After i played like 5hrs, i must say this game is great.
But have some problems:
This game has over 3 types mode, so we have brothel/free characters story/ some detective game?/. All of them are great, the dev handle them well. But i will say it cannot last long. Because when you keep adding things and ideas in the game, it will become bigger, and the bug will be countless and complicated. And, it's very hard to make a walkthough to cover all the events.
After the dev do a hard work and show us new update, someone will miss a lot of things if he doesn't follow the right move. Then there will be many many questions in the threads "how can i get this?/why i can't trigger that....." and etc.
I just give some my thoughts.
First dev can make the main path clear: angel or demon, good or corrupt. If you say i just want the slut world, then delete the bullshit "good teacher" stats, those are useless.
The note can be a "magic book with a note" ,MC can get a white/dark book from simple story, the book record the magic and the main path tip, so we can know if we finish the story or not.
A replay room is important, not for us , but for the dev. Because you can show the player how many works you do and tell them to find out all the stuff, then stop them repeat the questions in the threads. If you get time, you can add the trigger things below the replay pictures.
Side lines should be included in the statistics. You can refer to the game "Holiday Islands". This will help us to know how much we find out and which part we haven't play. If you think this will take you a lot, you can just add the tip tag, to tell players "which line can trigger this girl's more things".
I can feel the ambition from the dev, but i have to suggest you focus on 1 or 2 parts first. Accumulate enough popularity and start customized services, it can help you.
There are some games i just played. And i think you should try.
Heartproblems
MonsterCollegeThe Monster College
MilfyDay
Steps Of Debauchery
Breeze Of Passion
And some good games i played before:
Adventures Of Willy D
V.I.R.T.U.E.S
Void's calling
katie's corruption
Reunion
deliverance
Something Unlimited
I'm not saying that those game are better than yours, i just say those can give you some inspirations for story structure and character shaping.
If you want to focus on the corruption path, the changes in personality and behavior and dialogue are very important, and i think you should put some energy on it, right now i can't see that (maybe it because the story is just begin).
So that's all i want to say, hope you get better and better, but why i get two nun pics in the note? It's weird
I played the nun and the lilith line twice, and i don't know why.