VN - Ren'Py - Onhold - But I'm the Bad Guy? [v0.07v8] [DLGB]

This thing starts bad. Poorly written, rushed scenes, the works.
I´m a taboo guy. I endure some glaring flaws just to get some scenes i dont get elsewhere. But then...
Then this thing takes off. The dialogue (ok, it´s the thoughs really) gets really funny.. And the taboo. Now there are some really good scenes here.

If you like taboo: endure and you will be rewarded.

Game ver ( v0.0565v4 ) ok without further do ,, lest get to it :

--------- bad -------------- ok -------------- good -------------- excellent

story :
conversations :
graphics :
thrill :
sex content :
typos :
excitement :
sexy models :
side girls :
fetishes :
choices :
humor :

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favorite girls :
Hailey - Chloe - Alice - Sophia the maid - the cashier lady ( beach )
they are extremely sexy

likes :
1- i like it when the game spits some facts & wisdoms here & there .. like what Oliver said at the boys night drinking .. ( sex after marriage - animal acting - controlling desires ) and so on .. which i agree
2- the narrator is not always talking and bugging you all the time like the other games .. there's more conversation .. which is way better . and i like the amount of chubby girls & humor there ..

dislikes :
1- THIS GAME only focuses with a secondary weird fetishes like ( sucking fingers - licking toes - bestiality - smelling panties - smelling ass - spitting in your mouth - anal plugs & stuff ) .. OHH the DEV is so obsessed with Ass in this game .. like ALOT .. and he totally ignores the common goal .. or SHOULD I SAY IT OUT LOUD ? .. YESS ( Pussies ) .. REMEMBER ? .. which is actually the natural way .. but this annoying MC will always go like ( im just gonna stick my finger in her butt & suck her freaking toes .. that's ALL i need .. who cares about fucking her juicy warm pussy ) .. ??? .. like .. what the HECK man ? why don't you make the MC fuck a TREE next time in future updates & forget about the girls all together !!

2-theres way to much blue ball in this game with 0 sex scene until the end of the version ( it toke me 5 days to beat it ) yet its all about fingering the butt of the girls only .. no sex what so ever .. a 5 days game play ( IN A FREAKING PORN GAME ) with no sex scene is not acceptable .. its way to long .. i could of beaten 2 games in these 5 days .. and later the DEV will abandoned the game while its still in a blue ball stage

3- the characters they act like they have a .. problem .. they kept on contradicting them selves all the time .. until now i cannot understand what kind of a guy the MC is .. some time he is the funny nice & wise guy .. and then all of a sudden he is
so Dark , creepy & abusive bastard .. so which one is it ? these are 2 different personalities & they cancel each other out .. its simply impossible to be both at the same time .

even the kids they have the same issue .. they are 18 .. yet they are acting as if they are 5 years old .. Hailey the naive little girl who likes ice creams & wearing children clothes .. then BOOM .. she is a horny freak & obsessed with cocks ? and Riley is the little feminine boy who enjoys playing sport with kids at school .. THEN BOOM AGAIN .. he have a secret girlfriend & they are talking about love & adults romance ????? .. make up you mind bro

3- i don't like it when the DEV is trying to push a false info as if its true or fact .. like the idea of ( wives cheating on their husbands with the milkman while the husbands is busy at work .. is some kinda hot fantasy for the husband ) this is a BS lie .. men would kill for this some times bro .. & your telling me that is hot for men ? fuck that .. its totally false claim .. however .. it could be hot only for the milkman & the others who's watching .. but definitely not the husbands in general

so in conclusion do i like this game ? well .. yea definitely yes and waiting for next update .. but i hope the Dev will fix these problems in the future versions .. & that's all folks ..

This game has a number of pros and cons. And also some dubious points that can be interpreted in two ways. But I don’t want to analyze it in too much detail, I’ll only focus on what seems to me the most important
--Pros:
Renders, the game undoubtedly has excellent renders. And there are five seconds of bestiality.

--Against:
Development speed and micro-updates. Since its initial release, very little new content has been added to the game. This is sad. I have a feeling that for the author, work on the project is either of a secondary place, or he is tired and has lost the direction of where to develop it further. And it ruins much of the enjoyment of the game.

--Doubtful.
Narration. It looks completely crazy and somewhat illogical, but somehow it is captivating, a sort of caricature of what is happening and its sketchiness, like in fairy tales. Anyway, most of us are here for the sex scenes.

The plot is as dumb as the characters and I don't particularly like most of the kinks.

Dialogue is ridiculous and silly. The art is ok - nothing amazing, but better than most generic 3D renders.

So why 4 stars? Because it features tons of anal and butt-focused scenes. Not as a one-off thing just to add it as a tag, nor as the final step of the typical hand-tits-mouth-vagina-ass linear path. No, the MC goes straight for the butt in many cases, and that's something that very few games do.

Thick lolis... Damn, that was fresh.

This game is really good, almost perfect. Lots of thicc characters which is right up my alley. Reasonable dialogues, good renders, interesting story. Can't wait to see where this goes from here. Needles to say; making loli characters thicc is a very good idea. Also more Chloe scenes please.

I enjoy netori, no matter how ridiculous the plot gets, it's usually enjoyable. It did seem like the author knew what he was doing at first, but I'm guessing he lost sight of where this was going and decided to branch out. The writing enters make-believe territory at some points. Some bad decisions, some nonsense here and there with more creepy and rapey stuff sprinkled all over. Average overall. More focus might have done a lot for this one.

Story:
The story itself is really poor, not engaging, unique or believable (even in a purely fiction sense).
The pacing is awful though, often going between a rag tag of scenes with no build up, to huge swathes of dialogues.

Originality:
Can't say it is particularly original, although it's originality is somewhat buoyed by the fact similar games would often be removed.

Renders:
For the most part they are bad, however in the last update there seemed to be some improvement, but inconsistent.

Animations:
As others have mentioned the animations are pretty low quality, and most of them are clicking power points rather than running animations.

It is 0.054 as of now, if the game improves i will probably update my review.

An anthem to the taboo indeed.

It's not a perfect game by any means, it's short and the "animations" are just a power point presentation.

But it makes it up by having an MC that is not a wimp, and by having great build up with the characters. The teasing is great, and to be honest not a lot of other games do it was well as this one. Games usually go straight into sex or take forever to make any progress. This game though, i find it pretty well balanced.


The way he trains Hailey and teases Alice is really well done.

Just came across this game and have to say it's another mediocre game. Doesn't feel like any thought has been put into the story at all. No true "animations" like 90% of the games I come across on this site. No plot build up with the different characters. Just a creepy dude who thinks he looks cool wearing sunglasses all the time. If I was looking for a plot with no real build up I would just watch a porn movie. Maybe in 3 to 4 years if this game is still being made, with a major rework, it might be a 4 star or above game.

Gotta love the story and characters of this one. The sheer degeneracy of the main character and the banter of his internal demons are both entertaining to observe/read. I must say that the MC is not suitable for "self-insertion", *pun intended*, at least perhaps for the majority of the players, the MC gives a fresh breath of character, giving a different experience and perpective, (ultra degenerate to be exact) amongst the generic "pretty boy, nice guy" placeholder MCs that plague this site.

There's also no annoying drug/magic/pheromone plot devices (at least as of this writing), which are already overused and not on creative ways on top of that. Atleast the MC in this game/story gets laid through sheer tenacity and degeneracy.

PS. I hope that the bug with characters speaking another character's dialogue line gets fixed. It gets confusing sometimes...

Better than expected.

I love that there are lolis there aren´t many Renpy games with them so that is a big plus.

The story is okay, there are some things that are not good the japanese girl feels like filler and all scenes with Pam and thois Ntr kinda shit is awfuo and almost makes we want to give only two stars, it isn´t really Ntr but it is very close and I fear that in future updates it gets worse.

The sex scenes are pretty hot Riley scenes are my favorites, but every other scene is great too, ecept the moments when Pam is on screen.

The character are good enough nothing amazing but I liked them. Hailey got a bit too annoying sometime but other than that I loved Riley and that the MC is very unusual he is the worst person imaginable and that wouldn´t fit if he was your average MC teen boy, instead he looks like a character who would sell drugs or something in other games.

I still have one big problem though, it feels too slow paced a lot of times and there is a lot of teasing and not much else I hope in the next updates that will change.

depends what you look for.

What I like a lot is, that for a change the MC is finnaly not a young little boy but an older masculine guy. Also you get to experience a lot of crazy pervert fantasies. It is officially all legal content but to be honest it feels very questionable. Anyways... what you get is a lot of trash talking to get a milf and little girls and boys onto your dick. It also includes very bad hardcore cp--bestiality-rape. If you are into that and also a lot of "little-boy" stuff, this is the perfect game for you.

For me personally it was a little too much and also I am not into little boys or gay content at all, so I guess its not for me. In addition it is sometimes a lot of text to read through... which is not my thing if the story is not very good.

So you can make your own choice...

[ 0.054v2 ]

Quite a dark fantasy (as per the title), but most of the more extreme /objectionable content is skippable, as far as I noticed. At any rate, an order of magnitude softer than RedStar Studios stuff.

Storywise it is a strange mix of believable and unbelievable dialogues. The basic premise is not fantastic, but the speed with which MC gets to do what he wants, is quite unrealistic. My impression is that author didn't want too much story get in way of action. Therefore those who'd look for a real rich story VN will be disappointed. Nevertheless, many of dialogues are quite enjoyable, and I liked the pace.

The h scenes and their premises seemed very good for most part.

My only practical objection is (as is in so many cases of AVNs) the ubersize of MC's dick. I mean, sure... he is supposed to have a larger one, but none of the h scenes look in any way realistic, because that size would have it physically come out on the other side of the head, when receiving bj, for example.

All in all 5 stars, very promising.

I'm honestly not sure how this VN ended up rated as high as it is. It simply isn't good from the get go.

You play as a rather ugly character with no charisma or charm, a scruffy beard and a weirdly oversized penis. He pervs on anyone in front of him. The fact that any female would be interested is very unrealistic as the character you are playing as is a very large douche.

The female models aren't what you could call attractive and the writing isn't very good, not that there is much of a plot. No sex appeal at all. It's so bad I gave up on it.

There are far better options out there than to waste time on this one.

Just written like garbage. None of the characters are actually characters at all, they're basically just cardboard cutouts looking for sex. You genuinely might as well just skip through it just to watch the one or two good scenes in it if you only need 3 minutes to yourself. I will also mention if you DO read the dialogue, it is intensely creepy and weird. I wouldn't want to leave just about anyone alone with this dev if this is what they think is normal.

Not bad, but not good either, compared to other VNs I've tried. Has some good scenes, but overall the player character is just too unlikable for my tastes, (which I suppose is part of the point?), and the illusion of choices are shallow most of the time. I didn't end up finishing the game, so maybe it gets better, but it's odd to me that the ratings for this are so high.

I usually force myself to wait for games to be fully released but I cant hold back for this one. Cant wait to see where it goes.

This game hits a ton of my guilty pleasures and even got me into some new ones. With most other games I will skip through the writing and just get to the good stuff since its usually boring or not well written. However the dev has always kept my attention and has me invested in the ongoing story.

Pretty fucked up, but also pretty raunchy. I like the character models a lot and though there are no animations, I don't think you really need them if the writing/cgs are hot enough. The game is especially good when it comes to scenes of taking advantage of a characters good nature or naivety.

While you are definitely playing a messed up dude who will constantly push boundaries or take advantage of naivety, you have some measure of control to not let the game get too fucked up (or you can go there if you so choose). You're going to be doing fucked up shit no matter what but the game doesn't twist the knife to make you feel bad about it like some others do. Maybe that will change in the future but it seems like the most unsettling tropes are avoidable at least.

The story gets more interesting with the new updates. Visually, and I've seen some people say it wasn't good, but I must be a simple person as to me it's good enough
It's above average, but the kinks make me rate it a lot higher than I would have otherwise.

The last update was a real eye opener, first the "hero" rapes a girl, the he lets the dog have its way with her and then just leaves her to her own devices, this is the sort of thing I might have found in "Raptus". Now he really is showing his real character, just as a bad guy should, the little Japanese girl is also going to get her dues from the looks of things, and all the women and that one little boy are really going to suffer, great story , keep it up.