VN Ren'Py But I'm the Bad Guy? [v0.081] [DLGB]

[Ghostface Reborn]

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So, for quick context:

You're the bald one. Oliver is the dad and is to your side. Riley is the boy there.

Additionally:

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The grammar could be improved but the truth is clear: Riley is a boy.

the trap is among the most attractive... yet, I'm a bald guy....

 

[A Common Crab]

the trap is among the most attractive... yet, I'm a bald guy....

The bald guy actually isn't that ugly really. It's definitely an improvement when compared to your generic teenager.

 

[ohhaiguize]

This short beginning was awesome, love the oral fixation / stretching thing, cant wait for more. But I do hope the trap content will be optional, not really my thing.

 

[dmmt]

Very nice start. I have zero interest in the 'trap', but the wife and daughter? yep.

 

[johnyp]

i hope that trap etc can be avoided, ntr too if there's going to be it. female characters look nice, n that dad looks cuck lol.

 

[Ghostface Reborn]

The bald guy actually isn't that ugly really. It's definitely an improvement when compared to your generic teenager.

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I'm old and bald! well, at least I'm still the same race. no offence... but, jerking off as the mc is a different race feels wrong.

 

[Dyhart]

Ok usually I don't try first versions but I was intrigued. The teasing/manipulation(done by a man for a change) was really well done. Looking forward to more.

I hope this isn't a serious post.

That was pretty funny. Even I don't need incest quite on that level.

But I'm also guessing it was a joke.

 

[A Common Crab]

i hope that trap etc can be avoided, ntr too if there's going to be it. female characters look nice, n that dad looks cuck lol.

The way things are going netori is going to be hard to avoid.

 

[UnoriginalUserName]

The bald guy actually isn't that ugly really. It's definitely an improvement when compared to your generic teenager.

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I'd agree with this, most MCs are just fucking punchable. That is a shitload of beard though.

 

[myuhinny]

Who the fuck mows their lawn in their pajamas? The neighbor is creepy looking and looks like a adult with a childs head. Man: My name is Oliver. Me: Not anymore it isn't from now on your name is now going to be Creepy ass looking man child. The MC isn't any better and as always he's another generically generic loser with a horse cock who most of the time looks like they're try to shit their pants from the look on their face half of the time.

Would of been hilarious if he would of dropped her.

That is impressive line is spoken by the MC instead of creepy ass looking man child.

The line *Baby I'm pretty sure Lilly doesn't even know how to make fun of anyone * is spoken by creepy ass looking man child instead of Hailey

Looks like Riley's the trap.

The line *aww* is spoken by the MC instead of Hailey.

The lines *Yeah but make sure your dad doesn't see you - and wear something cute like those pajamas* is spoken by Hailey instead of the MC.

The line *Just some places* is spoken by the MC instead of Hailey.

Riley and Hailey both look nice.

 

[A Common Crab]

I'd agree with this, most MCs are just fucking punchable. That is a shitload of beard though.

Not nearly on the level of an Amish though so there's that going for him.

 

[johnyp]

The way things are going netori is going to be hard to avoid.

yea well ofc the cuck's wife is going to need some d but that's not ntr actually cos the cuck isn't mc..n mc atm doesn't have anyone who'd cheat on him so what are you on about?

 

[m4pII]

Great start. Hopefully these tags will be optional.

 

[Tuperr0]

Compressed?

 

[Deleted member 1571716]

I think you're the one misunderstanding. See, he apparently doesn't mind the dick being there as long as it's on his terms, whereas I do and don't want it there at all.

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Yup, I'd go balls deep in her.

 

[A Common Crab]

yea well ofc the cuck's wife is going to need some d but that's not ntr actually cos the cuck isn't mc..n mc atm doesn't have anyone who'd cheat on him so what are you on about?

Netori is when the player takes away someone's significant other. AKA: When you're stealing from someone else. That's netori. The one that causes scandal is netorare.

 

[myuhinny]

johnyp

netori = means "sleeping with someone else's partner," be it their girlfriend, boyfriend, wife, husband NTR is it's abbreviated form but it'll only be NTR if the husband sees it if they don't then I thinks it's just cheating.

 

[KnuckleDragger79]

You have my attention, Dev.

 

[spookyspooky]

I'd like to add that there might be an overhaul of the neighbors wife probably after the next update. Not too keen on how she turned out + lot's of dialogue polishing. This is my first attempt at a game so i'm learning on the go, some mistakes i managed to fix early on, others i was in too deep to go back and fix. Also incest will be a tag but not for awhile.

Thought the mom looked perfect. Great setup so far and will watch for further updates.

 

[KnuckleDragger79]

I'd like to add that there might be an overhaul of the neighbors wife probably after the next update. Not too keen on how she turned out + lot's of dialogue polishing. This is my first attempt at a game so i'm learning on the go, some mistakes i managed to fix early on, others i was in too deep to go back and fix. Also incest will be a tag but not for awhile.

Will you be setting up a Discord as well?