Yeah this could've been a lot better if it was set up as:
- MC is in an open relationship with both Jaye and Mal.
- Mal is unsure and asks the MC to commit after the night in the woods
- Jaye isn't unsure, and because she loves MC and Mal. She wants her to be part of the family.
- Jaye and MC together convince Mal to try a menage a trois situation. (Bonus if you get a banger threesome scene out of it, or save that for the next update)
She shouldn't offer it as a poly relationship if she and the MC are supposed to be in a committed relationship. She could try to throw Mal a bone (as in she can fuck him, but MC is still Jaye's), but it would likely backfire in that situation. Which they could also save for the next update for some juicy drama.