VN Ren'Py By Justice or Mercy [v0.2] [TowerBoyGames]

[Noble_Undergrounder_of_Ea]

Does this have the justice that least make all males who wronged my MC dead or jailed?

 

[boraxkarloff]

What happened? No animations in the latest update.

 

[Cheerful Tomato]

Very nice start. Looking forward to much more. Congrats Dev.

 

[eddiesays]

Looks interesting, thank you, dev.

 

[Kalenz123]

Let's hope it doesn't

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the same way.

 

[TowerBoy]

The few games that have MC getting fucked over by family/friends always end up pushing the reconciliation route. This one keeps giving options to stick to your guns which is rare. Hope it continues that way.

As it sits there is very little content but as long as Dev stays consistent with updates and progress then we shouldn't have an issue.

Also I expect a Harsh as fuck "Mercy" Route towards everyone that affected MC's life.

Does this have the justice that least make all males who wronged my MC dead or jailed?

It's a revenge story, MC won't be forgiving anyone.

What happened? No animations in the latest update.

Animations won't be every update, v03 has some though.

 

[Noble_Undergrounder_of_Ea]

It's a revenge story, MC won't be forgiving anyone.

Good just named my MC Johnny Blaze now everyone is guilty.

 

[motseer]

TowerBoy, here's my first critique... Your textbox/UI is very unique and quite pretty. I'm sure you spent some time to get it just the way you wanted it and, I'm sorry to say, it sucks. It's nothing but a distraction. I'm not here for the pretty text box. I'm here for the renders, maybe some nice animations, eventually, and a good story. It will really need to be a very good story at this point to convince me to continue looking past... Well, I think you get my point... It was nice that you gave a transparency option. It would be better if you just made it go away. Jus' Sayin'

 

[TowerBoy]

TowerBoy, here's my first critique... Your textbox/UI is very unique and quite pretty. I'm sure you spent some time to get it just the way you wanted it and, I'm sorry to say, it sucks. It's nothing but a distraction. I'm not here for the pretty text box. I'm here for the renders, maybe some nice animations, eventually, and a good story. It will really need to be a very good story at this point to convince me to continue looking past... Well, I think you get my point... It was nice that you gave a transparency option. It would be better if you just made it go away. Jus' Sayin'

There's a option to make it black in the settings. Jus' Sayin'

 

[salome]

music and sound please???????????

 

[Takkertje]

I hope there's gonna be any progress with the trans in the next update.
Was a nice surprise the gender can be chosen.

 

[PickerLewd]

Oops, thanks king.

Thank you very much for sharing, will there be a hotfix?

 

[motseer]

There's a option to make it black in the settings. Jus' Sayin'

Yeah, I saw that. The problem is... black or pink... it's still there. It's up too high. It's in the way and it's annoying. Also, since I dropped by... You're black screen transitions would stay a black screen forever if I didn't click again. There's a timer setting for those. You can even make it fade in and out. It just looks a lot more professional.

I know I probably sound harsh and maybe even rude. The thing is... If you're going to all this trouble and want to be successful, there are tried and true methods for these types of things that popular AVN's have already ironed out. You would do well to stay closer to those styles for mundane things like text boxes and transitions. Let your creativity show in your story telling and graphic art. Again, Jus' Sayin'

 

[TowerBoy]

Yeah, I saw that. The problem is... black or pink... it's still there. It's up too high. It's in the way and it's annoying. Also, since I dropped by... You're black screen transitions would stay a black screen forever if I didn't click again. There's a timer setting for those. You can even make it fade in and out. It just looks a lot more professional.

I know I probably sound harsh and maybe even rude. The thing is... If you're going to all this trouble and want to be successful, there are tried and true methods for these types of things that popular AVN's have already ironed out. You would do well to stay closer to those styles for mundane things like text boxes and transitions. Let your creativity show in your story telling and graphic art. Again, Jus' Sayin'

All good lol, I appreciate the feedback.

 

[MrBenny]

Hmm...some questions about the family or not family setup, so I can properly label them.

This image below is displaying the default settings if the player chooses to NOT label their relationships with the MC.


MC's dad... IS he the MC\s original father on good terms...who remarried to the wife, or is the Landlady (mom) MC's real mom? Same goes for the sister, is she wink, wink...related or not (is she a step sis...where she is the daughter of another man, and is sister by marriage only?)

It's hard to know what to label when you have no information about MC's home relationships.

Regards.

 

[TowerBoy]

Hmm...some questions about the family or not family setup, so I can properly label them.

This image below is displaying the default settings if the player chooses to NOT label their relationships with the MC.
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MC's dad... IS he the MC\s original father on good terms...who remarried to the wife, or is the Landlady (mom) MC's real mom? Same goes for the sister, is she wink, wink...related or not (is she a step sis...where she is the daughter of another man, and is sister by marriage only?)

It's hard to know what to label when you have no information about MC's home relationships.

Regards.

Must be a misnomar, that's his landlord.

 

[MAGO-DAG]

Many people underestimate the Netori genre, overall it looks very promising! Good luck TowerBoy

I'll definitely try it!

 

[MrBenny]

Must be a misnomar, that's his landlord.

Your reply did NOT answer any of my questions.

(Sigh) The whole reason for my question(s) was to avoid calling character's landlord or landlady. And I wanted to know if MC's dad had remarried that woman or she was there when MC was born (more information helps with deciding with what to label house members, for players who don't want to keep them as landlord or landlady).

As well I understand that those overly used tags are done to hide potential incest from the Patreon overseers. But being vague doesn't aid anyone.

Regards.

 

[TowerBoy]

Your reply did NOT answer any of my questions.

(Sigh) The whole reason for my question(s) was to avoid calling character's landlord or landlady. And I wanted to know if MC's dad had remarried that woman or she was there when MC was born (more information helps with deciding with what to label house members, for players who don't want to keep them as landlord or landlady).

As well I understand that those overly used tags are done to hide potential incest from the Patreon overseers. But being vague doesn't aid anyone.

Regards.

MC's Landlord and Landlady have always been married

 

[juliusnestor]