VN Ren'Py Charon 13 [v.0.2] [Mac Hanson]

[Tyrranus]

well aside from some goofy ass expressions and WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY too much use of AI this isnt too bad, solid start

 

[PumperFull]

Spoiler: My Thoughts of NTR added

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An issue I do have, is missing out on scenes because of having to choose one or the other. Not a big fan of that, simply because I am forced to miss some of the fantastic work that you have done. With that being said, I know a person can save, then go look, but usually that stuff snowballs, making a person miss out on too much. I would give a suggestion to try not to do that too much. If ya feel ya need to have some sort of "points" system, then try doing it by choosing to do vaginal or anal, most women don't care for anal LOLOL.

 

[primoo357]

Thank you and bless you for giving these lovely, real and delicious bodies. You have avenged us from the basketball tits

 

[V.IV Rusty]

maan i wish we meet. A stranded ship with a bunch of milfs on crew or a hot alien chick

 

[OG-Cheese]

Guess I will join the chorus. I don't care if Willow wants to fuck Tania as long as I can avoid them both and not be forced to watch. Also mc likes them lezing it up and expresses that, well I don't which is just as off putting as being forced to watch. I read Tania was lesbian before playing but it seems most of the girls are interested in other girls and find it hot.

Big turn off and given the option I would avoid any of them that act that way, not being able to avoid it kills it dead for me personally. Might as well be making me suck toes and eat ass I don't care for it at all.

 

[tunaboy57]

Mac Hanson
See? Don't listen to them man.
Do it your way, to the best of your ability.
Take the hints you want, if you want, fuck the rest....
The game will sell itself to those who are into it, (whatever it is).
Way too many critics, nitpickers and whingers to cater to.
Let them go off somewhere safe and write their own mish-mash.
Let's see what you got..... be different....

 

[Look-see]

so are we gonna get options to avoid willow banging some other chick or are we getting lesbian NTR'd the whole way through?

 

[Avaron1974]

I waited so long for this update and now this part ends on a cliffhanger.........

I'm not as sad about that as I would have been because the lesbo scene was hot.

 

[ImperialD]

I'm not as sad about that as I would have been because the lesbo scene was hot.

i would have never guessed that

 

[Ottoeight]

Sweeeeet!!

I thought it had died.

Looking forward to the next update

 

[TimLord]

Liked this one! Those AI animations are awesome!

 

[malridoo]

Just finished playing it and I would say this:
Imho, the AI animations are not that pleasing to look at so I mostly just skiped them.
The pacing of relationships are kinda rushed. What happend between Willow and Tania felt rushed and unnatural... I feel like that scene should have happend way later in the game... same goes for Mrs. Floyd... and well others as well... the characters geting so close with eachother felt really weird and it gave me a feeling of uninterest for their developement; especially being in this stressful situation.
Overall, the whole idea is potentially intersting... but there needs to be some work done on character developement.
(Many players will not be "impressed" by the ~forced~ scenes...)
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I'm looking forward for the next updates, 'cause sci-fi stuff is my guilty pleasure ... so keep up the good work.

 

[BGRW2020]

You really should allow the MC etc... to not watch the Lez stuff

 

[Havenless_]

Look... What about this? Make kinks and scenes avoidable/optional. I don't think that means betraying yourself to "cater all tastes"... Right? It means give the player the power of choice.

But some people say it as if they were asking you to change the entire game. They are literally just asking for the option to make certain scenes optional and not forced on the player.

Yeah, some people are pretty harsh expressing that. So, like someone said, take the hints if you want and fuck the rest. There's no need to dismiss every single criticism. I saw some useful comment yesterday about the lesbian stuff and now they're gone lol

Tania and Willow are lesbians (or bisexual, or whatever). That's fine. People aren't asking you to create an alternate storyline where lesbianism doesn't exist and the mere thought of vaginas makes women vomit.

Just the option of either making their scenes optional or making a possible romantic or sexual relationship with the protagonist also optional. Like I said, The power of choice.

Just another opinion. Like very other. Will respect your decision whether I like it or not.

 

[rafa30]

I like

 

[goulet1995]

I see what you mean — it’s interesting to hear how differently people can see these scenes. I try to build the story and character bonds in a realistic way, and while I knew tastes vary, I didn’t expect this level of detail in preferences. Thanks for pointing it out.

ya as it stands the forced lesbian stuff is enough for me to not play this if i cant fully avoid any lesbian including during group scenes i generally wont play the game. To me its sharing it dosnt matter if you share with a women or a man its the same thing as far as im concerned.

 

[Charroumane]

Thanks a lot for the detailed feedback — I found it very constructive. Honestly, I hadn’t noticed the clothing clipping issue or thought much about the shorthand in dialogue, but you’re right and I’ll keep that in mind going forward.

I also didn’t know lesbian content wasn’t very popular with some players, so that was surprising to hear. Don’t worry though, Willow will still be with us. I’m working on adding more options — even if you can’t see it yet, I’ve already implemented an affinity point system that will make earlier choices start affecting things later on. I can also add an option for that scene you mentioned in the next update.

Thanks again for taking the time to write this up!

Congratulations on your work, and I'm following you now! Honestly, I'm not a fan of NTR, but in your case, it's linked to the fact that the MC is alone with four women, and at the moment they barely know each other! So, I can't find anything wrong with it since it fits your story and your writing style!

Don't be mistaken, many people (including me) are interested in the lesbian aspect and everything that prevents women from becoming mere objects subjected to this or that degradation. Your choice is good because it allows women to retain their free will and decide what they want!

You're at the beginning of your project; it would be a shame to already be thinking about changing it drastically because 3, 4, or 10 people don't like seeing two women having sex without being invited.

Obviously, an additional option like "don't watch the scene" would simply silence the anti-lesbians.

Personally, in such situations, if a romantic relationship develops and doesn't allow for a "harem" or "sharing" path, I've always dreamed of being able to choose not only to break up, but also to be able to rebuild the breakup situation later! It's still too rare in AVNs!

Once again, good luck with your very, very promising project.

Long live and prosper ^^

 

[Nucksal0036]

Key scenes without animation, irrelevant scenes with a bunch of animations, what's going on? And the protagonist's cock looks plastic

 

[goulet1995]

Obviously, an additional option like "don't watch the scene" would simply silence the anti-lesbians.

not really as an anti lesbian myself if the only choice is to not watch the scene it wouldnt change whther i play the game or not. If there is an option/choice that puts a stop to that scene so scene in my playthrough is not cannon that is another thing. If all the option is is to skip a scene that no matter what in the story still happens myself and id guess most other people not into lesbian stuff would not view that as any sort of improovment that would change the minds of anyone.

 

[bennycack]

This isn't a harem game so I assume choices matter. Why would the 2 women at the meal assume I am a partner of Willow and say this if reject everything with her?: