VN Ren'Py Chronicles of Kartoba [Prologue P2 Fix] [SinisterSlick Games]

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how to get this scene?

Go wanking, think about your sis

upd: Hmm... I was wrong; image exists, but with Monica instead of Jessica. It seems the scene with J is missing 2 images that the scene with M does have (checked the script and the images folder).

Btw, I suppose I can add this render to the game via the patch/mod I did

(btw: you could have reused the image from OP (open image in new window/tab (arrow icon), copy URL) )

 

[Danford Ambrosia]

Oh wow! If this VN is really as nicely rendered as the preview pictures suggest, I'm quite impressed.

 

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updated to v2.2 (unless issues or mistakes, should be (hopefully ) the final (for v0.01))

edit: noticed some gallery Movies don't play. Not my mistake (they're typos), but shared a fix (and left a new dev note )

 

[zeus04]

 

[UnDeaD_CyBorG]

After reading through what's there yet, the verdict is: meh.
Most of the renders are very high quality, and I can assume what the author's going for, but the writing just leaves me with this feeling of "I've seen all this before".

 

[_SerapH_]

Why does this game have an incest tag if MC's parents are dead?

 

[CortoMaltese]

Interesting characters and storyline. I'm excited to see how they develop in the future!

 

[Maviarab]

It has a lot of issues....it could be very good though, it has potential.

Lot of grammar issues, far too many along with lack of capitalisation on nicknames.
Ignores set relationship variables.
Relationship prompts just don't work throughy the story.
When italicising the text, we do not also need *thoughts* above it.
*In a pissed off voice* We also for sure do not need bracketed emotions before text.

As said, the potential is there, being overly ambigious with everything is not not helping the story in such a short prologue but sure is less jarring when played from the start after more updates.

Jessica is gorgeous though...

 

[w123t4]

It is a good start but too soon to tell, need to wait for more update to see.

 

[Serenity Life]

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I like the idea of intrigue.

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I'd also like to add my thoughts (Captain Obvious style, haha)

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That's enough... or I'll get carried away now.
The last part is more like fantasy based on incomplete information, but you can outline several possible scenarios based on indirect signs. There's not enough space to cover everything, as they say.
Anyway, if anyone has more reliable information... or maybe the author himself will "drop" a grain of truth, shed some light on something... I'd be happy to read your comments.

 

[Maviarab]

I like the idea of intrigue.

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1. Who knows
2. Perhaps yes
3. Coluld be either
4. Seems she wants to be the one to 'fully awaken' him and was prevented. perhaps an elder, she did 'steal' the wine after all.
5. MC cheats...prettty hard to miss lol.

 

[TonyMurray]

I like the idea of intrigue.

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Spoiler: A couple of answers/counterpoints

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[Serenity Life]

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Yeah, I get it, family drama is the most boring... especially with a tag like that )))

 

[Serenity Life]

And please, read my post again.
I added a lot of things. I just didn't think the revisions would take so much time.
My post

 

[Maviarab]

And please, read my post again.
I added a lot of things. I just didn't think the revisions would take so much time.
My post

Please, read our replies again. You're so far off the mark.

 

[Serenity Life]

1. Who knows
2. Perhaps yes
3. Coluld be either
4. Seems she wants to be the one to 'fully awaken' him and was prevented. perhaps an elder, she did 'steal' the wine after all.
5. MC cheats...prettty hard to miss lol.

=)))
Honestly, I completely forgot about the wine.
Yes, as "TonyMurray" replied, that would be logical. And I just didn't think about the connection between the wine and the argument.

Spoiler: But...

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[Maviarab]

arguing with was young. If this is true, then there can be no talk of a father, in my opinion.

You know vampires don't age....right?>

We know they do exist....we can assume Monique is also one (or wanted to become one with the MC together).....

 

[Serenity Life]

Please, read our replies again. You're so far off the mark.

Maybe so. I'm not saying it's true, just guessing.
Well, at least I got to use my imagination within the given parameters and scenes.
The plot could totally develop that way.
Especially since my guess fits in really well.

 

[TonyMurray]

=)))
Honestly, I completely forgot about the wine.
Yes, as "TonyMurray" replied, that would be logical. And I just didn't think about the connection between the wine and the argument.

Spoiler: But...

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Remember that they're vampires. It's perfectly reasonable for the father or even the grandfather to have been the "attractive young man" she was with. And the kissing and holding hands doesn't preclude family at all, especially as (IIRC) we don't know what the kissing was - it could have just been a kiss on the forehead, for instance.

 

[Serenity Life]

Well.... Honestly, I focused my attention on the genre of "Cheating".... )))