amazing on the internet how many people there are who have figured out how women work ... you wouldn't believe it
an AVN is not life, if a character says something he says it so that you know, otherwise then it would all lose enough meaning
Bah... It's not badly written, it's not something that annoys when playing it. But it remains very cartoonish, not its strong point. It would have deserved the award for best looking
I guess it depends on what they mean by writing. Chasing Sunsets has excellent dialog, and the narration is smooth and stylish. But the actual plotting is pretty mediocre because it refuses to venture beyond arms reach of cheap innuendo and legally-not-classified-as incest.
The writing used to be really good in the earlier seasons, but it's quality has been dropping consistently in the last 3 updates.
here, for me for example a flaw in writing is this getting still caught up in the genetic issue, which I doubt really interests anyone.
almost all stories do this
There's nothing wrong with writing a "comic book story" as you put it. The problem is this could have been a good comic book story, but it's apparently lost interest in the plot so now it's mainly looking for excuses to add two-page pinup art splashes.
I did not explain myself well. It was to emphasise the difference between good writing and plot. The plot of CS as a comic is fine, the quality of writing quiteThere's nothing wrong with writing a "comic book story" as you put it. The problem is this could have been a good comic book story, but it's apparently lost interest in the plot so now it's mainly looking for excuses to add two-page pinup art splashes.
