Dev has an interesting, fresh game here, but seems there is little development or reason why he is not focused on any one person or household. Just like "the House that Jack Built", he just floats around and lands and injects chaos. I don't feel like the MC masterminds anything. It would be nice if the MC was more methodical and focused on a goal. Why does he do what he does. What is this voice in his head. The mess he creates, how can he clean it up or how does he deal with the fallout.
Also, the MC should stay the MC. I don't think we want to follow Riley's life as another MC. Maybe I am the only one.
The rule of 3, what you put out comes back times 3.
Also, the MC should stay the MC. I don't think we want to follow Riley's life as another MC. Maybe I am the only one.
The rule of 3, what you put out comes back times 3.