This is a bit of a mixed bag as far as being a Prologue that introduces a new project... You can't really tell if it will end up being a story based VN/Game or just a porn fest under the guise of magical corruption... There is a quite a bit of broken English mixed in, with several words being misused, before and after the back to back porn fest.. I really hate it when a bunch of sex is used in an introduction, because it feels forced and cheesy, almost like the story is planning to take a back seat to the erotic stuff... And it almost feels (to me) like the developers are using it as an advertisement ploy just to pull in as many fan donations as they can... I've seen this ploy used many different times... And usually it's a clue, that the rest will just be more of the same, with not so much a focus on good story telling... Not that I'm saying it will happen in this case, but it's usually a warning sign...
The visuals of the characters are not bad, for the most part... But I just feel like this plot setup feels a bit cheesy, and doesn't tell you a whole lot... I feel like I know more about this VN/Game from the tags, then I do from the cliff hanger plot reveal at the end of this Prologue... In any case, for being so short, and all it's flaws, it's not a terrible prologue... It just doesn't show enough about the project as a whole, and I'm a bit uneasy about the plot premise and how this ball will roll... This is a completely new project, just getting it's feet wet... So I understand, it may get better with time... I went ahead and posted my review (warning - the review has some spoilers)...
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