VN - Ren'Py - Onhold - But I'm the Bad Guy? [v0.07v8] [DLGB]

There exist games with dark/questionable themes that do pretty well; this is not a game so it doesn't fall into that category. It's a series of pervy camera angles and a whole truckload of dialogue about how much of a mucho macho manly man the protagonist is. There's no story either, just stuff happening. Imagine if you wanted to watch a heist movie and the theives just went to the bank and the tellers were all already tied up, the safe already open, and the cops nowhere to be found. Everything you can find here is done better elsewhere. Skip it

An excellent game.
good points:
A story with potential.
Some interesting characters.
Lots of future potential.
A lot of eroticism and good dialogues.
bad points:
Short, the story is starting.
He doesn't have any sex scenes yet.

tl:dr
What's the deal with Haley?

As I'm writing this I've played up to the 'carrot incident' and I won't spoil any more of that, but I think it's far enough in to make note of some things.
As a premise It's very nice, the general story flows well, though I think it could go a little deeper. Could use a little exposition.
My only critique thus far is the character of Haley. Who/how exactly is she supposed to be? She's built like a teenager, but she acts like an eight year old brat. Her parents also treat her like that, but there's no mention of the internal anachronism.
Is she retarded? Is this just how they get away with the loli tag?
It's a mismatch that kind of throws the rest of the story off, and I'm trying to justify it, but I can't do so without making some assumptions that don't feature in the game itself.

After playing this game the only question on my mind is; how does this have such a high average rating. This game really weirded me out man. In one of the first scene the MC is literally flashing his unrealisticly big d*ck to a girl that seems to be around 14. Then after the visit this seeming to be 14 year old girl starts to make advances on the MC to see his schl*ng again. What in the world is going on.

Besides the fact that the MC behaves like a paedophile creep, he is also just plain wicked. The neighbour is just friendly and invites the MC for dinner. As thanks, the MC grabs the neighbour's wife's *ss and shows his d*ck to the neighbour's daughter.
Just had to stop playing after that visit to the neigbour.

What a fantastic gem. Certainly going to be a little too much for some people, but I love it and really hope it makes it to completion. The characters are refreshing as is the premise. The trap scenario isn't my personal thing but it suits the game and I'm happy to play along with it. The family is just fantastic and easily my favourite part.

It's... OK. Not something to write home about though. It has an interesting premise but the art is a little.. off. Something with the eyes. Also, as others have alluded to, there isn't a ton of payoff yet. We'll see how this all pans out. In the end, it could be a 5 star. Who knows?

I am playing version 0.03. For a short game play time, the developer make a very good design, story and attractive cut scenes game to us. The 3D model of characters is beautiful. Please add more trap and loli characters! Support!

Hey! Love the game for the most part. Have to admit I am not a huge fan of the gay/sissification stuff, but no kink shaming here. To each their own. I would recommend a few things though.

First is simple - dialogue box transparency. This is simply a killer for your game right now. The scene with the "jaw exercises"? Fucking stunning, and simply one of my favorite scenes of all time. BUT constantly having to click, hit "h" to hide, then click, then hit "h" to hide, then click.... etc. was rather problematic, especially *ahem* one handed.

I recently found a guy who made a universal mod to handle this, here is the link to the F95zone mod, and if you simply add his patch to your base game it solves this problem immediately. https://f95zone.to/threads/renpy-transparent-text-box-mod-v2-6-3.11925/

Second, Personally I would probably prefer making the gay/sissification stuff even more optional. It's not like other kinks that are more generic, it's HIGHLY specific to a particular population AND rather polarizing as far as kinks go. So for scenes like the one in the tub, while not about that specifically, would probably be better if there was a whole new branching path that excluded the brother entirely.

Ex- option A, exactly as it is now. Option B, player specified they wanted to avoid that stuff when in the shower, so now rather than his finger up her butt she used, I dunno, a hairbrush handle or a toothbrush handle while in the tub. Would mean you need to have two paths of dialogue for the bit leading up as well, and probably continue with this moving forward, which is rough. I can see how much extra work I am suggesting, and do not make the suggestion lightly. However I feel strongly this would improve the overall reception of your game simply due to the polarizing nature of that kink.

Finally, I already mentioned how much I loved the finger in her mouth scene, but good god if you could do more of that sort of thing I would be forever in your debt. I dunno, maybe have him suggest to her parents that you need to come over for frequent mouth expansion training or whatever, bonus points if the mother watches this happen and doesn't interfere with your "medical expertise" as you make the daughter alternate between sucking on your thumb and deepthroat training her. Eventual end is obvious of course, but hot damn would that be a sexy way to build up the corruption.

Great game, love it so far. Good luck to you!

More Riley! Bathroom scene is one of the hottest ever! Love the blatant exhibition. Can't wait for the hot action to come between MC and Riley. A few more choices would make this game absolutely perfect. Looking forward to many more future updates.

played v 0..3

least amount of content i've ever played and enjoyed. Really hope the dev keeps updates of similar quality coming, cause damn this is some good shit. An unapologetic bastard of a mc, who corrupts a loli and shota trap. What more could someone ask of in a vn? The dialogue is also amazing, no engrish or anything. If you like the tags you'll love the game.

Crazy fantasies , great render. Dev has his own style , signature game. Every update is make you excited for next. Alice is my fav. character , she is neighbor wife whom married with submissive husband. Our mc is tall strong alpha male and probably he'll do crazy things to her .. Don't miss to play this awesome game and support this special developer for future works please.

By far one of the most erotic games I have played recently is a must-play just for the fact that this game is an actual slow-burn game. ( No sex scene but some of these are just as hot)

This game is dark in the best way it's insidious other games struggle with dark material because they go sledgehammer to an egg dark which is basically rape or mafia hitman or drugs and they usually fall flat. This game though the way scenes are delivered made me legit say "This is fucked up" in the best and hottest way.

I love the MC because he is a scumbag and they let you know that by his past and he leans into it and not in the tiresome "I am trying to be the good guy" or shades of gray he is a full scumbag day one he knows what he want's doesn't BS and waste with his inner conflict or get scared as soon as he see what he want's he goes after it.

The Mom and Japanese are good classics in how they are seduced. The Son is a trap but the absolute star is 100% the Daughter her scenes are just absolute fucking masterpieces and her scenes had me going that's fucked up but again the best way possible without feeling icky like some games struggle within the loli tag. (at the same time though if you have aversion to loli I would say avoid this because the material is genuinely fucked up) I have no feeling either way to the fetish as long it can maintain a suspension of belief.

Only knock I have is the angel and devil dialogue I feel as though it is completely not needed it might be there to lighten the mood but still dislike. This game is great at what it does and I haven't played a game this refreshing for a minute and that's not a knock at other games this seems to have complete confidence in what it does and its writing it understands it's a porn game and understands how to usually Erotica writing technique to keep the satisfaction without the sex and actually have a real slow burn experience.

high level deviant this game is pretty and has a lot of fucked up deviant things in it. It's not your normal 18-21 giga chad with a big dick but rather an old baldy hunk with a big dick that's in a funk in his life after getting fired from his job as a Board of Hospital that moves in a suburb in the middle of nowhere beside this naive religious cuck. The protagonist is going to fuck/rape/goom everybody he finds attractive...

There’s pornography and there’s erotica. Both can be hardcore. Either way you’re usually going to see genitals bumpin’ together. But pornography is blunt force, thrusting flesh on flesh in front of your eyes and hoping you’re in the mood to abuse yourself, cause that’s it, folks, that’s what’s on offer tonight. You get your generic plot (Brother comes back from college and dicks down everything still moving in the house or a teacher plows through an assortment of sluts), your standard dirty talk (”fuck me with that big dick, bro, harder” or “pound this slut-whore pussy, you’re so much bigger than my husband”), and your pre-selected garden variety stable of wanton women who fuck at the drop of a dime.

Erotica is a horse of a different color. It coaxes you, draws you in, lures you with whispers and promises of illicit thrills and an awful good time. It teases you in all the right ways and if you dig the fetishes it has, and sometimes even if you don’t, you fall under its spell. It withholds full-on orgies and sex parades because it’s confident enough in its writing to turn you on in subtler ways, and keeps you hooked not just for the inherent promise of what’s to come, but with what’s happening right now. It can turn a smack on the ass or a thumb in the mouth into an orgasm-worthy moment, and even in the afterglow you find you’re still pressing the spacebar because you want to see what’s going to happen next. ‘But I’m The Bad Guy?’ is erotica, through-and-through. It is deeply powerful libido cocaine, and I really love what it’s doing.

The premise is actually quite simple. Doctor Groper gets sacked from his old job for too much gropin’ and high-tails it to the suburbs to start fresh. Immediately upon arrival, he meets his neighbor, an oblivious husband mowing his lawn, and the descent into corruption begins as soon as the husband’s wife steps out onto the terrace above them.

This is a slow-burn. As of the writing of this review on 0.28b, there is still no actual sex. But there is always something happening, something twisted and wrong and depraved. Doctor Groper has his eyes set on the husband’s wife and their two children, one girl, one boy (along with a big-tittied Asian pit-stop that could fit right into any decent JAV), and underneath every single scene there is this tantalizing current of power as Groper does unspeakable things to this dude’s family. Braces, carrots, juice boxes, a goddamned rubber ducky, everything becomes soiled in this lecherous ditty.

I’m not a 'trap' guy. At all. That fetish just isn't in my wheelhouse, and I've avoided or stopped playing other games because of it previously. But this story is so fucking good I sat through whole scenes of it. I didn’t skip shit (Yes, you are given the option to), because the dev knows exactly what he’s doing. The renders are great, sure, and the models for the women are already fap-worthy but the story, the writing, the situations the game provides; that’s where the power lies. And one last thing. There’s no rape, there’s no violence, there’s no gore, but make no mistake about it, this game is nasty. It’s not mean-spirited, but yes, Groper is absolutely the bad guy. If you’re cool with that, and with maybe needing to shower your soul later, this is primo, grade-A, powerfully erotic filth. I can not recommend this game highly enough.

Heaps of potential is what this game has. The possibilities for corruption are limitless and the implications on where this game will be heading are absolutely awesome.
I'll confess I've enjoyed the 0.028 update quite a LOT... if you catch my drift.
Excellent work. Would totally recommend to family and friends.

beautiful game, it just should became a hit. it's early version currently 0.028, not really much content, but clearly seen a potential. really hope for much anal tag in the future. love arrows for Riley even music work is nice.
tags, what I saw: 3dcg, anal play, incest, teasing, trap (male protagonist)

I am really loving the way this game is shaping up. Absolutely crave for focus on corruption like this. Of course the neighbour's daughter but also her brother the effeminate trap. That is an incredible inclusion, one worth a round of applause!! Layer in /just a little/ watersports into scenes like when he walked in on MC in shower -- and more focus on brother sister self-discovery & corruption -- and you would have a new patron in me immediately.

Can't wait to see where this goes from here. Needless to say I am hungry for more (...carrots ;-) !!!

Stay true to yourself dev, stay on this path and don't let the "vanilla sexual appetites" pull you off track -- not from what is the best game I've played in a Long Long time!

I don't have much to say, the girls are freaking hot, even the son seems to be hot, but theres little content yet and no branching path. There's like just a couple of scenes that are worth jerking and they don't have that much to it, but the models make up for it.
The MC is a strange choice. Don't know if it's based on someone, the devs or is just a bought asset, but he's definetely a weird looking choice.

I played V0.02, this game definitely has potential to be an excellent corruption/NTR game. I don't usually like NTR, but this one seems to have more of a unique protagonist with two parts of him arguing with his core self of course being in the middle of it, and being a badass that knows how to corrupt people nicely. The other characters we have show potential of corrupting, and are pretty interesting for a start. The renders are also pretty good for the most part, some minor things but aren't really that big of a deal would be some words misspelled, and reading a character said this when it was supposed to be someone else. Overall this is great start, and I'll definitely keep an eye on this one.