Ren'Py Cascade Falls [v0.1] [Stray Paranormal]

[Cpt.SumTingWong]

Looks good

 

[gotogo]

Wow really promising demo bookmarked

 

[deneegnetoo]

Can we change MC's name? If not is it planned as an option?

 

[Mii88]

Can we change MC's name? If not is it planned as an option?

Yes. First name only.

 

[deneegnetoo]

Yes. First name only.

Cool, thanks.

 

[mcguy101]

Great start! Quite enjoyable. Hope to see more.

 

[Bob69]

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[rogokin]

This was really good looking forward to the next release.

 

[LordWanze]

Interesting that half of the overview is not really part of the game yet, which is not a bad thing.

Liked it a lot, MC is cool. No clue who the LIs are yet, but already have a favorite.

Skipped the nightclub, very happy that was an option.

Future tags would be awesome.

 

[Leilin1949]

Let's see where this game goes

 

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[kazeiheikaya]

Interesting that half of the overview is not really part of the game yet, which is not a bad thing.

Liked it a lot, MC is cool. No clue who the LIs are yet, but already have a favorite.

Skipped the nightclub, very happy that was an option.

Future tags would be awesome.

Yeah I came back like, am I playing the right game?
Thought we were gonna go through a brutal betrayal opener that then followed up with a move, and up to date stuff. Not just hopping straight into a happy whimsical type MC off rip lol.

 

[JEER0X]

please tell me there's revenge lol i was hoping for a super depressed dude so i could mope around the whole game then seek revenge

 

[LordWanze]

I guess we'll get introduced to the drama part in a future update, there were some hints to that.
Probably through a flashback, hopefully skippable, but most likely drawn out with unnecessary interaction to interrupt the auto skip.
Either way I like the MC, which is very rare, so I look forward for more.

 

[MagicMan753]

It does look interesting and I may check it out later, but there are two things I have biggest issue with off the bat from dev notes.

First, he says supporters will help shape story and how it unfolds, listen to feedback etc. So is this a kinetic story that other people can change based on how much money they give. Just doesn't sound good.

Second, running grammar through chatgpt also doesn't sound like the best idea. Just looking at the preview pics, there is already some grammar issues just from those, so how many more possible errors in actual game.

Just some thoughts, but still might check it out in a future release like I said.

 

[Ali ibn Hassan]

" Steve Reed returns from deployment to find his fiancé married to his best friend "

Thnks fr shrng

 

[MiltonPowers]

Really enjoyed the demo. Story has a lot of potential and I'm quite excited to see where it goes from here. Some exposition about the ex and ex friend is surely coming when we have our first session with Elena on Day 4.

The MGs and SGs are mostly interesting so far and it looks like we have a lot of player agency to shape the romance/s we want. Very keen to see what happens next.

 

[strayparanormal]

...running grammar through chatgpt...

And then through Gemini for good measure ))

Hi everyone! Dev here. I'm pleasantly surprised that CF got on the f95 and that you care enough to leave feedback. Let me address some concerns and answer some questions.

holy shit this is so funny. I was legit thinking about this game last night. As I remember I used to see post about it on reddit a year or so ago. I was starting to think the dev decided to quit and not even make an AVN or something

You right. I did released a demo version a year ago but it didn't get a good reviews. Main complain was why should anyone care about MC. I went back to the drawing board so to say and redid intro. Also I stopped posting on the reddit because I though it is wrong to hype people up for a game you don't know the release date yet.

oh no mini games. lets see how long before i give up.

Skippable. Free roams skippable too. Minigames will come in second chapter though. Or maybe they will not come at all. I'm not decided yet.

Interesting that half of the overview is not really part of the game yet, which is not a bad thing.

Liked it a lot, MC is cool. No clue who the LIs are yet, but already have a favorite.

Skipped the nightclub, very happy that was an option.

Future tags would be awesome.

Yeah I came back like, am I playing the right game?
Thought we were gonna go through a brutal betrayal opener that then followed up with a move, and up to date stuff. Not just hopping straight into a happy whimsical type MC off rip lol.

The whole overview is one giant lie there was no betrayal of the gf with the best friend, no army story/past , no depressing background, no mini games and no side quests you would think the games first release would cover the basic of the MC backstory instead it throws you in to the role of a happy go lucky dude that works on IT and never mentions anything about himself or his past instead you just get some boring ass scenes of the dude working his everyday IT job yay I guess...

OK. This one is my fuck up. About page tells about backstory of MC. Showing breakup and his consequent spiraling is redundant. The game is not about that. The real story is how he recover from this. You will get hints about what exactly happened throughout a game. I probably have to be more clear about that in my about page.

It does look interesting and I may check it out later, but there are two things I have biggest issue with off the bat from dev notes.

First, he says supporters will help shape story and how it unfolds, listen to feedback etc. So is this a kinetic story that other people can change based on how much money they give. Just doesn't sound good.

Second, running grammar through chatgpt also doesn't sound like the best idea. Just looking at the preview pics, there is already some grammar issues just from those, so how many more possible errors in actual game.

Just some thoughts, but still might check it out in a future release like I said.

"The supporters help shape the game part" is looking bad, I agree. I want to assure you that this is not the case. I don't like this in games. Honestly I have no idea what was going through my mind when I wrote this The story is written and it is locked in. No changes will be made to it. However I'm going to listen to feedback and the way I tell my story is up to community. My goal is to make the game enjoyable to play. I did ton's of research about what people like about games, what their stance on free roams, QTE, minigames and all that stuff.

Second concern, about a grammar. I'm not native English speaker. My main language is Russian. I found an editor to help me with grammar, she is professional book editor and is very good at what she does, but she is too expensive at this point. So unfortunately first chapter will come as it is. However after I get feedback I'll fix all this. And if game perform well on Steam I might be able to hire an editor. This is ideal option.

 

[strayparanormal]

Our intrepid protagonist returns from a 2 year mission abroad, and finally meets his 2 months old baby. lol

THX for sharing...

That made me laugh so hard

 

[Mii88]

And then through Gemini for good measure ))

Hi everyone! Dev here. I'm pleasantly surprised that CF got on the f95 and that you care enough to leave feedback. Let me address some concerns and answer some questions.



You right. I did released a demo version a year ago but it didn't get a good reviews. Main complain was why should anyone care about MC. I went back to the drawing board so to say and redid intro. Also I stopped posting on the reddit because I though it is wrong to hype people up for a game you don't know the release date yet.



Skippable. Free roams skippable too. Minigames will come in second chapter though. Or maybe they will not come at all. I'm not decided yet.







OK. This one is my fuck up. About page tells about backstory of MC. Showing breakup and his consequent spiraling is redundant. The game is not about that. The real story is how he recover from this. You will get hints about what exactly happened throughout a game. I probably have to be more clear about that in my about page.



"The supporters help shape the game part" is looking bad, I agree. I want to assure you that this is not the case. I don't like this in games. Honestly I have no idea what was going through my mind when I wrote this The story is written and it is locked in. No changes will be made to it. However I'm going to listen to feedback and the way I tell my story is up to community. My goal is to make the game enjoyable to play. I did ton's of research about what people like about games, what their stance on free roams, QTE, minigames and all that stuff.

Second concern, about a grammar. I'm not native English speaker. My main language is Russian. I found an editor to help me with grammar, she is professional book editor and is very good at what she does, but she is too expensive at this point. So unfortunately first chapter will come as it is. However after I get feedback I'll fix all this. And if game perform well on Steam I might be able to hire an editor. This is ideal option.

Hey strayparanormal. Can we have the option to turn off the black box round the text in the next update / chapter?