VN - Ren'Py - Onhold - But I'm the Bad Guy? [v0.07v8] [DLGB]

Version Reviewed: v0.02

Overview: Creep on your neighbors.

Story: You were kicked out of your previous job for being a sex pest and move to a small town where you immediately start creeping on everything young and female you meet. The sex scenes include creeping on a probably underage neighbor who doesn't need any corruption, just opportunity. There are also scenes where you creep on an immigrant with shaky english skills. In all cases your advances are against someone who is naiive and open to abuse from an authority figure.

If you are ok with this it is pretty sexy. The dialog is full of innuendo that is supposedly going over the heads of the parents in the room.

Graphics: DAZ but well done. It's not default assets everywhere which is nice. Lots of detail both in the characters and the backgrounds.

Conclusion: If you aren't grossed out by the material it's pretty fap worthy, even in this early version that ends with fingering and groping. The graphics are nice and the story isn't too dumb. The protagonist is definitely the bad guy.

Fantastic

OK this game deserves a lot more love! I love the story line and scene, I love the characters.
The renders are decent. Man, I enjoy it.

First off: I like the MC. There is only a few games of these where I actual like the MC where he is alpha male.

The asian girl is the bomb ( Very Beautiful ). The friends wife is a real mom with character to match love. The sister neighboor is sooo innoncent?.
i m very interest for next update character.

Minor...very minor critique.
The graphics are good and on par with most other games, but are not exceptional.

I wish more people will play and support this game.
Definitely recommended.

Updated Rating 11/16/23: I initially gave this game 5 stars but dropping it now to 3. It feels as though the dev is just feeding it enough with small updates to keep it from being considered abandoned. Never mind the fact I liked the original track of the story but that path feels like it's been abandoned for the homosexual focus. Fine, if that's what you're into, but it's just simply not for me. People will say "well you can skip it" and they're right, sure, but given the dev has developed very little content for some time now, and most of that content has been focused on the gay stuff, it leaves very very little for anyone not interested in that.


Renders were fantastic, story definitely shows a lot of promise (as of writing this - 0.01) and is well written. I feel like the asian bit went a little out there but not horribly so. Definitely will be keeping an eye out for more!

Review of version 0.015

Really hot game, the renders are quite good, I REALLY dig the proportions of the characters, you don't get a game doing younger characters that don't look like sticks often, sadly. The scenes so far are kinda standard, which is fine IMO. No need to reinvent the wheel at every opportunity, although the carrot scene in the kitchen was hot af, more of that please. I also appreciate a genuine trap character, none of that trans bullshit many other games are going for, literally just a guy being effeminate (and probably gay given the foreshadowing) made interesting by the conflict of interests between him/the mother and the father.
Also much better writing in this version than in the previous one, props to the dev for going through the script again and tidying it up a bit, it goes a long way.
Criticisms I have is that the MC sometimes, especially in the dark, looks like he has no pupils, and that the couple choices in the game don't really matter much, if at all.
The good/evil voices the MC hears are just there for comedy relief so far, maybe a morality system is planned, but for now selecting the non-lewd choice just nets you less scenes. Which is fine, you don't need choices for a good VN, it's just kinda strange to have very few of them and they don't matter at all.

the game definitely has potential I'm excited to see where it goes, i'm hoping the developer keeps up with the game,I'm hoping the game gets the attention it deserves so far it looks really good,the girls look very good and everything

The writing is meh, and the spellchecking isn't great either, the models are meh. Nothing horrible, just not anything good. The neighbor wife's most interesting feature are her buck teeth, but she otherwise looks very average. Neighbor daughter spends too much time being the annoying little child, so you, as the player, know that she is most assuredly jailbait.

MC is a selfish dick, which is never really anything I'm a fan of, but you do you. Now you know.
It's pretty much your generic "MC fucks anybody he wants, even the children, while being a selfish prick" game.

Utterly meh.
ver 0.15

First thing to say is this is an extremely early review and as such is based on the fact that there is next to no content right now, patch 0.1, however the premise is one of my favorites and the scenes so far are good. You can see that as the main character there is a "trans" character which i like, a naive daughter which is great, and a wife that you are going to corrupt all of them which is a fun game idea. This is a netori VN where you are going to corrupt someone else family so fair warning.

I'm, also, a newbie, as visitor or fun of adultgames. I´m middle aged. However, I´ve stucked, for the first time, in this game. I search for well draw feminine characters and, mainly, an intelligent, psychologist and logical structured drama. Maybe, because you are also a newbie, you've got a fresh style and ideias. Please, believe in you and don't get too influenced by weird or sick ideias. Maintain your mental health. Saying this, I suggest: Please, don't change the wife because "she's too keen on how she turned out". Precisely, her good looking and blush when butt tapped, that's the sensual secret of mindbreack. She'll need to be triggered by something (only knows missionary, southern moral, the husband is the owner of her sacred pussy, in normal routine duty of motherhood - never had an orgasm). Maybe, she also gonna see, first, the "package" of MC. Day after day, she's curious to give the "no man´s land" of her body - Ask for the medical physics skills for her injured ankle; some discret grope. After some sessions, BJ, anal. The main dish is sacred reserved to her husband (it´s how she see the sacred moral infidelity and because she´s not on pill). Then, she will need to be, once again, triggered, by something (Despite, once she tastes anal and orgasm, won´t resists much to get it in her sacred spot).
I would let the daughter grow till 14, just with training, unless she see's the mother taking anal or foundle with her brother. I suppose the arrival of a, still, naife young former nurse employee from the hospital, just wishing for another round of the MC "package", as a "cousin" or "niece", that could distract the husband or get into the secret of the sexual cult religion of town. Meanwhile, I give 5 for the good introdution, that promises too much.

For this initial release i can not say i trust completely that ti will fulfill the expectations, and i expect it to take some time nevertheless.

Its pretty short, i dont think it is showcasign enough for me to know how to rate it better, the only thing i can say is that it takes time in storytelling, not only the text but also the visual, and i like VN that do that. For instance i dont care if in some game one guy gropes a girl with some default dialogue, but if the guy gropes the girl and there are some dynamics between the 2, and somekind of story or purpose behind it, im all for it.

And this particualr scene im describing is really interesting. I dont want to rate it 3 cause it would seem like average and clearly is not, its way too short for 5 and there is almost nothing sexual so i dont think its enough for 5.

I will definetly give it 4 expecting the teasing and storytelling quality remains the same when actual sex happens. So far the Thicc girls and the way it tells the scenes is really different and interesting. It gives me good vibes.

Already love everything about this story, its just teeming with potential. All the characters are already lovable and then there's the MC who I so badly wanna trade places with. The character models are already perfect in my opinion, or at least the parts I've seen of them. Just the little bit of retrospective into the life of Riley as the young boy trying to find himself and how he feels about his body, or maybe he's figured it out for the most part. The curious southern belle that Hailey is presented as is a common trope but one that never gets old for me. One really interesting this is that, I might be wrong but, I'm sensing some tension between Alice and Oliver, like something isnt going right in the relationship and and one of them wants more than the other is willing to give. My guy Oliver here just seems too happy-go-lucky to me to be just a perfect happy husband, but maybe I'm wrong. I'm really looking forward to the introduction of the other characters. The set up for the story wasn't drawn out or confusing at all, same with the introduction to the lore of the town. Everything is laid bare perfectly for us. Great work, can't wait to see more.

Amazing start, this game shows great promises so far.
I'm all for the big bad doctor setting his eyes on the friendly neighbors wife daughter and son.
Great models, can't help but describe the son as "very girly but in a reallistic way" maybe pushed to the max.
I'm a big fan of corruption games and this ticks all my boxes.
I also quite like trap/feminization content... when it's done by the player to someone else which seems to be the direction this game is taking; it's rare enough to mention.
The story and pace are really well done with the looming forshadowing of the rich and powerful town's family which can lead to all sorts of fun down the line.
As of version 0.1 there isn't much content right now which isn't a bad thing; what is there is excellent for a starting point and they show a good mastery of how to make a porn scene from the dev. I'm glad it's not prioritizing a porn galore over a well contructed story that gets you invested in the characters and their upcoming changes.
I'm gonna keep my eyes on this one for sure, can't wait to see what's next.