Thank you much for telling me! I always try to keep cohesion and coherence while coding and there are lots of MC thoughts and dialogues with other characters that are conditioned and are triggered one way or another depending on what the player have or haven't done, but I guess I missed that one.
I somehow assumed the player must have met Maya by the time this scene with Kelly happens, but he clearly doesn't have to. Again, thank you!
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I'm happy to help since I'm thoroughly enjoying the game so far
. i figured you either have the car on either a "break down after x number of uses" or an "after a certain length of time" kind of deal and were simply assuming that everyone would immediately go to the hotel as soon as it's unlocked I just happened to procrastinate a bit and do some stat grinding running out the clock so to speak.
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given what's said when you find the pic of yer sister on yer computer it seems like a good possibility
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Is there more content planned for the woman in the "Maid with two friends" extra? Or is she just random side content?
I think it would be a shame to tease us with her beautiful bounty and not get to meet her at all. I know for a fact that there's a few titfuck scenes out there you could probably use.
Is there more content planned for the woman in the "Maid with two friends" extra? Or is she just random side content?
I think it would be a shame to tease us with her beautiful bounty
and not get to meet her at all. I know for a fact that there's a few titfuck scenes out there you could probably use.
Unfortunately, that's just a random scene. I was gonna use that girl for a recurrent character at the very beginning, when I hadn't even started developing the game, but she doesn't have enough material. I don't totally rule out using her again, though.Poison_Adrian
Is there more content planned for the woman in the "Maid with two friends" extra? Or is she just random side content?
I think it would be a shame to tease us with her beautiful bounty
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it could be any porn site really given there are so many unless you mean actual production origin sources in which case I can only speak for the video he used to make the second scene with Leah the Library girl (cuz i have it in my personal collection myself lol) which i believe was made by TeamSkeet or Mofos several years ago tho I'm 99% sure it was TS
It'll take longer than usual due to my schedule, so I'd expect it by the middle of next month, probably.
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Hey, I see Lexi Lore being on the cover of the game, but I'm not able to find her, is it normal ? Also, I assume Kat is only a "future content" for now ? Oh, and as part of my feedback :
- It's a bit boring that you can't just go back to a location to spend time with the girl (only a bit able when you go back on Strength/Intel zones).
- The Charm icon is too hidden (red icon over orange background/map), it took me a bit before seeing it.
- You can never ask Leah a blowjob on her first sex scene (only able through replay) because you can't level up in Intel before you fuck her this time.
- I did two plays, on my second I found a bbw waitress on the hotel that I couldn't find (due to some choice) in my 1st play. That's a bit annoying to "lose" opportunities to encounter girls.
- The fact that the game softlocks when you complete all quests is horrible. During my 2nd play, I never went to check Kat on the PC and the game was locking before.
- Some issues about the "New" icons that sometimes are over the "ZzZz" icons
- A lot of issues with the hunger system (lack of efficiency, RNG, hunger totally disappearing at some point)
- Also, during my second playthrough, I went to take the virginity of hope, but I thought, "later, this one's last". And due to the "softlock", I wasn't able to go see her again, and her scene wasn't available to replay.
- I don't know if this is intended but, you always get to fuck Rachel after meeting Aaliyah.
- Adding the star full name on their individual pages could be great for us to check them later (Want to find Rachel, Hope and Leah now)
TLDR : Don't softlock your game at some point or this will frustrate the players. Allow to go back to some places/events missed. The game starts great, but quickly looks like an empty shell because of the lack of content while waiting to earn cash for car upgrades.
Other than that, your game is great. I'm happy to still see "Real Porn" games on Ren'Py.
- It's a bit boring that you can't just go back to a location to spend time with the girl (only a bit able when you go back on Strength/Intel zones).
- The Charm icon is too hidden (red icon over orange background/map), it took me a bit before seeing it.
- You can never ask Leah a blowjob on her first sex scene (only able through replay) because you can't level up in Intel before you fuck her this time.
- I did two plays, on my second I found a bbw waitress on the hotel that I couldn't find (due to some choice) in my 1st play. That's a bit annoying to "lose" opportunities to encounter girls.
- The fact that the game softlocks when you complete all quests is horrible. During my 2nd play, I never went to check Kat on the PC and the game was locking before.
- Some issues about the "New" icons that sometimes are over the "ZzZz" icons
- A lot of issues with the hunger system (lack of efficiency, RNG, hunger totally disappearing at some point)
- Also, during my second playthrough, I went to take the virginity of hope, but I thought, "later, this one's last". And due to the "softlock", I wasn't able to go see her again, and her scene wasn't available to replay.
- I don't know if this is intended but, you always get to fuck Rachel after meeting Aaliyah.
- Adding the star full name on their individual pages could be great for us to check them later (Want to find Rachel, Hope and Leah now)
TLDR : Don't softlock your game at some point or this will frustrate the players. Allow to go back to some places/events missed. The game starts great, but quickly looks like an empty shell because of the lack of content while waiting to earn cash for car upgrades.
Other than that, your game is great. I'm happy to still see "Real Porn" games on Ren'Py.
Wow! I must say thank you so much for your feedback! These things really help me and encourage me, thanks!
So, one thing at a time:
- First of all, no: Lexi Lore is not in the game yet, but since you ask for her, let me tell you she will be in the next version of the game, i.e., v0.6 (which, by the way, I will release within the next two weeks!). And, coincidentally, so is Kat.
- It is boring that you can't get random events with the girls, I know. I'm not ruling out that in the future there will be more 'filler' events with each girl, but it'd mean a lot of work for me, since there will be 30 girls in the end, and each one would have to have at least three or four random events in order for it to be more or less realistic. So yeah, it'd be a hard work, but we'll see.
- I'll take into account the charm icon complaint.
- You need charmness in order to ask Leah a blowjob, not intel. In any case, you could still get enough intel by that time.
- Random events that you may miss are part of many video games (especially of the game replay value). There are more of them like the hotel one. In fact, as you may notice, you can refuse many lewd scenes with the girls if you by any chance don't like them. Depending on the girl and many other factors, you might miss all the scenes of a girl from a certain point on if you refuse her. Anyways, let me tell you there are very few scenes that you'll unintentionally miss.
- The game is called Clockwork Poison. That means there's a time element that wraps it up. The game softlocks due to two reasons: one, I don't want players to grind stats once they completed all the quests, and two, I don't want too many days to pass in a playthrough, since there are events (especially late game ones) that depend a lot on the days that have passed.
I admit I'm not managing it so well. At first I wanted to limit more the player movements implementing a deadline (for instance, making Aliyah tell the player the militia would attack the town in X days), but I didn't like it much, and now I don't rightly know what to do with that.
I always try to keep the game unlocked until the player completes ALL the tasks in the current version, but sometimes I miss some of them. In any case, whatever scene you couldn't play will always be available for your game save in the next version of the game.
- Fixed the ZzZ thing. Thanks for telling me!
- Every thing I hear about the hunger system makes me like it less. I don't know what to do with that either, haha!
- Again, I use flags while coding in order to activate or deactivate events, but sometimes I miss some of them. I'm sorry for that and I'm seriously considering stopping softlocking the game after the end of each version.
- It is intended. You never know the location of Kelly and Rachel's home until you get your first car improvement. For that, you have to meet Kelly, and, in order to meet Kelly, you have to meet Aliyah for the first time and have a car accident on your way from the police station.
- Currently, I have a feature for my patrons (
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) to let them know the name of each model on the game. I'm not sure if I want to spray the word about the real name of the models, because of copyright reasons. In any case, I won't display their name on their in-game individual pages, as it's not part of the game at all, and it would just be a cooler.Regarding your final conclusion, maybe I'll add more filler events at some point, but it's also true that, as new versions are released, those empty times when you have nothing to do will be less and less frequent.
Either way, I really appreciate your feedback, it helps me a lot. Thank you very much, really!
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Nice ! To be honest, it was her that gave me interest into your game in first place ^^
Ok, I was just frustrated not being able to "collect all" in one run, like a perfect run. I mean, if you're going someday to do a walkthrough step by step for players to "see everything", then you'll need to have a clear way where you can get them all in one run.
To give you an example, I played a game (Summer with Mom and Sis - RPGMaker) that had a time goal (60 days, due to summer), and you could end the game without unlocking everything, but that was part of the game. Yet, there was a way (not that easy, but not that hard too) to complete the game with everything done in one play (which had a special ending for it by the way). This is why I assume that blocking the player from getting access to scenes due to choices is great, only if there's a way to achieve them all in one run.
As said above, the idea of having a time limit would be correct, if you're able to complete it all (or at least
I don't know for everyone playing a game like this, but usually, when I reach the end of a game, I max my stats to try and complete everything. But if it seems that I went too far when a new update releases, then I try to do it another way. Imagine farming money during an early release, and then once the game has a new update, you already have enough to buy new items that you should normally take time to have. In this case, I usually start another save, or reload a previous checkpoint close to the previous end of the last update.
But if you think you would risk too much with this system, softlocking it might not be the best way to do. If there's something I've learned in Game Design, it's that you have to work on your data until it's perfectly balanced "as all things should be". (r/unexpectedthanos) So you might need to reestablish how you want your game to work, what are its limits, and what are the goals. An example of that : In Skyrim, the first level come pretty fast, but to achieve lvl 81 which was the highest lvl prior to U1.9, you had to max out every single skill. Once U1.9 was out, there was no longer max level, instead, you could just grind skills to get to the level you wanted, but the ennemies, quests, rewards, etc... scaled on your level (considering you'll not reach lvl 500 so easily too). And there was an "algorithm" behind each new level, based on the level of the skill you improved (eg Archery lvl 60 gets you 60 exp towards your generic lvl) and behind each level (eg You need 650 exp to increase from lv 100 to 101 instead of 10 from lvl 1 to 2). It's up to your choices to design how you want your game to be.
If I can say something, you want the game to have a certain duration, and the stats not to be maxed out before a new release. Why not join both ? Once a certain time is spent, you could just make it harder to progress towards something. In your case, it would require 2 sessions of Library to get 1 point after you spent 20 days in the game for example.
Yeah, but what I meant here is that it's forced to have sex with Kelly after having the session with Aaliyah where you can fuck her too. I don't know if it's RNG or forced, but both times it happened this way. And that might be only me, but the idea that your character has sex with a person, and then has sex with another one, just a few time after, is confusing me. In real life, you wouldn't be able to fuck two girls one after the other with such "creativity" and "efficiency" as in those scenes without being tired or litteraly "empty". It might only be my point of view though ^^
Great idea, I didn't knew that you had it this way. This is a good way to attract people there ^^
I've already closed the new version two days ago and let's say I've come up with a solution for the softlocking thing. What I did is to simply let the player keep exploring and going everywhere BUT they can't earn money nor grind stats in that game version anymore. Let's see how people like the system. I think it's better this way, to be honest.
If I understand you correctly, yes, the player is forced to have sex with Kelly and yes, now that you point it out, I agree with you: it's not realistic that you fuck two different woman in like one hour... Anyway, I don't think I'll end up changing this event, among other things, because, to be honest, it's not so realistic that 30 women like you and are willing to fuck you at the same time and in the same town, either. So let's pretend the MC has a lot of stamina, haha!
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I think that's a great idea you have there, it will be fairer towards the gamers while waiting for the next update.
Oh, it's not realistic that some guy can fuck 30 women in less than a month in the same city ? Then I have an incredible life haha ! Seriously, you're right, MC is exceptional right here ^^ (but I'm pretty sure that it would still be normal to bang that much chicks in a city where you're the last male alive ! Otherwise, the strap-on industry would explode so much !)
Clockwork Poison has been updated to v0.6!
It's been a long time since the release of the v0.5,but that's because this is a quite big update! In this update you will find a huge plot progression, among many other cool things like four new girls, many more locations, new scenes with video instead of images and the longed-for Internet, which allows the player to contact her family and friends!
You can find a list of all the changes in the changelog in the first post, as well as the download links.
Also, I've got a favor to ask you: once you complete the content of this version, I'd apreciate if you could go to
Thank you!
It's been a long time since the release of the v0.5,but that's because this is a quite big update! In this update you will find a huge plot progression, among many other cool things like four new girls, many more locations, new scenes with video instead of images and the longed-for Internet, which allows the player to contact her family and friends!
You can find a list of all the changes in the changelog in the first post, as well as the download links.
Also, I've got a favor to ask you: once you complete the content of this version, I'd apreciate if you could go to
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and fill the form that you'll find about your experience in Clockwork Poison. It'll only take you a few minutes and it'll help me a lot to improve the game. Thank you!