I was searching for this concept for a long time and the game has set itself up to be good in theory but there's basically no content even after the update. There is like 2 actual sex scenes in total, and the other 3 are titjob/falling on boobs/handjob. Maybe I am being a bit impatient but I feel like there could be more done with the update. Anyway, a few bits of critique:
>Other than budget issues, there's no reason to make the clients just blue stick figures. People would play this game because they wanna pimp out girls, not because they want to slide some circles on to blue sticks. If not then just go play a harem game. Scenes with the clients in the brothel should be more immersive. The girls should serve actual people. It shouldn't be a thing that just happens in the background and has to impact the personalities of our characters and the story more. Don't say oh then it'd anger the self insertists or would be like ntr or something. Welcome To Erosland does it and it doesn't get any shit, you could take that game as an example. Hell, I'd say the games that did the opposite are less successful. I personally want Eliza (the girl mc, I guess that was her name?) to be open to pimping out, but I understand why you wouldn't do that. If you make it a choice based thing it'd be cool. That body is made for sin after all . (The clients doesn't have to be complete characters, but they should at least resemble one. Maybe don't show their whole body, or hide some parts, idk. They should at least talk and interact with the characters though.)
>Obviously more personal time with the girls as well, but you probably know.
>The mini game thing in the brothel should be skippable after you fill out some conditions, paying the bills for example. You could make it so that you get or don't get money after skipping or maybe get less money. It would depend on the progress and leveling systems probably. Maybe we can choose one of the girls as a manager.
This is it for now I guess. Thanks for the game.