VN HTML Completed College Drop Out [v1.0] [Dtrain327]

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Overview:
You play as a college drop out who finds himself somewhat lost in his life after failing to make it through school. But life isn't all bad when you're a young and hung guy in this town! Go on a sex filled adventure while you try to figure things out, learning new things about old friends and even more about your family too.​

Thread Updated: 2020-05-25
Release Date: 2020-05-25
Developer: Dtrain327 F95zone
Censored: No
Version: 1.0
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac
Language: English
Other Games: Lewd Paradise
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[KingWeWuz]

I'm a simple man. I see download I click big boobs.

 

[umwelt]

321kb download size? Guess there's not alot of content yet

 

[TeamHentaiX]

nice upload, gonna check it out

 

[Paprika]

Incest with big butts, gotta download this!

 

[KingWeWuz]

I gotta give you credit: your writing isn't bad, just nothing too far above what the standard for porn is.

The family stance on sexuality is a bit too normal. Part of the erotica of incest is the whole taboo approach, but reading all the sultry looks and attitude the mom and sis have it's almost boring. Their approach to the subject is almost as shameless as it is casual.



Another issue is referring to the main character as "you" and occasionally switching it to "him." Is this some weird translation issue? It's extremely off-putting.

I assumed being called "dork" by the sis set the standard for this guy as a desperate virgin but based on the party scene he has waaaaaay too much game.

Still, keep going! Don't give up on something you're passionate about!

 

[raulz0r]

I will keep this on my watch list, will play it after a few updates come out.

 

[Dtrain327]

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I gotta give you credit: your writing isn't bad, just nothing too far above what the standard for porn is.

The family stance on sexuality is a bit too normal. Part of the erotica of incest is the whole taboo approach, but reading all the sultry looks and attitude the mom and sis have it's almost boring. Their approach to the subject is almost as shameless as it is casual.

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Another issue is referring to the main character as "you" and occasionally switching it to "him." Is this some weird translation issue? It's extremely off-putting.

I assumed being called "dork" by the sis set the standard for this guy as a desperate virgin but based on the party scene he has waaaaaay too much game.

Still, keep going! Don't give up on something you're passionate about!

Appreciate the feedback, the whole you/him stuff is just a pure fuck up on my part so I'll get that fixed for the next update! I figure the dork thing was more so just something his sister calls him all the time even back when they were kids. And in-terms of the incest angle, it only really scratched the surface in this first version so I wouldn't read too much into that yet without more proper fleshing out of characters.

 

[RJP]

That big ass on the right almost make me download, you gonna need more content.

 

[MC's Hammer]

Can only be so critical of a 0.1.. but I'm an asshole so here we go.

+ Actual attempt at crafting a story that isn't a beginning-to-end grammatical clusterfuck.
+ A lot of WIP walls, but it seems like the plan is to offer a lot of options for varying content. Multiple playthroughs!?
+ I don't have to wear my sisters panties to the party.
+ I didn't wake up with tits.
+ MC is allegedly a dork.

- Sister is immediately hungry for Biggus Dickus.
- You 100% completion your friends immediately.
- Scenes with your friends feature different male models, locations, and worn accessories. Just sort of takes away from the immersion of the story. Slow down the progression of relationships.
- MC isn't actually a dork. He's a stud with a horse hammer.

Inspiring.. and only 300kb so worth a quick download and playthrough.

 

[Dtrain327]

what's the name of the actress? the one with a big ass

Jada Stevens

 

[Dtrain327]

Can only be so critical of a 0.1.. but I'm an asshole so here we go.

+ Actual attempt at crafting a story that isn't a beginning-to-end grammatical clusterfuck
+ A lot of WIP walls, but it seems like the plan is to offer a lot of options for varying content. Multiple playthroughs!?
+ I don't have to wear my sisters panties to the party
+ I didn't wake up with tits
+ MC is a dork

- Sister is immediately hungry for Biggus Dickus
- You 100% completion your friends immediately.
- Scenes with your friends feature different male models, locations, and worn accessories. Just sort of takes away from the immersion of the story. Slow down the progression of relationships.
- MC isn't actually a dork. He's a stud with a horse hammer.

Inspiring.. and only 300kb so worth a quick download and playthrough.

Appreciate the feedback! This is literally my first attempt at any sort of game so there's tons of room for improvement, I'll take this all into consideration.

 

[MC's Hammer]

Appreciate the feedback! This is literally my first attempt at any sort of game so there's tons of room for improvement, I'll take this all into consideration.

Not bad by any means. Like I said I hate to be critical as it's so early. This certainly isn't lazy work. Good job and good luck going forwards!

 

[NeevAsteria]

Ah, a rare specimen spotted in this site. A HTML game with a male protag that doesn't involve sissification

Edit: Tried it out, was good enough for a 0.1 release. I'd still recommend having the image/gifs/videos inside the main download, cause for some reason media files aren't loading fast enough for me from wherever its getting it from.

 

[Hercule_Poirot]

Hopefully, the pace will be slower in future updates and there will be more to the story than what's already present, otherwise the story might end quite abruptly. It was nice for a 0.1.

 

[deadrabbit]

Oh I'll be watching this one. Great job so far!

 

[DarkKingRen]

Looks good

 

[TeamHentaiX]

after playing, this game is lovely <3

 

[MisterAnon04]

I was curious about how the images were handled with so small a filesize, and I saw they were being pulled from various websites. You might just want to add this game needs an internet connection, and also provide an offline version so people don't need to be connected to see the images.
Edit: I also noticed that on pages with multiple .gif's, they can take a while to load, and will stutter until fully loaded. This might be less of an issue with a fast connection, but it was one with mine.
Edit 2: Since people are still liking this, I feel I should update on the most recent state (0.3b) of the game. The images are now included in the download, so the game no longer requires an internet connection and the images no longer stutter.

 

[kkai]

Alternately, you could still keep the images and HTML in separate downloads so you can more easily upload new versions of the HTML while the image pack is updated less frequently. But, for me, the game being 100% offline is a must. I was going to try this out and give input (since I like the premise and what I see here), but requiring online is a deal breaker for me.