VN Ren'Py Caerlin: Rising [Ch-5] [Crowne]

[CrowneDev]

Art style reminds me of the earlier art for the anime Full metal Alchemist.

Haha thanks! Glad the style works for you

 

[WitheredTulip]

Just my writing style, more formal.
But hey, thanks for checking the project out

There's formal writing (which I'm all too-known for), and there's Artificial Intelligence writing.
If you're using it to translate yourself... sure, I guess. Tell it in it's memories (if you're using smth that has that) to remain faithful to your style of writing. Because this is painfully AI.

 

[CrowneDev]

Updated the thread with a few improvements:

• Added Spanish Translation
• Added a proper cover image for Caerlin.
• Tweaked the main banner for better composition.
• Fixed the stretched thumbnails — thanks to MagicMan753 for pointing it out!

Appreciate the feedback so far.
I’m glad people are enjoying the story. More to come.

 

[CrowneDev]

Chapter 5 released!
Hope you enjoy it! Can't wait to hear your feedback

 

[capt21]

Thanks For sharing this game.

 

[star0il]

Best academy ever for "studying"

 

[PhineasFlynn]

As an architecture lover, I greatly appreciate the large scale of buildings in the previews.

The story of how an ordinary student became a hero after saving a classmate from CHOKING to death,
by pulling his DICK out of her mouth.

Yeah, story of my life. It's not that I have such a big dick, I've just subconsciously chosen girls with a strong gag reflex my whole life.

Anyway, thanks for share

 

[Rudolfs13]

looks interesting I'll give it a try

 

[pm1616]

renders looks pretty aweet. Sorry to ask a dumb question but which AI tool are you using the generate these images?

 

[stgkjsrbgrsb]

About the MC:
I kept him mostly off-screen so players can project themselves more freely, but I get the preference.
If more people feel the same, I can consider showing him more.

I don't think you should show the MC's face, it ruins immersion. And I don't know why other people are asking for it, there's already way too many games that show the MC's face, yet they always want more, like the pro-immersion people aren't even allowed to have one game.

 

[Mellbear]

This game should have been a harem in all honesty the signs were all there the love interests so far are amazingly well done and I'm just kind of sad even though I don't normally play harem games I would have loved for this one to have a harem option. The game otherwise besides that obvious thing is totally amazing though. I genuinely love it so far. I do dislike people not wanting to show the mc though that is annoying when there is no one but some black shadow. It reminds me of the stupid CAW's on the old wwe video games and that's a no bueno for me.

 

[Mellbear]

Glad you enjoyed it!
Really appreciate you taking the time to read through the whole release, can’t wait to hear what you think as the next chapters roll out

Question? Is there any future romance with vega or is she just a one off intro character? Because that would be pretty disappointing for me since I like her character more than any other female love interest by far.