VN Ren'Py By Justice or Mercy [v0.2] [TowerBoyGames]

[Cpt.SumTingWong]

Looks good

 

[Juerhullycin]

Main love interest have two paths each, no two paths are the same, but generally (not exclusively) femdom is found in some of the Love paths to varying degrees, Male Domination is found in the Domination paths to varying degrees. If you want to avoid light femdom or female assertiveness, go with the domination paths and choices. Any Femdom found in some of the domination paths are pretty mild and will have the MC end up the dominant one by the end of the scene.

 

[Oliz82]

Hello.

The summary, samples and tags list made me come. And the result is mixed.

The worldbuilding is correct.
The characters are few and diverse.
The plot is interesting.
The artistic side is well done.

After being called back home, the protagonist decides to find the truth and take back what he lost.
The characters have different personalities, though some may feel similar. The MC seems nice enough and not a dick like usual.
The flow of events is correct, though it may lack a flashback of how it was before leaving. Some choices name seem harsh or odd for the situation they are supposed to describe.
The artistic side is good. Some images are strange though. The sex scenes are well made. The dick is weird, like a stick (at least the sperm is better looking than usual).

There are some spelling issues. You should check again.

Overall, I don't know what to think about this game yet. In the prologue, we learn everybody hates him but when he comes back, only one girl reacts strongly (not even the guys at the end for which it seems more guetting rid of an obstacle than something else). As I was saying, some choices are strange like barely reunited, he already wants to marry her.

Also I wanted to talk about the gay tag. Are you really sure about it? If it's to remove it when people ask you to do it, it's better to not even bother thinking about it. Too many devs yield when there is too much pressure later. I'm also wondering how it can play with the harem tag (I wouldn't mind a harem with both to have bisexual scenes but that's not how harem lover's will take it).

Good continuation.

 

[69Creampie]

Normally I just skip 0.1's but I hope the one with the golden bush is the MC's sis.

 

[Beast Within]

Main love interest have two paths each, no two paths are the same, but generally (not exclusively) femdom is found in some of the Love paths to varying degrees, Male Domination is found in the Domination paths to varying degrees. If you want to avoid light femdom or female assertiveness, go with the domination paths and choices. Any Femdom found in some of the domination paths are pretty mild and will have the MC end up the dominant one by the end of the scene.

out of curiosity, if one of the two paths is domination, what is the other one? my guess would be romance since the game has the tag but is that true?

another thing, assuming the other path is romance and not submission, what if the player would like to romance the lis instead of dominating them but he would not wantt obe dominated, wouldnt that be less restrictive and give the opportunity to create a more maleable character?

 

[FormerlyknownasOlheden]

Those are some very interesting tags. Will let this one simmer for an update or so until I try it out.

 

[Cajun Fox]

Thanks

 

[SlavicBrah]

Always nice to see girls in AVN's sport a bush

 

[69Creampie]

twin sis hates the MC, I guess better luck putting a baby in the little sis instead in a few updates, she's cute enough I guess, just needs a bit of corruption before her cherry gets popped by her bro.

 

[Juerhullycin]

what if the player would like to romance the lis instead of dominating them but he would not want to be dominated

then they are shit out of luck same with, trying to dominate strong female characters because the best you can hope for is a constant struggle for power (domination path) or getting used ("love" path and i use love only because the dev titled them as such).

 

[TowerBoy]

out of curiosity, if one of the two paths is domination, what is the other one? my guess would be romance since the game has the tag but is that true?

another thing, assuming the other path is romance and not submission, what if the player would like to romance the lis instead of dominating them but he would not wantt obe dominated, wouldnt that be less restrictive and give the opportunity to create a more maleable character?

I like your suggestion, I'll work in the option for essentially a femdom block while still on love routes. I try and make most scenes avoidable. No man should be forced into femdom for having a gentle soul.

Hello.

The summary, samples and tags list made me come. And the result is mixed.

The worldbuilding is correct.
The characters are few and diverse.
The plot is interesting.
The artistic side is well done.

After being called back home, the protagonist decides to find the truth and take back what he lost.
The characters have different personalities, though some may feel similar. The MC seems nice enough and not a dick like usual.
The flow of events is correct, though it may lack a flashback of how it was before leaving. Some choices name seem harsh or odd for the situation they are supposed to describe.
The artistic side is good. Some images are strange though. The sex scenes are well made. The dick is weird, like a stick (at least the sperm is better looking than usual).

There are some spelling issues. You should check again.

Overall, I don't know what to think about this game yet. In the prologue, we learn everybody hates him but when he comes back, only one girl reacts strongly (not even the guys at the end for which it seems more guetting rid of an obstacle than something else). As I was saying, some choices are strange like barely reunited, he already wants to marry her.

Also I wanted to talk about the gay tag. Are you really sure about it? If it's to remove it when people ask you to do it, it's better to not even bother thinking about it. Too many devs yield when there is too much pressure later. I'm also wondering how it can play with the harem tag (I wouldn't mind a harem with both to have bisexual scenes but that's not how harem lover's will take it).

Good continuation.

Thank you for taking the time to write this out. I'll comment on the last thing. Currently the gay tag is one character, will be isolated, optional, and maybe I need to change the tag from gay to Trap because that's more of what it is and some argue Traps aren't even gay

 

[proximusArka]

 

[Juerhullycin]

I like your suggestion, I'll work in the option for essentially a femdom block while still on love routes. I try and make most scenes avoidable. No man should be forced into femdom for having a gentle soul.


Thank you for taking the time to write this out. I'll comment on the last thing. Currently the gay tag is one character, will be isolated, optional, and maybe I need to change the tag from gay to Trap because that's more of what it is and some argue Traps aren't even gay

do with the trap what you want there will always be people that will hate it no matter how you are tagging it. The game has great production values and its obvious that you put in the work, i personally would advice you to make the sex animations a bit longer, while the scenes were good they were over kinda quick like.

for the Femdom stuff i reacted the way i did because i have less then zero interest in femdom, harem games are inherently a male power fantasy which is an anathema to femdom. i have no interest in struggle session and constantly fighting for the top spot. same time i don't want to skip girls that's why i play harem games after all.

Last game that had a revenge story and femdom was a miserable affair which was ultimately nothing but a dream for masochists with an humiliation fetish and im 100% sure that the dev was a troll that only wanted to see how far he could push the joke. So if Femdom isn't avoidable in both path i will probably just drop the game once it rears its ugly mug.

right now you pushed me into playing a 100% unapologetic asshole because that's seemingly the only way i can avoid suddenly getting pegged. (tja Emma shit out of luck i guess)

Story wise i cant say to much because what we got was somewhat short, but you should look into ways to denoting the time to the player in better ways. MC cornered Emma in his Flat then, suddenly BJ, says he has to visit his mother tomorrow, Puts on a shirt and leaves to visit his mother and i cant shake the feeling i missed something.

edit: also i hope the revenge isnt fizzling out and we can go to town on those fuckers.

 

[Ali ibn Hassan]

Sounds interesting. The preview pics look good. And I see pubic hair... so yeah all good.

You ran out of dental floss again?

 

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Nice, new game for harem fans.
I hope all the fetishes are completely avoidable, and it's better if the options in the hands of the players.

And congratulations for your first project, I wish you good luck to your game.

 

[Call of Booty]

Love it,but I'm worried about so many characters and paths.If each have own story and path,how long will take between updates and if dev will get burned during the process.

 

[srfsmrf_]

Hey, pretty cool!

Gave it a quick spin.
Pretty nice, colorful UI, something different at least. Like the FS blue/red choices.
Emma is pretty & sexy, good gf material for sure. Skin (boobs) with veins is a + in my book (although, nitpicking, they seem a bit unrealistically thin (lines))

The one animation there was pretty nice/smooth, planning on more of that?

Seems it's fast paced, and there's quite some action already, seems everyone is horny af?
Action-packed stuff is not bad in itself, seems cool, but must be backed by a good story, which, sorry, I didn't pay much attention to this initial run. Planning on doing so another time (2nd release?)

Any plans adding music and/or sfx?

Is see there are a lot of girls on the relationship page. Perhaps it would be nice to have that directly accessible from the game screen (icon @ top right corner I suppose).

Annoying bit is when you want to check stats (of more than 1 girl):

1. pick 1;
2. choose the menu heart icon again to go back to overview;
3. scrolling position is now reset to top;
4. scroll..

So IMO improvements here would be:

1. just click anywhere on the page to go back to girls overview: convenient, no need to move mouse;
2. remember the scrolling position, even when you return to the game & go back to the relationship page later.

I'll keep an eye, gl!

 

[bobdillan]

Futa/trans(optional), Gay(optional)

does this also mean sharing/swinging? (i.e. futa on LI, LI on LI (although didn't see lesbian there so assuming no for this one))

Cause if not I'd suggest adding them to "never being added" because the futa/trans tag especially has come to mean Futa on LI more than anything.

 

[13246qdasd]

Looks very promising, keep it up (also add more watersports)