VN Ren'Py Censored for Betas [v0.4] [PallasManul]

[YouShallNotLol]

I'm curious if Scarlett's route will ultimately explain why Samuel is a beta, and perhaps a bit into his family life, if he has any. While I suspect the actual reason is a simple "because", I still have a few theories about it. The most simple being that Samuel's father's side was just ever so slightly passing the limit for hundreds of years until him. Though I'm fine if it remains a mystery and we just get growth/shrinkage content.
Considering what happens in the intro, it's going to be weird that the receptionist gets left out of the testing with Scarlett.

There's a nifty little thing called "recessive genes".
It can be used for explanation:
Sam lost the genetic lottery and inherited recessive gene that made his penis small.

That's also why blonde hair is rare, because it's a recessive gene. So unless both parents are blonde, the hair colour of the children most likely won't be blonde either.

 

[Banjorune]

It's a really good story, and a really good premise. Really good writing. I particularly like how you aren't afraid to go there with the interracial stuff. So many developers lack the balls to go there, and I'm glad you don't... But there are two elephants in the room that can't be ignored. First, the art. It's just not sexy. The characters don't even look like real people. You should replace what you've got with real 3D renders. And also, just as important, there is a severe lack of choices. If a "game" lacks choices and branching paths, it's really not a game, is it? It's just a story with pictures. And that's not much fun.
So, yeah. The writing is good, but you need to do a page-one rewrite on the art. And make more choices. It's just too linear. ("Kinetic" I think is the word I've heard used. It's too kinetic.)
Thanks.

 

[yunosykk]

there is a severe lack of choices. If a "game" lacks choices and branching paths, it's really not a game, is it? It's just a story with pictures.

wdym? the game does have choices and each character has multiple branching paths with different types of content in each path

 

[Bowlcutcultmember]

First, the art. It's just not sexy. The characters don't even look like real people. You should replace what you've got with real 3D renders.

For the record, I think Koikatsu/HS2 renders are kinda played out, especially when it comes to the limitations with how many different types of sets and locations you can have. But if you're suggesting he should change to a realistic art style with DaZ models, then that's a hard disagree from me. Stories like this do way better with an anime/cartoon art style IMO, and Pallas choice of Koikatsu was obviously intentional. If you're instead suggesting he switch to something like Blender renders, but with more refined, non-Koikatsu anime models, then I agree, but for future games.

 

[Banjorune]

For the record, I think Koikatsu/HS2 renders are kinda played out, especially when it comes to the limitations with how many different types of sets and locations you can have. But if you're suggesting he should change to a realistic art style with DaZ models, then that's a hard disagree from me. Stories like this do way better with an anime/cartoon art style IMO, and Pallas choice of Koikatsu was obviously intentional. If you're instead suggesting he switch to something like Blender renders, but with more refined, non-Koikatsu anime models, then I agree, but for future games.

I didn't understand half the words you just used.

 

[mrlucymaru2112]

Subscribed for a Sophia femdom and more creampie eating

 

[naufalsyahrial13]

I didn't understand half the words you just used.

Skill issue

 

[gostozodozap]

I don't dislike the models for the characters, that koikatsu stuff, the dicks and balls look kinda small and a bit weird, too thin in my opinion, but it's acceptable (big tits and ass look fucking good in it tho). but I do love the proportions and design of some of the girls, like the boss, that blue haired chick with the biggest tits, and specially the girlfriend (I like girls with armpit hair ).

 

[Bowlcutcultmember]

I think it's somewhat intentional that a lot of the male characters are below the porn average, even bordering on small, just to drive home that Samuel is even smaller.

 

[PallasManul]

specially the girlfriend (I like girls with armpit hair ).

Good news Susan got a new scene in 0.4, on the pornstar path.

Subscribed for a Sophia femdom and more creampie eating

Sorry no Sophia creampie eating in 0.4, but...

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[mrlucymaru2112]

Good news Susan got a new scene in 0.4, on the pornstar path.


Sorry no Sophia creampie eating in 0.4, but...

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Its fine dev! I just played the new update and enjoyed the sophia content. Will the MC be willingy submissive to sophia and steven in the future content?

 

[PallasManul]

Its fine dev! I just played the new update and enjoyed the sophia content.

Will the MC be willingy submissive to sophia

Glad to hear that you enjoyed it.

To be honest, I don’t really have anything planned for Sophia right now. I don’t want to promise anything, if not sure that I’ll do it.

 

[ABCs]

0.4 seems to be out on patreon.

Played it, unfortunately no new futa content.

From the looks of it 0.5 probably won't have much either.

Probably let the dev cook for a few more months before I check this game out again, since the futa seems far between.

Good game so far. Keep up the good work!

 

[PallasManul]

Played it, unfortunately no new futa content.

From the looks of it 0.5 probably won't have much either.

Good game so far. Keep up the good work!

Glad to hear you enjoyed the game so far.

0.5 will definitely have at least one futa scene, but it won't be the focus on the update.

 

[Icarus Media]

0.4 seems to be out on patreon.

Played it, unfortunately no new futa content.

From the looks of it 0.5 probably won't have much either.

Probably let the dev cook for a few more months before I check this game out again, since the futa seems far between.

Good game so far. Keep up the good work!

Aww sad to hear, but hope he adds more.

 

[Icarus Media]

Glad to hear you enjoyed the game so far.

0.5 will definitely have at least one futa scene, but it won't be the focus on the update.

That will be adequate.

 

[Rdwd19]

Is there only one ending for Sophia?

 

[Sorreah]

Unfortunately Sophia's story won't really have either, but there are characters on the poll who will have those. It's looking like Siobhan might win the next poll and she is pretty much a creampie bakery lol.

Spoilerino talking about my focus on Sophia.

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That spoiler is worded interestingly, I am somewhat curious about this;

Spoiler: Keeping it spoiled just in case

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[PineJonas493]

This was a nice update, but I liked it less than the past two. I was not really interested in Shophia anyway, but her route still felt a little underwhelming in my opinion. The ending felt pretty rushed and a little out of character for how she acted the rest of the route. I think it could use at least some other branches that would make the development feel more natural. I might write a proper review with spoilers of her route later.

Anyway, I hope Sparkle gets her own route in a future update.

 

[Incest games fan]

I felt embarrassing reading the dialogue