Arkade

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Waiting for one of these games in this messaging/SNS formula to add something interesting for plot sake... like the girlfriends girl friend is actually a futa and they're the one doing the NTR- but it's always the same surface level plot and it feels so generic each time. But at least this one is using koikatu and not an AI model
 

gilgamesh9

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Sep 10, 2019
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Not bad but wish the pics in chat were bigger or could enlarge them in chat. Would make it alot better for the story. And i dont know if it was intentional or not but it seems like something happened but didn't get to see anything.:cry:
 

swiver

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Huh? Release date like new but it's a couple months older.

I mean I wish all devs best, esp. if it's a training project, but in terms of merit, a new venture into this genre needs very sexy graphics or flawless writing (I mean content not grammar) and even then you might not get away with just the one so...

Apologies.
 

Fitharia

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Feb 6, 2025
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I force the feel not in this one, you engrish bad is, young padawan.

Hmmmm..... well if you like good laughs and reading unrelated bad conversations, then this vn is sure for you. If you seek a good ntr or nts story then just stop here. Not sure how to describe this vn, one moment your girl try to make you jealous with Ryan and the next moment it suddenly Dan, conversations even doesn't relate to eachother, there is no flow in it, it jumps from one unrelated incident on the other and suddenly out the blue the gf being a drunk bitch accuse her husband he want to see her fuck Ryan or Dan or someone else. I mean don't know what this dev is smoking, but it sure is so powerful it affects his writting skills. All I can say, if you addicted to good phone ntr/nts stories try out the other ones, this one belongs just to the bad ones, good for a laughs, cries and headaches reading it.
 
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Deyn21

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Title: Chat Noir

And it's not a porn parody of Miraculous Ladybug.

Pff.
 

Badboll

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Aug 29, 2017
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him her he she girl boy, it's not hard to know the difference, is this dev a bit slow?
 

Illustrivity

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him her he she girl boy, it's not hard to know the difference, is this dev a bit slow?
Yeah, this is extreme Engrish. Usually I don't mind engrish as long as I can relatively easily tell what is going on in a conversation, but my lord this is rough to read, especially with all the pronouns (he/she, him/her) being completely random at times.

Also, the whole bit about Evelyn's photos being "edited" was kind of lame, in my opinion, but the storyline they set up at the end of this update is actually pretty intriguing.
 

Darth Sidious

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Hm not sure where to start, but got to say the conversations were bad, unnaturaly and full of mistakes. The classic mistakes, using him for her, she for he and so on and reversed. Then your gf finds ya a personal trainer, the first conversation was already so bad, I mean which girl going send a guy sexy pictures before they even met and talk familiar as if they knew eachother for years. There alot other stuff that just make this phone vn the worst of all. Sorry to say, but there are better ones out there that have conversations that more natural and better written.

Not to mention Tiffany, all those manipulation and show one picture a day, and they not even so bad but she make it sound all pictures (which are pretty tame and would look like any normal friends) she send is as if you cheating on ya gf and ya gf is fooling around with Ryan. For me this phone vn will no longer be followed.
Yeah it's confusing the hell out of me. I mean, make up your mind about your gender why don't you :Kappa:

Thing is, it has the potential to be a great NTR game, but it needs a serious proofreading and perhaps more thought out conversations.
 

hiyou8000

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Oct 24, 2018
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The Engrish is bad but not as bad as I thought. The beginning is where the worst of it is.
 

Nimbus Commando

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Waiting for one of these games in this messaging/SNS formula to add something interesting for plot sake... like the girlfriends girl friend is actually a futa and they're the one doing the NTR- but it's always the same surface level plot and it feels so generic each time. But at least this one is using koikatu and not an AI model
That sounds just as fucking generic as all of these shit phone game, they are all the same trash. lol
 

Arkade

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That sounds just as fucking generic as all of these shit phone game, they are all the same trash. lol
little less generic considering it's never been done before. Almost none of these AI games have actual NTR- it always has to lean into netorase. Because the AI models trained on them usually fail to capture the nuance and subtleties of those small hints. You can't exactly play into that story if the model you use refuses to give you the images you need. Yes some models can do it fine- but those are higher end models that tend to not be open source and none of these games use them...Devs just search "free AI image generator" and you get this.. Which is why this being koikatu is already more promising since the scenes have to be made by someone themselves.. even if all these stances are not custom and built into the engine.
 

Toddy.Berlin

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I would like to say up front that I have the utmost respect for everyone who develops and posts games here and am very grateful for that!!! (y)
But....
Another pathetic MC who doesn't know where he's going and another macho with a big dick who shows him how pathetic he is.
I'm afraid the story needs to pick up a bit more so that it doesn't get lost in the other phone-based games.
And does the MC always have to be such a crybaby? It's difficult to identify with that as a player. :unsure:
 

Dopplyn

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Waiting for one of these games in this messaging/SNS formula to add something interesting for plot sake... like the girlfriends girl friend is actually a futa and they're the one doing the NTR- but it's always the same surface level plot and it feels so generic each time. But at least this one is using koikatu and not an AI model
Depends on what you consider interesting dude, i prefer this formula 100x over your futa one.
 
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Fitharia

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Tried it one more time, but still disappointed, even if you go all lovely dovey with your girlfriend it end in netorase as the girlfriend interested in other cocks and get hot when other guys touch her, the only good part in it is you can be slowly dating your gym coach girl, if things go south with the girlfriend. But the only few choices you can make are pointless and there are no real paths, just how much ya can corrupt ya girlfriend into being a bimbo. And about the conversations, well he still didn't fix this bad engrish talk it even worse with the new update. So geuss it my finaly try as I doubt this dev care of making a decent phone chat netorase.
 

Chaoticjustice

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So from what I've gathered of the story the stranger is a mix of Dan and his missus , but I can't actually tell if Dan is a cuck also or if it was all just a scheme to turn the MC into a cuck? If it's a scheme it's an interesting take on it had it been done better

Also the girlfriend is written as if she has multiple personalities and they are all trying to get out at the same time so in every conversation you see a little bit of her different personalities
 
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