VN Ren'Py Church On State [Part 2] [Top Tier Story]

[enzo ferrari]

just read the story. all the nuns are sex maniacs whores. hard pass

 

[Enlight432]

just read the story. all the nuns are sex maniacs whores. hard pass

fmc is it important, is she also a slut girl?

 

[MCDiggler]

Hi there ...

First to me ... I must be a blind chicken because I can't find a DL link on the developer's Patreon page!?

DEV saids:
"Also as promised Part 2 is now completely free and you can download it from my Patreon on 8/20/2024!
Thank you guys for the support! I hope to continue to meet expectations."

Strange? But that's how it's written ...

MfG MCDiggler

 

[enzo ferrari]

fmc is it important, is she also a slut girl?

nah the wife gets tossed asside for the whore nuns. a real catch huh?

 

[Gudil]

by seeing the new screnshots i dont know if the only one getting action will be only the husband....like his other game this is going in the the direction "all for all" kind of game.......just see so many different dicks in those screenshots ,

A few comments below yours clarify the plot. Still a no for me.

 

[yourinalcake]

I know, I know. I believe I may release the rest of the story in only text format to appease fans. I think I bit more off than I can chew creating that scale of project. The early art of that game also had me ready to gouge my eyes out and I felt like it was such an uneven product since you see major improvements in the art in the later chapters. A lot of early creators usually struggle with their first game and I look at Nutville Paradox as a learning experience more than anything.

I think someone reuploaded your game onto itch.io. Name is dirkpine. When the game is launched, it tries to run an installation wizard, so I'm guessing it has some kind of virus.

 

[J0K3RXXX]

Promising.

 

[Samuel Hidayat]

Considering how wordy and meandering TheTalkMan's stories are, I thought this dev would try to trim off the excess.

Guess I was wrong.

 

[Taboofan]

What is the actual game play like? I'm fine with wordy, but hate being railroaded.

 

[JiraiyaSennin]

There is something strange. The file on Gofile is 331MB. The workupload file is 315MB, like the Mega file on the Patreon site from which I downloaded it. There is also a 304MB "Win" version and a 315MB "PC" version on Patreon, but no 331MB version .

 

[TopTierStory]

Considering how wordy and meandering TheTalkMan's stories are, I thought this dev would try to trim off the excess.

Guess I was wrong.

I actually thought it would be wrong of me to take out his words so I included all or most of it to stay faithful to the original story. Part 1 and 2 will by far be the wordiest parts due to it's function to world build.

That being said, Part 3 is entirely written by me and I feel I've made it way more concise while getting to the point faster (the good parts especially) but also attempting to level some character depth with a good balance. All future parts will follow this format. My Patrons felt really happy with Part 3 so I think I'm at a good spot with pacing now.

It is my plan to not railroad anyone on any single release. I will always try to build up a scene while also offering a satisfactory sex scene.

Also there seems to be some guy who uploaded my game on Itchio by the name Dirkpine without my permission. I've been told it puts something on your computer so do not download it from there. You can safely download Chapter 2 from my Patreon for free now.

As for file sizes. I'm not sure why there is a crazy discrepancy. The full version for every release will be found on my Patreon.

 

[TopTierStory]

Not really a cuck game, it's a corruption game. Everyone in the roster becomes corrupted by this church's ideology. Everyone is involved in the process however Paula wasn't cucked as she left her husband due to the photos. Therefore she was a single woman, also she's joining the old church where she'll wither like an old hag based on what Mother Superior said.

You hit the mark on what kind of game it is. However, I am planning very interesting story paths unlike NVP where it was just completely linear. Please stay tuned for more.

 

[MCDiggler]

There is something strange. The file on Gofile is 331MB. The workupload file is 315MB, like the Mega file on the Patreon site from which I downloaded it. There is also a 304MB "Win" version and a 315MB "PC" version on Patreon, but no 331MB version .

Forget the size ... life is too short ... play the game and have fun

Spoiler: Size does not matter

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MfG MCDiggler

 

[Samuel Hidayat]

I actually thought it would be wrong of me to take out his words so I included all or most of it to stay faithful to the original story. Part 1 and 2 will by far be the wordiest parts due to it's function to world build.

I understand wanting to be faithful to the source material, but I believe it's detrimental to your game in this case. If you feel that you can make the text flow better and more compact, then I think you should try it. I'm concerned that there might be noticeable quality differences between Part 3 onwards' writing and Part 1's and Part 2's.

Consistency is key, after all.

 

[dontcarewhateverno]

I love all TheTalkMan Stories, I've been a huge fan for years now, but i have to admit, at least here, the wife looks way more attractive than the Mother Nun here, at least by looks only, those huge ass lips and cheek bone looks really strange.

I too would rather bang the wife. Even despite that her left eye is growing out of her hair. More feminine face.

 

[dontcarewhateverno]

Original story was great (at least for a porn vn, where standards are lower), despite being ridiculous + the fact that I wanted them to either remain uncorrupted (if this were an actual game, I'd choose as such) or at least have the wife corrupted & fucking like a slut too.

I almost always hate these non-games with no choices, as I'd rather just read a good erotic comic. But that's due to the general poor writing quality of the amateur devs here. This one left me thoroughly entertained throughout because the writer knew what they were doing in pacing, world-building and character investment. This is one of the only two non-games here I've been able to play through, since without choices, you MUST heavily rely on the writing. The other one is Lust Town: Amanda's Road To Porn, which I'd recommend too.

 

[LowKeyLeo]

I've been saying this for a long time, someone needs to turn TalkMan's stories into VN's and the lord he be listening!