My first pack, don't hesitate to tell me what's wrong or what's good
As you may (or may not) have seen, depending on how far back in this thread you have looked, I do like to give very detailed pack reviews to new packmakers. My criticism may be a bit harsh, but it's always focused on specific issues and is given in the hopes of improved packs from the new creators. The earlier that bad habits are squashed, the better.
I'll also not that I tend to only go into each issue once, unless there is something else to say. By no means does that mean that the specific pic I use as an example is the only pic that has a given issue.
1) _TRASH (00000).jpg - You really should remove these TRASH pics before you release a set. TRASH pics are ones that you have decided are... trash. They will never be used by the game, and are a waste of storage space and bandwidth.
2) anal grope (00001).jpg - A couple of issues here. Grope is not really correct here. The only girl's butt that is touched is touched by herself. Grope, Fondle, and Finger are specifically for her being touched by someone else. Fondle would be appropriate, though.
3) anal grope (00001).jpg - Same pic, different issue. Anal is not really correct. Anal is about the insertion of a male penis. Or maybe a futani. The back girl appears to be using some sort of magical strap-on, which would not count. Remember that these are for illustrating activity at a brothel, where (almost) all the clientel are male.
4) anal grope (00001).jpg - As mentioned in the last point, Strap-on would be appropriate on this pic.
5) anal spoon (00000).jpg - It absolutely can be hard to tell on some images, but I really think that this one shows vaginal insertion, not anal. There's a trail of cum below the insertion point that really looks to be coming out of her ass.
6) anal spoon grope orgasm (00000).png - Grope is grabbing her butt, Fondle is grabbing her tits. This image should be Fondle, not Grope.
7) beast anal piledriver (00000).png - This catches a lot of first time packmakers. In order to keep bestiality and tentacle porn out of the non-farm portions of the game, when either Beast or Monster are present in a set of tags, no non-farm tags will have effect. This mostly ends up applying to the fixation/phovia tags. In this specific image, Piledriver will never be used, and is pointless.
8) beast service oral (00000).jpg - Beast covers realistic animals. Monster covers more fantasy monsters. In particular, tentacle porn should fall under Monster, not Beast. There is definitely a grey area between the two at times, but this pic is solidly tentacle porn, and thus Monster.
9) big group (00000).jpg - While there can be exceptions, for the most part tentacle porn should be tagged Monster, as mentioned above. This helps keep it out of the normal brothel operations pic rotation. (As a side example, one big exception was my Poison Ivy pack. She controls vines so often, using them as part of her sex play, that I went ahead and left the Monster tag off of a lot of images where she is obviously manipulating vines, not encountering a tentacle monster.)
10) big group buk cumshot (00000).jpg - Also should have the Bisexual tag. If a pic has 2+ males
and 2+ females it gets both Group and Bisexual.
To be continued in another post...