- Jul 17, 2019
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Overall, nice! Tested Triss this time. Assuming others are similar.
More detailed feedback:
More detailed feedback:
- You can dispense with all these '//1' bits. I put half-scaling in as a demo, but dividing by one is not going to change anything.
- I was a little surprised to see Philippa 'fondle'ing Triss. That picture needs 'bis' or something.
- Not sure why Ciri is doing the fucking for me in the movie?
- Putting 'naked_filter=True' means the girl's nudity is taken from her 'brothel' state. Which leads to weirdness when the text claims she's naked, but since she's not naked outside the event, she isn't inside it, either. 'False' means nothing happens, you go by tags.
- The 'final2.mp3' loop is a little immersion-breaking for me, since the action is over by then.
- Stat changes are kinda strong, but lack the normal +10% per charisma scaling. Three AP is a lot, though, so that probably balances out.
- The 'elemental army' thingy is addressed, nice.
- As I said before, 'xalign 0.5 yalign 0.5' is better replaced with 'at truecenter'.
- A 'sensitivity' image is by no means guaranteed to even show her lower half, but the text is detailing her asshole.
- The futa event might want to lose some 'fade's before and after the movie that make the transitions less abrupt.
- You might want to use 'strict=True' for some if not all images. Yennefer suddenly jumped into the finale of the RP event. Can't escape her bossing me around, even in a different game.
- You are quite a bit better at coming up with meaningless sex-warbling than I am.