose]

Writer error: Tyler Adams (bully lineage of bandits), couple of scenes after sucker punch, states "Your Grandfather" correct should be "His Grandfather" as the subject is from prior sentence about Tyler Adams grandfather. Plot advice: $30 medical/clean clothes fee, would be like $3000 (inflation) for the student, who is naked. I suppose he will work for the fee. Writer's grasp of the wild west is poor too, Hunter license, for wild animals yeah right. I wonder if the viewer and dev knows that is Calamity Jane on the Saloon wall painting, above the bar? Wake up at Doctors house after passing out from night drinking with Jeffries, unlocks "saloon" but you had it already unlocked by going to the saloon with Jeffries. Game should recover health by sleeping in the Hotel, no change in health. Have to pay to have health restored by doctor, not a good balance.

Good suggestions, I will implement them!

When I go to look for bandits... there is no bandits found....

You need to go at a specific time of the day when the sky is completely blue.

 

[PiggyNose]

The time of day and day of the week greatly affect gameplay, for example the bank is closed on weekends. You can't go to the Saloon in the morning and most establishments close at night. Some quest triggers also only work at specific times of the day. Riding with Jane and shooting with Diane are also only possible at specific times.

 

[keenkp]

i just played two vision of this game, old and new. I must say the lady is great after rework, and feels like Anna(from anna exciting affection)

This game is good, i think you can put more hookers and some random events that people can play longer.

West is interesting, it also can have some slave things, bang fights, smuggle wine, etc. Keep going Piggy!

 

[zoner1994]

i just played two vision of this game, old and new. I must say the lady is great after rework, and feels like Anna(from anna exciting affection)

This game is good, i think you can put more hookers and some random events that people can play longer.

West is interesting, it also can have some slave things, bang fights, smuggle wine, etc. Keep going Piggy!

yep every harem game (as piggy mentioned that it will be) need more hookers

 

[PiggyNose]

i just played two vision of this game, old and new. I must say the lady is great after rework, and feels like Anna(from anna exciting affection)

This game is good, i think you can put more hookers and some random events that people can play longer.

West is interesting, it also can have some slave things, bang fights, smuggle wine, etc. Keep going Piggy!

I'm glad you liked it! For the next version I'm focusing more on opening up the sandbox part of the game, leaving the MC free to roam the maps and unlock unique events and alternative storylines to the main story. I liked your idea of random events, I can implement it. I'm also writing a fight scene, in the next chapter there will be new people in the county due to the arrival of the railroad, so tempers may heat up a little.

yep every harem game (as piggy mentioned that it will be) need more hookers

The main reason for having prostitutes in the game is so that players in a hurry can get to the sex scenes as quickly as possible, without having to progress too far in the story. They have no emotional involvement with the player nor a relevant role in the story itself.

 

[zoner1994]

I'm glad you liked it! For the next version I'm focusing more on opening up the sandbox part of the game, leaving the MC free to roam the maps and unlock unique events and alternative storylines to the main story. I liked your idea of random events, I can implement it. I'm also writing a fight scene, in the next chapter there will be new people in the county due to the arrival of the railroad, so tempers may heat up a little.



The main reason for having prostitutes in the game is so that players in a hurry can get to the sex scenes as quickly as possible, without having to progress too far in the story. They have no emotional involvement with the player nor a relevant role in the story itself.

not relevant so waste of time develop or play...untill some prostitute junkies like in comment before will want more of them of course in harem game...

 

[Deleted member 2744443]

I'm trying to create a compressed version for Android.

Yes I used workupload because it was pushing my Mega acct timing. It seems the time of day you download effects the rate (Mbs of the download).

 

[Deleted member 2744443]

I am forecasting or at least trying to imagine how the MC will learn martial hand to hand fighting in order to deal with the University bully, without shooting out him out of his world skill learned to date.

 

[Deleted member 2744443]

Women with modern hairstyles and obvious breast implants in the wild west. Going to turn off my brain and lead with my dick on this one

I was noticing the furniture in his room two sides left and right were ok time period wise, but a night stand looked modern. Not sure if it was his house or the hotel room.

 

[Deleted member 2744443]

I mean the woman was wearing a blouse and jeans in 1896

Look I don't need super-realism to fap to porn but throwing a bunch of modern models into the wild west just doesn't do it for me. Here is how women actually dressed and looked 1896 depending on class

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It's just so far removed from what it should look like. Why not just forget the Western background and do a modern-times game using those models?

I do believe the jeans maybe ok, as they were first invented by Levi Straus in the eighteen hundreds. Not certain of the blouse you mentioned. My Grandmother crossed Texas in a covered wagon, but she (the last one) passed on in the early eighties.