VN HTML Completed College Drop Out [v1.0] [Dtrain327]

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Dtrain327

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May 23, 2018
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kkai said:
Yup this is indeed very much up my alley. Nice work Dtrain327! Obviously it's early days, though perhaps that's just my hoping this is intended as a grand endeavor, but I like where you're going. I'd just like to give a little constructive criticism.

1) I'm hoping you add a save system. Even with the limited content right now, it's tedious to use UNDO to find the different paths. Some people enjoy starting a game from the start over and over to try different paths. I do not. If you do add one (such as using the save system in sugarcube), please also consider enabling the ability to save to file. I find save systems that rely on browser local storage to be a pain and unreliable.

2) There are currently a few typos, grammar and punctuation errors. But nothing too severe. There are also a few bad URLs to images.

3) I'd also suggest that the paths dovetail back together periodically (for example, after the party/mom time things sync up again before paths diverge again) so as to aim more for a whole lot of content on any one playthrough rather than a lot of varied permanently branched content on repeated playthroughs. I think this is easier for development and I find it preferable as well. This is particularly subjective, of course.

4) If there is a way to get the non-looping videos to hold playing until scrolled fully into view, that'd be great. (NOTE: That should be mentally voiced as Bill Lumbergh.)

5) Again, assuming you intend to have a decently weighty game (which I very much am hoping), a long term goal of tracking viewed scenes so people know what they've missed would be nice.

6) Scene and actress selection is great. I know some people commented on it being jarring having the male actor change, but (a) that's just life with real porn games and (b) I like that you get to cum like a firehose several times in a few minutes. It bolsters that whole wonder-cock super-virility thing you're aiming for.

That's all that's coming to mind right now. Thanks for the effort so far!
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Appreciate the feedback, I'm working on the save system for the next update. In terms of fixing the videos starting before you scroll, I'd have to look into it to figure that out. But thanks for the support so far
 
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Dtrain327

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ADIDAS said:
Some images are broken and not displaying properly in the game and when you get to the party a lot of the videos are way to big and are cut off by the sides of the screen.
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snad said:
dina 6,stacy3,stacy1,images dont work on some pages,not sure if its the image itself,or if it is suppose to be another image in its place
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I'll look into this, I didn't notice it when I was testing it but perhaps it's a bug of some kind. Thanks for letting me know!
 
BoohooBitch

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Not saying content is less, its 0.2 afterall , but almost 900 MB for just this much is a lot. This needs to be compressed or downgraded a lot.
 
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Also, just my opinion but I would prefer moving female images more over male dicks. The dick videos are wierding me out :(
 
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Also also , some images paths are wrong I think.they are not showing up. The "images/" is missing from the start of the path for them.
 
MonteChristo

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Some image links are missing the "/images" part so the pics do not load. For example on the page at the party (when the guy is dressed with the sister's help and after he said happy bday to Maria). The page starts with:

"The party is pretty busy, plenty of people drinking, dancing and talking all across the bottom floor of the place. You catch eyes with Stacy and she smiles at you, waving for you to come closer. "

and ends with:

"You look her over right back and smile, "Thanks, but I think you've got me beat by a longshot" you reply. She giggled and gave you a playful shove, "I'm gonna grab another drink, wanna come with?" she asked you."

Both images are broken.
 
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Dtrain327

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May 23, 2018
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MonteChristo said:
Some image links are missing the "/images" part so the pics do not load. For example on the page at the party (when the guy is dressed with the sister's help and after he said happy bday to Maria). The page starts with:

"The party is pretty busy, plenty of people drinking, dancing and talking all across the bottom floor of the place. You catch eyes with Stacy and she smiles at you, waving for you to come closer. "

and ends with:

"You look her over right back and smile, "Thanks, but I think you've got me beat by a longshot" you reply. She giggled and gave you a playful shove, "I'm gonna grab another drink, wanna come with?" she asked you."

Both images are broken.
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This will be fixed in the next update!
 
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linklongatti

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Jan 9, 2019
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have no way to save game progress? It's still at the beginning so there's no way to start all over again ... it will be more complicated in the future ..
 
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Sg2211

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Hey Dtrain I Love Jayden Jayelmes a lot so love this game.. Too bad not many people use her vids.. She has so many different and amazing vids and pics.. I hope u use the best of them and more of Lisa Ann too..
 
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