Brother please invest in some legs lol the game looks good but the girls all have a fat ass and no legs. Kinda looks like they have BBL
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Idk, I suppose it's 20 min long at this moment (v0.1). Longer if you take your time to fap?
It's pretty condensed / pacing is quite fast, no walls of text or smthng.
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Yeah, but the ball was dropped a bit on the English, a bit too many mistakes really. Dunno the origin of dev, some of those are forgivable I suppose, but others were rather sloppy (which anyone could spot reading through it). Makes me wonder how much one actually cares about their game (in it for (all) the right reasons?) (Of course I'm giving the benefit of the doubt here.)
But well, let's see, I did enjoy it & the right ingredients seem to be there. They should get someone with proper English writing skills involved, otherwise I suppose I may be at it again when v0.2 arrives
(I don't mind proofreading, but can't / don't want to make hard promises time/availability wise (but shouldn't take too much time per episode I suppose, and I could do it on the fly while playing through it.))
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Oh, really? I'm not a native English speaker, so I can't judge all that. But for me, I could completely understand what was going on in each line, and I found the story really fun, relaxing, and even reflective at times.
Don't get me wrong, I'm not saying there aren’t any mistakes. I just mean that, at least for me, the dialogue was enjoyable, and it was totally understandable what the speaker was trying to convey.
I think it’s kind of you to offer to fix them, but that’s between you and the dev to figure out, haha.
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Yeah sure, I didn't mind too much, enjoyed the dialogue (although perhaps a bit (too) simplistic at times) and it was only when I started correcting stuff I noticed how many (small) errors/mishaps there actually were.
The writing was pretty snappy (and helps the pacing), but I suspect here & there things got lost in translation (dev not being native English speaker I believe).
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Wait, there's a point system and you can lose points from different choices? Can you still have a harem if you follow the good path only, I don't like corrupting or forcing females.
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There's a walkthrough that comes with the game, you can check what gives and loses points there. It's usually the 'good' ones that gain you points with the girls so I assume you'll be fine on that path.
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I suppose the sight of these buildings. But now you mention it, could be size as well
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Can lesbians be avoided? eye to prevent it from happening for no reason
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The game is an harem game. This doesn't mean that you can unlock all girls in one play, it means that the game will not force you at some point to choose a monogamic relationship with one girl. If the player decided to reject all girls except the one he likes, he can be in a monogamic relationship but he will not be rewarded in some way (Maybe in the epilogue).
So, you can have a good harem or a bad harem in each respectively path or no harem at all. Paths will just unlock different scenes with different girls. While some girls will be primary in one path, they may get some scenes on the other path specially as the game progress. The main difference beetween both paths will be the personality of the MC and the way those scenes unfold. The MC will be more sexually agressive in the bad path and more passive in the good one.
Hope this helps.
Yes, all scenes can be avoided. I'm not convinced on the idea of a trigger warning though.
There is going to be eventually a lot of groupal sex. The main focus of those scenes will be the MC but it will involve some girl on girl interactions since a lot of the positions do.
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Another one, Universal Mods worked with this, so gave it a try. Really glad they did, this really does seem like an interesting game, and so many paths so far it seems. Really liked this start of the game, and early fav for me I would say it Lizzie, she just seems too cute with the innocence about her. Thank you so very much for this, and totally looking forward for more!!!
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so its just a fake harem game