TonyMurray

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But how would the crazy dude get sarah's eggs? Tho this seems so far fetch it'll be so easy for them to test jaye with your dnd to check. Am I the only one that finds them adding this info is complete pointless if they never check? It's as far as mentioning your parents could be alive and never once checking if they are.
It's all explained in the story (y)

The guy running the trial was obsessed with Sarah, his notes say that they were short on eggs, so they relied on a donor from the team. It turns out that only three pregnancies were derived from the trial, two of which miscarried, and the suggestion is that he replaced the trial patients' eggs with the donor eggs, that donor being Sarah.
 

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But how would the crazy dude get sarah's eggs? Tho this seems so far fetch it'll be so easy for them to test jaye with your dnd to check. Am I the only one that finds them adding this info is complete pointless if they never check? It's as far as mentioning your parents could be alive and never once checking if they are.

Honestly I'll just go with he swapped with random eggs because that's harder to identify, plus making the project success would be important no matter what, while he was doing his cloning.
Let's say this story does not point to credibility. However, Mallory's father was an evil genius, more so than Sara, who did not notice anything
 
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It's all explained in the story (y)

The guy running the trial was obsessed with Sarah, his notes say that they were short on eggs, so they relied on a donor from the team. It turns out that only three pregnancies were derived from the trial, two of which miscarried, and the suggestion is that he replaced the trial patients' eggs with the donor eggs, that donor being Sarah.
So realistically writing just doesn't make any sense then, why would sarah be a testing donor? Why would you test if unfertilized eggs can become fertile with science and use a fertilized egg to even test. There would be zero reason for Sarah to donate eggs because it would have zero affect on her.
 

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Let's say this story does not point to credibility. However, Mallory's father was an evil genius, more so than Sara, who did not notice anything

Devs really screwed up adding the most pointless information to the story and not doing any basic tests to check if she is related to MC. They knew of the rules before they made this game and that's like the only time they mention maybe they're related and then breaking rules. Just seems so odd to add it randomly for completely zero purpose. Did devs get bad at writing or something.
 

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Devs really screwed up adding the most pointless information to the story and not doing any basic tests to check if she is related to MC. They knew of the rules before they made this game and that's like the only time they mention maybe they're related and then breaking rules. Just seems so odd to add it randomly for completely zero purpose. Did devs get bad at writing or something.
The purpose was to play with the taboo of incest. It was also fun at first, but it was always basically useless. Jaye and mc are adopted siblings anyway, that's enough, for Mallory, on the other hand, it only served for a few jokes, but it remains more of an annoyance than a virtue (if Mallory had actually looked like Sara maybe it would have been different)
 
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The purpose was to play with the taboo of incest. It was also fun at first, but it was always basically useless. Jaye and mc are adopted siblings anyway, that's enough, for Mallory, on the other hand, it only served for a few jokes, but it remains more of an annoyance than a virtue (if Mallory had actually looked like Sara maybe it would have been different)
I'm not even gonna go there for mallory because I doubt any site has even considered cloning with incest since it's not real as far as we know. Jaye makes it she is related, like if dev doesn't want to do one test then they actually intend for them to be related without breaking rules. But for story telling for none incest kink people kinda ruins the story. Like I don't care about stepsiblings it's not incest but if they tease the real thing and avoid the topic then it just makes it seem it's true.
 

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I'm not even gonna go there for mallory because I doubt any site has even considered cloning with incest since it's not real as far as we know. Jaye makes it she is related, like if dev doesn't want to do one test then they actually intend for them to be related without breaking rules. But for story telling for none incest kink people kinda ruins the story. Like I don't care about stepsiblings it's not incest but if they tease the real thing and avoid the topic then it just makes it seem it's true.
But they do a test on it, and apparently Jaye would not have been born from Sara's egg, only then in the closing of the chapter it is put in doubt that there was an error in the samples....
 
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So as I understand this website here, there are two types of "completed"
There is
Completet [version number X.Y.Z] [Moderators made a mistake but are too full of themselves to fix it]
and
Completed [Final] [Actual completion as determined by the developer]
There. I fixed it for you.
 
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But they do a test on it, and apparently Jaye would not have been born from Sara's egg, only then in the closing of the chapter it is put in doubt that there was an error in the samples....
But it'll be such a easy test to figure out, in that convo they could've said we'll do a test MC we need a blood sample or anything.
 

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But it'll be such a easy test to figure out, in that convo they could've said we'll do a test MC we need a blood sample or anything.
They essentially do that test to see if they're related, and it comes back negative. But later on it's shown that the lab techs weren't really paying attention and easily could have accidentally swapped samples. So there's a level of uncertainty regarding if the result is accurate that the reader is aware of, but the characters are not.
 
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Amanda has been rather missing as a love interest since the threesome with Mallory, after which Mallory decided for some reason that she didn't want to share any more? Such a shame. How can an epilogue give us an ending to something that IMO, wasn't really given the opportunity to start?
 
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