VN Ren'Py CCTV SECRETS My Wife Is A Model [v0.2] [SenSec3D]

[JoeHiggins1949]

There needs to be a better contrast between the text and the text background. It strains my eyes to read it. Try yellow, white, or a pale blue text. Everyone with eye difficulties will thank you.

 

[SweatPicle]

He still comes online but never responds or posts anything. Navigating The Rift is the best unfinished game on the site imo.

i'll agree with you for a 1000%. it is a really great unfinshed game, it's a shame that he is still lurking but don't react at all

 

[russelld]

Please make it possible to change the husband and wife's names. Also, the wife's eyes need to be adjusted. She looks scary now. I would support this game if you can make these changes.

 

[ironsmash]

Hi dev. I really like this first edition. Here are my pointers:

- Like others said: text speed. We all don't have much time to play those games. Fast forward in your game means losing possible CCTV footage, so the text should be instant to help us out.
- I am a sucker on a "status information" page. At the same time, they had sex 42 times in 5 years? That is ... less than once a month... Ouch! lol. Maybe make it a year into marriage?
- I like to see stats that are 0. She might not be a virgin, but there are areas for a antagonist to be the first. It may even be a secret/unspoken competition between the 2 males. I like that.
- I hope that in all influences you'll receive, you won't go NTS, it's 2 different fantasies and NTS will break a lot of NTR lovers.
- I also hope for slow-ish corruption. Once the woman goes all the way, I lose a lot of interest since there is nothing more to "save", the tension of losing is consumed.
- I hope to see outfits, lots

EDIT: I love the eyes.

Great start!

 

[LouisCon]

not an official revue...
renders - good 6/10
story.. 5/10
camera angle for renders.. terrible... 1/10
grammar/langue ... 8/10
DEV needs to up his game to be in business
overall... 2/10

 

[Cajun Fox]

Thanks

Good luck with your game

 

[HueyFreeman32]

Don't know if the dev checks these sites and the comments, but I'm hoping he sees this. if anything, guys let them know about my msg here. it was a cancelled game called Navigating the rift on here that this game in its mechanics remind me of. The dev if he needs any inspirations should try that game out because it was the best at the mystery ntr with the third person mechanics as well. I think if implemented right this dev game would be just as if not better than ntr if they complete right. looking forward to it.

 

[TonyMurray]

Don't know if the dev checks these sites and the comments, but I'm hoping he sees this. if anything, guys let them know about my msg here. it was a cancelled game called Navigating the rift on here that this game in its mechanics remind me of. The dev if he needs any inspirations should try that game out because it was the best at the mystery ntr with the third person mechanics as well. I think if implemented right this dev game would be just as if not better than ntr if they complete right. looking forward to it.

If you even just skim the posts in the thread you'll see that the dev has responded here quite freely and is one of the several people to mention Navigating the Rift so far.

 

[SenSec3D]

It somewhat bland, the text is very well done, there alot feeling in the text and conversations felt natural, but the pictures doesn't show the feeling that was in the text, overall they felt forced dolls, also a wife presenting her cheek while hubby want to kiss her feels wrong, that typical for a woman who doesn't want anything to do with the guy. For the text i think it a good VN, for the images i'm a bit dissapointed as they don't represent the text well.

I'll try to improve my renders and other aspects as time goes on, but for now I can't promise anything since this is just a practice game. I'll just say that there might be some improvements in version 0.3.

 

[SenSec3D]

SenSec! I enjoyed the premise and the optional mechanics. One question and apologies if it has been asked earlier in the thread. Will this be a linear game or will she have choices?

This will probably be a linear game only. (But we'll see what I add if I decide to include Wife POV in later versions.)

 

[SenSec3D]

Android version?

The Android APK (Test Build) v0.1 is now available for download in my latest post on patreon! There is also some information or responses related to the feedback I received about the game's text and interface.

 

[SenSec3D]

What does "Building the world where most of my stories will take place in" means? That we will be getting sequels and spin-offs with these characters? Making a sequel centered around their daughter would be a cool sequel idea.

Basically, most of my future projects will be set in the same universe and timeline as this story—mainly comics, but also games. I already have a few story ideas for this universe. There will be new characters, along with possible cameos.

 

[Ike Artes]

China Central Television Secrets

 

[Tiddle221]

China Central Television Secrets

HAHAHA

 

[LaunchPadMcQuack]

Any other games that have a similar concept besides Navigating the Rift?

 

[Amin_sun]

Will be following this, love the concept

 

[RustyV]

Is lesbian sex planned?

 

[The7dslegends]

old ugly bastard?

 

[Fardinsami12]

noice

 

[bbcontactbk]

BBC NTR is coming ...