[V0.3a]
If this isn't deserving of 5 stars, I don't know what is. I have 2 standards when rating VNs, broadly speaking. There are the porny fap games that just need to meet my fappability standards while having a passable plot. Then there are the more ambitious games that tries to tell an engaging story independent of the porn. Of these, I'd say the serious drama/romance types are the hardest to tackle, even though they are probably the most numerous. Drama/romance can get incredibly cringy and forced at the hands of an amateur writer, which most of these devs are. My most critical eye is reserved for games in this category because you are competing with professionals who write for traditional media, but this game blew away any reservations I might have had going in.
What stands out immediately when playing this game is the incredible attention to detail in the visuals. The render quality is top notch. The models are smoking hot (especially Tara, holy shit). That's not what I'm referring to, though. It's all in the camera angles, scene composition, framing of the scenes, dynamic movements, and most notably, the expressions. I have never seen expressions and body language tell so much in a VN before. This is visual storytelling at it's absolute prime. Nothing comes close in this regard after Primal Instinct got cancelled.
The writing is also superb. I tend to nitpick the writing in story/character driven games, and this one had very few moments that made me go "hmmm..." Grammar is excellent. The prose is excellent. The dialogues are very natural for the most part, save for some "witty" banter here and there. The plot is actually quite interesting and it ties all the characters together, but by and large, this is a character driven story. Being a drama, there are the usual "will they, won't they?" and "why can't they just talk it out!?" situations, but the plot developments make the decisions, feelings, motivations, and actions of these character quite believable.
The narrative structure is excellent. There is a pretty long prologue about the past events, but it's incorporated into the narrative, rather than making it an exposition dump. The MC meets an old family friend and talks about his life over a drink and it works rather well. There are flashbacks and past events shown throughout the game at opportune moments where it ties into the happenings at the current timeline.
The story has so much heart. If something can pull at my heartstrings, it will probably do it for almost anyone. Notably, David's story was what did it for me.
The visual storytelling, writing, and the sound/music works together to create one of the more immersive experiences you can find around here.
I haven't done too much experimenting on the choice system, but it seems like the choices make quite a difference in how characters view and behave around each other. The UI is renpy game done right. Stylish, yet functional. There is a toggle for the quick menu at the bottom and an opacity slider. There is no unnecessary animations or lag when using the right click.
All this talk about serious story and characters almost made me forget the sex scenes. It wouldn't be unreasonable for a game like this to have vanilla and pretty uninteresting scenarios for sex. That isn't the case here. It's really fucking hot. The kinky, but grounded dialogue. The renders and H scene composition. The lead up and situations presented are just amazing.
There really isn't much negative things to say about this game. It's an heartfelt coming of age story with love and loss. It's a story about finding yourself. A story about reconciliation. Give it a try. I think it could appeal to almost any type of player.