Ottoeight

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lol thats literally impossible, if you compare something to itself its the same.
I guess you just don't want to listen. Fine with me: I wasn't talking to you, guys. I was talking to the Authors.

Literature theory? literary analysis? composition studies? narratology? narrative structures? :unsure::unsure::unsure:

what is this stuff, huh?
 

M'95

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I guess you just don't want to listen. Fine with me: I wasn't talking to you, guys. I was talking to the Authors.

Literature theory? literary analysis? composition studies? narratology? narrative structures? :unsure::unsure::unsure:

what is this stuff, huh?
So you want me to listen to you, but you are not talking to us?

You reply to posters in this thread, but actually you are talking to the authors?


Say no to drugs, you don't make any sense.
 
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MMMTastyCrumpet

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I hope this gets good soon....

So far it feels like Restaurant talking simulator, hardly any choices for me to go with. Pretty linear story line where it's being pre determined for me regardlss of my choice. I'm surprised this has gotten the reviews it has so far. I'll keep going for abit.
 
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HornyyPussy

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I hope this gets good soon....

So far it feels like Restaurant talking simulator, hardly any choices for me to go with. Pretty linear story line where it's being pre determined for me regardlss of my choice. I'm surprised this has gotten the reviews it has so far. I'll keep going for abit.
Since there are only 2 LI's there aren't that many choices to make. The reason it's as popular as it is is because many people disagree with you about the story, most think it's really good and of course the quality of the characters as well as the renders are superb.

If that is truly how you think of this VN you might wanna stop playing since it's not gonna change, we are more than halfway through the story.
 

HornyyPussy

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Expanding where to? what's the point with the blondie and her mom? what's the point with the divorced lady? are they fillers without a reason?
The reason IS to be fillers or the story might have become a little stale/boring from a lewd standpoint. The story might be the main attraction but it IS still a Adult VN so some lewdness is expected. Not to mention they expanded the MC's backstory.

And as for those fillers, they where good stories as well so I have no problem with them.
 
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PreachyLocust

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actually reading the post rescue dialogue Jaye admits that MC got it right, and that if they had dealt with it at that time, at that age, after all those misunderstandings it would have ended badly

and even in the present, 6 years later, they are still going about it with cold feet
You are absolutely right. My post was a little one sided because in my perspective if we were to assign blame to a couple of kids who were raised as siblings but had romantic feelings for each other I would tip the scale towards the MC because he was the one who ran. Hurting his parents and sister in the process due to shame. In reality I don't blame any of them and I guess trying to deal with those feelings at that age would prob have ended poorly as they lacked experience and maturity.

I just don't understand the hate for Jaye. She is a product of her experiences as we all are. She felt betrayed multiple times by the MC but she remained loyal and supportive even if from afar. There is imo, more deceit from Mallory in the short time she has known the MC than he got from Jaye their entire lives.
 

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UncleFredo

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It's a shame it's 1 broken story
I disagree. The "Jaye path" is a story about renewal. It's about clearing away years of misunderstandings, hurt feelings, and emotional crap, so that an indestructible underlying and undying love can reunite two people in the never before acknowledged relationship they always desired. If you're on the "Mallory path" you get to decide whether or not you and Jaye return to being trusted siblings.

The central tension in both paths is how your relationship with Jaye works out (or not) going forward. Given Jaye's feelings toward you, resolving your relationship is probably equally difficult whether you end up intimately involved or not.

The story works fine, it's just not a smooth path for anyone.
 

Walter Victor

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Seriously, who the fuck is Sarah? :unsure::unsure::unsure::unsure::unsure:

There are 2 chicks ONLY in this game: Jaye and Mallory. The rest are vegetables.

I renamed them: Potato number 1, Sweet Potato number 2, Aubergine 1, Green Tomato number 3, Red Onion, Carrot stick 1, Big Celery stick, White Radish number 1 and so on.

Therefore, are you talking about White Radish number 1 and Christian-who-gives-a-damn-about-his-issues-I-wanna-gut-him-anyway dude?
Are you serious about Sarah? Sarah is an integral part of this story. Remove her from the story and it makes no sense.

The developers are trying to build a story that will interest people for a while. To do that they add characters to flesh out the plot. Would you have asked Tolstoy to eliminate all those other irrelevant characters and leave us with Pierre, Andrei and Natasha.

We may not need War and Peace here in a porn game, but for this game to be memorable, we need to have a fully fleshed-out story, which must include side characters of note.
 

felicemastronzo

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You are absolutely right. My post was a little one sided because in my perspective if we were to assign blame to a couple of kids who were raised as siblings but had romantic feelings for each other I would tip the scale towards the MC because he was the one who ran. Hurting his parents and sister in the process due to shame. In reality I don't blame any of them and I guess trying to deal with those feelings at that age would prob have ended poorly as they lacked experience and maturity.

I just don't understand the hate for Jaye. She is a product of her experiences as we all are. She felt betrayed multiple times by the MC but she remained loyal and supportive even if from afar. There is imo, more deceit from Mallory in the short time she has known the MC than he got from Jaye their entire lives.
they are two kids who stop talking to each other over a misunderstanding, no adult intervenes in this
the blame clearly lies on the parents


personally considering how things went the night of graduation, it's a miracle that the relationship, even just friendship, was rebuilt
 

NewTricks

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Imagine the alternate reality where David took a piss behind the bar or something while MC got kidnapped by that Brazillian lady and after being ransomed back to the family had Jaye use his face as a speed bag for making her worry so much about him. Would they have been able to bury the hatchet then? Would she think his scraggly kidnapping beard was hot? How long would it be before she was soaping him up in the shower while their mom was listening through a glass at the bathroom door?
 
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Francis Blast

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Wait, I have a better idea. Mum could be alive, but sequestered in a sex dungeon where Christian tries to inseminate her 24/7.

Close to perfection.
 
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Cricco

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I disagree. The "Jaye path" is a story about renewal. It's about clearing away years of misunderstandings, hurt feelings, and emotional crap, so that an indestructible underlying and undying love can reunite two people in the never before acknowledged relationship they always desired. If you're on the "Mallory path" you get to decide whether or not you and Jaye return to being trusted siblings.

The central tension in both paths is how your relationship with Jaye works out (or not) going forward. Given Jaye's feelings toward you, resolving your relationship is probably equally difficult whether you end up intimately involved or not.

The story works fine, it's just not a smooth path for anyone.
It'd just be cool if the low love/trust paths weren't forced in the same scenarios as the high ones, and vice versa. The forced talk on day 2 between Jaye and MC wasn't the best but i guess they haven't seen eachother in years so whatever, but all the forced bonding in Chapter 5 just feels extra lame and like a step back. Like dude my MC been sabotaging this girl, wouldn't even jump off the ship to save her life, and now they working together and planning to go eat doritos :LUL:
 
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