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Here's a quick port for it. But please note that I am not a Mac user and was therefore unable to test it.
Game compressed Mac port with
integrated Mod v0.02 (~272MB)
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Jeanjacquouile
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It's a really good game! Great renders, nice plot, nice characters!
I'll try to be constructive. I felt like there wasn't any Day 2. In the first chapter, MC and Hayley are talking about meeting the day after, and MC give her some homeworks... And after we are several days later on a road. I guess inserting this second day would be better (and showing Hayley do her homework in the same time). We could see MC become closer to Hayley and her father, it will introduce the drinking night, and give a more logical follow up to the events (the cooking scene at first, and it could give a reason to MC to go to the Church) and only after that the story would lead to this several days later on the road.
It's only my opinion, but I really think the day two shouldn't be ellipsed.
Anyway, continue your work, it's great!
I'll try to be constructive. I felt like there wasn't any Day 2. In the first chapter, MC and Hayley are talking about meeting the day after, and MC give her some homeworks... And after we are several days later on a road. I guess inserting this second day would be better (and showing Hayley do her homework in the same time). We could see MC become closer to Hayley and her father, it will introduce the drinking night, and give a more logical follow up to the events (the cooking scene at first, and it could give a reason to MC to go to the Church) and only after that the story would lead to this several days later on the road.
It's only my opinion, but I really think the day two shouldn't be ellipsed.
Anyway, continue your work, it's great!
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I do agree I might have pushed Hailey's story too fast, a result of not working with a script
tarshack I like negative comments because they keep devs in check to improve but this ones strange. I just added patreon like last week. Day 1&2 were literally unmonetized. Its in the changelog that this third addition wasnt really an update
Lunigu111
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The game is amazing, i need more games like him, until the next update comes.
Spfjolietjake
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So I finally played the second half of day two... I fucking loved it. I can not wait to cuck Oliver, hopefully he will be well aware can't wait to see what happens next.
The barn shot was a nice little hot addition. Best of luck.
can't wait to see what happens next.The barn shot was a nice little hot addition. Best of luck.
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Yes, it was a more leisure and slow burn build up kind of sequence, but i enjoyed too it for delving into the psychology of both characters, Oliver as a well-meaning man but too conservative and naively black & white in sexual things and how they can play into a relationship for his own good and the MC as the careful predator, studying the terrain, alternating between slow observation and the forcefulness of previous chapters in preparing things for his hunt.So I finally played the second half of day two... I fucking loved it. I can not wait to cuck Oliver, hopefully he will be well aware
The barn shot was a nice little hot addition. Best of luck.
Not to mention Alice's body language and silent lurking on their conversation, that along with that imagined barn shot, leaves it in the air that MC might be the one closer to reality in this debate.
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Spfjolietjake
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Run out of reacts but awesomely worded post! Totally agree.
gymnopedies
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Nah, there's plenty of games that are all 'oh the guy wants to resist his urges to become a pervy sub' - Never seen a game that was 'the guy wants to resist his urges to be a rapist / pervy dom', and I imagine that's what the decisions would be centered around, if there were decisions to be made.
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Great game and am wondering were its going, it would be great if the MC doesn't cuck Oliver but does him a solid and makes him more adventures with his wife, kind of like a coach on the nasty, I kind of got that impression from the last update. now I don't usually care that the MC cucks someone but Oliver is a bit too likable and feels like a vary good guy, also doing this would help flesh out the MC and make him far more likable in that he isn't 100% douchebag and can actually have friends and loyalty, he can still corrupt others but isn't just mindless and cruel for the sake of fucking.
Just saying the inhuman douchebag corruptor is super common and forgettable, him doing a few acts of kindness would make him unique.
BTW really like the eyes, though did feel like they were a bit creepy on the new girl
Also do you have like an estimate for the next update, it would be great to have an idea of the wait
Edit: dudes face palm all you like, well I mean I do kind of deserve them so oh well. I still think it would be cool
Just saying the inhuman douchebag corruptor is super common and forgettable, him doing a few acts of kindness would make him unique.
BTW really like the eyes, though did feel like they were a bit creepy on the new girl
Also do you have like an estimate for the next update, it would be great to have an idea of the wait
Edit: dudes face palm all you like, well I mean I do kind of deserve them so oh well. I still think it would be cool
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Spfjolietjake
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This would be such a great and epic thing for a vn titled But I'm the most loyal and excellent friend vn. This idea doesn't belong in this vn and it would kill it for the target audience that wants to have a vn where the mc Is the bad guy.
I don't get why anyone would go into a vn thread with a distinct type of character and then ask the dev to throw that out and make the opposite.
Oliver so deserves to be cucked and harshly imo, he has deprived his wife years of pleasure and satisfaction. My mc is more than happy to make that up to her (dev willing)
goonslagoon
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I don't know dude, the douchebag corruptor has been done to death and a twist would be cool, also I kind of read the title as being sarcastic, "but i'm the bad guy" kind of feels like he isn't really THE bad guy. Also why would he even bother with the whole fire place talk if he was just going to screw him over.
Just saying I was expecting a Douchebag corruptor game when I downloaded this, I am a fan of the genre. Just feel like the game could be greater than some forgettable title.
Also excellent friend title is kind of already lost considering the carrot
Just a question but do you prefer super one dimensional MC's? I mean I kind of get the appeal since you can kind of self insert more easily but wouldn't you want a MC that has more depth?
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Spfjolietjake
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I'm all about netori tbh. There isn't enough of good quality ones out there. Cucking Oliver and his outdated and sad religious fueled views on sex makes him the perfect candidate for it imo. I'm so wanting to make her the mc's.
Yes there isn't many "buddy" vns, I always assumed that is because most people don't want to play wing man to help someone else have great sex with a sexy heifer like Oliver's wife.
My opinion on the title Is that we will meet some horrible people that do horrible things but we are the bad guy. Which means we are the bad guy going against other bad people.
If I misunderstood and this turns into a rom com or a buddy vn I'll admit I was wrong and leave quietly.
goonslagoon
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Not really a fan of rom com either, not too sure what buddy vn are the but can guess that its playing as the info giving friend that gets non so wouldn't be a fan
guess we just got to wait and see what the dev has planned, I just hope it has a decent story for whatever direction they decide to take the game
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I just scrolled through the last couple of pages and I'm confused.
On one hand you've got people complaining that the last update was without content when the dev clearly stated that it wasn't really an update and just an extended ending of Day 2.
On the other hand you've got people talking about redemption for the mc or being a wingman for the husband ... dude what? I get that it would be a different approach but it doesn't seem to be on the menu and I'm glad. Last thing I want is for the MC to turn into a cheerleader... that would make for a disturbing image...
As for the debate of choices vs VN that's up to the dev depending on his plans. Meaningless choices are frustrating but having the choice to see some content or not is fine. I have to agree with the "don't waste time implemeting branches that most people wont see".
BTW it felt kinda weird to have the changelog say "Day 2" when the update starts with "a few days later", (it's just a detail but the naming caught me off guard) ... and why was he going to church to begin with?
I've seen a few people commenting on the lack of homeworks from Hayley and I have to agree; hope we get some of that later.
Still, stellar job so far; do what you feel like doing. There will always be people who disagree, would have done it differently or want to steer things in another direction but the most important thing is that you do what you like. A motivated dev is the best way to keep a project going strong.
Can't wait for the next update.
On one hand you've got people complaining that the last update was
without content when the dev clearly stated that it wasn't really an update and just an extended ending of Day 2.On the other hand you've got people talking about redemption for the mc or being a wingman for the husband ... dude what? I get that it would be a different approach but it doesn't seem to be on the menu and I'm glad. Last thing I want is for the MC to turn into a cheerleader... that would make for a disturbing image...
As for the debate of choices vs VN that's up to the dev depending on his plans. Meaningless choices are frustrating but having the choice to see some content or not is fine. I have to agree with the "don't waste time implemeting branches that most people wont see".
BTW it felt kinda weird to have the changelog say "Day 2" when the update starts with "a few days later", (it's just a detail but the naming caught me off guard) ... and why was he going to church to begin with?
I've seen a few people commenting on the lack of homeworks from Hayley and I have to agree; hope we get some of that later.
Still, stellar job so far; do what you feel like doing. There will always be people who disagree, would have done it differently or want to steer things in another direction but the most important thing is that you do what you like. A motivated dev is the best way to keep a project going strong.
Can't wait for the next update.
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I just scrolled through the last couple of pages and I'm confused.
On one hand you've got people complaining that the last update was
On the other hand you've got people talking about redemption for the mc or being a wingman for the husband ... dude what? I get that it would be a different approach but it doesn't seem to be on the menu and I'm glad. Last thing I want is for the MC to turn into a cheerleader... that would make for a disturbing image...
As for the debate of choices vs VN that's up to the dev depending on his plans. Meaningless choices are frustrating but having the choice to see some content or not is fine. I have to agree with the "don't waste time implemeting branches that most people wont see".
BTW it felt kinda weird to have the changelog say "Day 2" when the update starts with "a few days later", (it's just a detail but the naming caught me off guard) ... and why was he going to church to begin with?
I've seen a few people commenting on the lack of homeworks from Hayley and I have to agree; hope we get some of that later.
Still, stellar job so far; do what you feel like doing. There will always be people who disagree, would have done it differently or want to steer things in another direction but the most important thing is that you do what you like. A motivated dev is the best way to keep a project going strong.
Can't wait for the next update.
Exactly. People wanting mc to be wingman are obviously not the target audience. They come into a game they don't like and try to force their opinions onto the people that actually wants to just play as the bad guy.