Bro, I wish you nothing but the best, but this is literally nothing. Somebody said that there is about 5 mins of content here and that is wrong. There is 2 at most. 3 if you read every paragraph. Making patreon content immidietly is stupid imo. You're a new dev and have almost no base content to warrant asking for money (meaning that you don't have enough value to give a potential supporter).
Do patreon at some point, sure, but you have to give people more than 6 pages of content (if this can even be called that) before asking for money. Also, if you are going to make the game primarily in english, please put more effort into translating/writing or get someone to proofread stuff for you because in its current state many sentences are unreadable.
Heres the first thing i read, and the first half-stroke I had while going trough this:
Again, wish you nothing but the best with this endeavour, but what you are currently offering is very weak and the immidiate inclusion of patreon content just makes you look greedy.