This update was really good. I have to give props to
Stone Fox Studios for doing such a good job at this update. I really like the end of chapter analysis. I also like the achievement system that was added to this AVN. I think that whatever happens in the future, you guys should keep it in the AVN. I can't wait to see what else you guys have planned for this AVN.
As for Jaye, I am not surprised to learn that she did not look for Chris to bring him on the yacht as a way to get at MC. That would have damaged her character beyond repair for much of the audience. I thought that it was a clever way to get Chris on the yacht without Jaye looking like a childish little girl or damaging her character(more than it already was). What I did not expect was the way how Chris was brought back into the story. It really surprised me, and I again must give praise to the dev for how it was written. We now have a real antagonist along with a strong backing. The potential ways this story can go are endless. But back to Chris, I am glad that we were given the opportunity to throw him overboard. Jaye still has some ways to go, but I think this update would help a lot of the audience to once again be open to having her as a LI. A lot of her actions in the prologue and chapter 1 are still wrong, but at least her character is getting better now. I am actually thinking about starting a Jaye playthrough now. Something that I thought would never happen before this update. That is good writing right there.
Thank you dev for listening to your audience and predicting how we would feel in the face of someone like Chris. I am going to try to keep a open mind for the future updates of this AVN. This was a really good update. Thanks again
Stone Fox Studios. The story is still quite captivating. I cannot wait to see how it unfolds in the future.
Edit: Sorry for my shaky English